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DamselinDepression — Autumn October in: Liars Paradox

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Published: 2018-05-12 23:06:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 8140; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 10
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Two Typhlosion stood in a dimly lit room, watching through a soundproof window with cold, callous demeanor as their daughter, their own flesh and blood, choked and gasped for air. Her mouth was filled with an expanding rubber bulb, her nose was plugged, and a tight leathery muzzle with a strong adhesive interior was strapped around her snout; it was airtight. Typically, this was a cruel execution method reserved for deranged criminals. Christina, the quilava girl in the chair, was but an angsty teen with a rebellious streak. She stared back at her parents, struggling and thrashing in the chair they'd secured her to with tight leather belts, shaking her head in vain to escape the muzzle of death that cut off her life-giving oxygen. black, makeup-stained tears flowed down her cheeks liberally. Her dad was an extremist nut to be sure, but would her parents really have her executed? She tried to plea for mercy, to apologize and promise to be good; whether she meant to keep to that was dubious but death was starring her in the face. But even if the window weren't soundproof, she could only make meager squeaks audible to only her with her air passages glued so firmly.

From the shadows behind her parents spoke a calm, sinister Gliscore in a labcoat with a pair of slightly cracked glasses, "Worry not, Mr. and Mrs. June. Without fail, all it takes is a brush with death to scare the rebellion out of girls like Autumn. She'll wiggle around and cry her eyes bloodshot until she passes out, we'll undo that muzzle and revive her, and she'll be a changed girl. You'll never have to worry about her behavior again." He grinned a sickening, lizardly grin.

The male Typhlosion responded rather seriously, "All that is well and good, Dr. Nightshade...but I would prefer if you spoke of Christina by her real name, not that silly title she gave herself..." that's all he had to say on the matter, crossing his arms as he watched Autumn squirm with a discontent frown.

Minutes later, Autumn's chest was on fire and her eyes were out of tears, opening tiredly to look at the Gliscore known as Dr. Nightshade as he entered the room. "Good evening, Ms. October. Good to see you've stopped struggling so much. You'll only burn through your air faster that way. It seems you have quite the lung capacity, have you contemplated joining the swim team? Guess it's too late for that now." The doctor laughed a sickly cracked cackle, sending a shiver down Autumns spine as she looked from the doctor, to her mother, to her father. "Your parents have decided to throw your life away, tragic really. Now they think they'll be getting you back, but they knew the risks. They are willing to gamble you away, and I'm a not a fair player. Once you pass unconscious we'll take you out of the room, numb those vocal chords of yours and tell your parents there were complications with your revival. You'll be checked into my hospital permanently under a fake name, and your parents will think you are dead. Now now, Autumn, stop all that wiggling, you don't want to hurt yourself. We'll take good care of you Ms. October, so just relax and let darkness take you." the doctor gently petted Autumn's hair, rhythmically, repetitively. Now she was struggling furiously, chewing into the mouthfilling bulb and squeaking and whimpering as loud as she could; it was just barely audible from right next to her, and though she tried with all her will to fight it the light was fading fast; she was slipping.

But who had Dr. Nightshade lied to, Autumn or her parents? Only he knew, behind that aweful grin.

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This piece featuring Unownace 's character Autumn the quilava, and the story debut of my own sinister gliscore Dr. Lloyd Nightshade, took quite a long time to finish and hopefully marks the death of my art block. big credit to Shadowultd who gave me advice and helped me figure out to pose a quilava, who was a pain in the arse to make somewhat anthro but I think I did ok. Hope everyone likes it!

side note: its funny how light the darkest possible shade out of a standard #2 pencil looks next to a not particularly heavy shade of #5 pencil

edit: i fixed the typos in the story and added afew small details
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Comments: 36

TurnedWhyte [2019-09-16 21:10:08 +0000 UTC]

Hey, if it works, it works.

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DamselinDepression In reply to TurnedWhyte [2019-09-16 21:50:06 +0000 UTC]

But does it work or is it just a scam?

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TurnedWhyte In reply to DamselinDepression [2019-09-16 22:39:41 +0000 UTC]

I could see it working. Or, you know, drive a bunch of teens completely insane. Either ways, it'd be fun to watch.

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DamselinDepression In reply to TurnedWhyte [2019-09-16 23:36:43 +0000 UTC]

The 'good' Dr. Nightshade is betting on the latter outcome.

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TurnedWhyte In reply to DamselinDepression [2019-09-17 03:06:39 +0000 UTC]

Somehow, I figured that.

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DamselinDepression In reply to TurnedWhyte [2019-09-17 20:00:22 +0000 UTC]

But don't worry, theyxll be nice and comfy and super safe in the nightshade asylum

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Cosmic-Library [2018-11-29 20:45:41 +0000 UTC]

This is super friggin cute, man! And I love the story here.
Lovely, lovely work <3

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DamselinDepression In reply to Cosmic-Library [2018-12-06 20:48:17 +0000 UTC]

Awe thanks man, that means alot

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Cosmic-Library In reply to DamselinDepression [2018-12-07 14:41:20 +0000 UTC]

Saw your status mentioning Discord a while back. Lemme know if you ever get it. I'd be happy to add ya. ;3

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Shadowultd [2018-05-13 13:43:59 +0000 UTC]

NIce one. It turned out pretty well.

