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damnshame — just like yesterday.
Published: 2004-02-23 00:04:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 159; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 10
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Description i missed you today
just like yesterday

i missed your stupid grin
and the laughter in your eyes
the feel and smell of your skin
i promised i wouldn't cry

i missed you today
just like yesderday

i missed the strength of your hands
holding onto mine
walking over the sand
just wishing for more time

i missed you today
just like yesterday

i missed you playing
plucking guitar strings
no one believed me saying
that you could really sing

i missed you today
just like yesterday

the hardest words to say
you said and said them tough
you walked away that day
i'm guess i'm not enough

i missed you today
just like yesterday.
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Comments: 10

loseriffic [2004-02-23 02:54:27 +0000 UTC]

lenna, this is by far the best poem you have written. me loves it! i agree with the pyro person... maybe the last stanza should have been something different... but it's still very VERY nice yey!

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damnshame In reply to loseriffic [2004-02-23 02:55:46 +0000 UTC]

gracias my pet

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fatstrat06 [2004-02-23 02:20:21 +0000 UTC]

Lenna...believe me...i know you're hurting, but things will turn around for you. Maybe that's a cliche, but i mean it. Keep your head up.

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damnshame In reply to fatstrat06 [2004-02-23 02:53:19 +0000 UTC]

i know. its just hard sometimes.

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LostPyroKitten [2004-02-23 00:12:19 +0000 UTC]

I love how you repeated it over and over,.. But I think that the last refrain (refrain?) didn't need to be there.. The ending was chilling with "I guess I'm not enough" ^_^ not I'm.. I, I believe. Beautiful title and keep up the beautiful wording. Great discription, ringing in my ear still.. Love to read things outloud!

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damnshame In reply to LostPyroKitten [2004-02-23 00:15:10 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the suggestions

later on i'll probably go back and edit, i just need to be away from it for a while so i can see it again with fresh eyes, ya know?

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LostPyroKitten In reply to damnshame [2004-02-23 00:18:04 +0000 UTC]

mmm I understand, but poems are captured emotions. To look back on them and go back to the time you wrote them can be more painful then you thought. To think those thoughts again can be more painful then you remember

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ForteGospel [2004-02-23 00:10:18 +0000 UTC]

Relationship hell...don't worry about it the supreme being of whatever faith you have will take care of it....or if you an antheist then fate will take care of you. Just be sincere and true to you emotions.

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damnshame In reply to ForteGospel [2004-02-23 00:17:24 +0000 UTC]

thanks aaron

and i know i'll live...it just stings now, ya know?

i actually went to church today (had to get out of the house)..and pastor jeff said something to the effect of "humans were not meant to be alone".

sure seems like it sometimes though huh?

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ForteGospel In reply to damnshame [2004-02-23 00:23:17 +0000 UTC]

Yes siree bob it do Jed! Pastors scare me and not just the Catolic ones.

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