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DamselinDepression In reply to Shadowultd [2018-05-14 19:32:51 +0000 UTC]

thanks, that's largely your fault

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Shadowultd In reply to DamselinDepression [2018-05-14 22:26:46 +0000 UTC]

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AuraDragon448 [2018-05-13 03:41:31 +0000 UTC]

My Shiny female Zoroark OC, Mirage, was skulking around, remaining undetected thanks to her power of illusions. She had snuck out of the building while invisible "What a cruel thing to do to your daughter. I gotta let everyone else know about this" The Zoroark said as she headed back to base to report back to her teammates and leader.

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Unownace [2018-05-12 23:17:10 +0000 UTC]

It's perfect. >:3 Aside from a few minor typos of course. XD

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DamselinDepression In reply to Unownace [2018-05-12 23:19:33 +0000 UTC]

yeah i'll fix those later. did you like the story?

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Unownace In reply to DamselinDepression [2018-05-12 23:21:14 +0000 UTC]

Yes, like I said, it was perfect. >:3

I can probably actually fix all those typos for you right now and note you the edited version, if you like.

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DamselinDepression In reply to Unownace [2018-05-12 23:24:53 +0000 UTC]

just note me all the typos you see incase i miss any, i'll fix them myself by hand.

any particular critique? what was your favorite part? did i do a good job writing in character?

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Unownace In reply to DamselinDepression [2018-05-12 23:36:40 +0000 UTC]

I guess the reason I can't think of much else to say about it is that the way you wrote is is EXACTLY the way I would have wrote it, down to almost every word. It's almost kinda freaky. Great minds think alike I guess. XD

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DamselinDepression In reply to Unownace [2018-05-12 23:43:24 +0000 UTC]

can't say I didn't do my homework on your characters, I was afraid I made autumn seem too soft but you seem content. how do you like the actual situation concept?

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Unownace In reply to DamselinDepression [2018-05-12 23:56:04 +0000 UTC]

Trying to explain why it's so good would kind of ruin why it's so good IMO. I'm just not very good at giving those kinds of critiques.

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DamselinDepression In reply to Unownace [2018-05-13 00:00:11 +0000 UTC]

awe, but i really like hearing that stuff it helps me keep going with art and improve

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Unownace In reply to DamselinDepression [2018-05-12 23:53:18 +0000 UTC]

Well Autumn is "soft" here because she's understandably terrified. I portrayed her similarly in my first story for her, "Autumn Leaves".

Oh, the "situation concept" is PERFECT. >:3

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DamselinDepression In reply to Unownace [2018-05-13 00:00:55 +0000 UTC]

heh thanks. final question, what's your take on the end? how would you continue it?

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Unownace In reply to DamselinDepression [2018-05-13 02:08:44 +0000 UTC]

How would I continue it? That depends on what type of ending I'd want for the sequel; happy or "kinky". If happy, I'd have her be rescued by her Mimikyu friend, Mik, or maybe Ace or another "badass/Liam Neeson-like" character, but they'd keep her identity changed so that her parents would still believe her to be dead and never bother her again. If the latter option...  The New Autumn
The New Autumn
Autumn opened her eyes. Seeing bright fluorescent lights glaring down at her from the ceiling, she blinked tiredly, memories of the previous night flooding back to her. The 'behavior correctional facility'. Being dropped off by her parents in one of those tacky dresses they forced her to wear and being escorted to her new 'room'. ...And being injected with something. Bastards must've sedated her.
She tried to sit up to stretch...only to find she was unable to. A quick glance down at herself revealed she was restrained to the bed with a ludicrous number of heavy-duty straps. Groaning irately, she trying to open her mouth to ask for someone to help get her unbuckled...but found her lips seemed to be sealed, too. In fact, feeling around with her tongue, it felt as though they'd been STITCHED shut.
"Mmmm! MMMMM!" Those assholes! What the hell did they do to her?! "MMMMRRRMMMMGMM!"
After several long moments of fruitless struggling, the Quilava began searching for anyt

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DamselinDepression In reply to Unownace [2018-05-13 02:32:06 +0000 UTC]

accidental prequal perhaps?

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Unownace In reply to DamselinDepression [2018-05-12 23:31:52 +0000 UTC]

Everything was perfect story-wise, and yes you did a good job with the characters. Honestly I don't know what else to comment about it. :3

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DamselinDepression In reply to Unownace [2018-05-12 23:37:29 +0000 UTC]

do you like how I anthropomorphised autumn in the pic?

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Unownace In reply to DamselinDepression [2018-05-12 23:51:05 +0000 UTC]

I do. I especially like how you drew her head. I myself struggle with drawing Quilava's head in the official art style, instead usually just making it a fluffy oval, like Pichu's. XD

The only critiques I can give are, one, you used looseleaf paper instead of blank white paper, and two, her forepaws are a little...wonky. It's okay though, it takes a lot of practice to draw paws well. What I do is I draw three overlapping ovals, the one in the center slightly larger than the other two, like this: 

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DamselinDepression In reply to Unownace [2018-05-12 23:59:34 +0000 UTC]

I don't like hands, and I couldn't really decide since this was an attempt at anthro weather she should have paws or hands. I settled with a lazy inbetween since they aren't the focus of the image. as for the paper thing, that's how i draw and its not likely to change soon, i don't draw aswell on blank white paper.

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Unownace In reply to DamselinDepression [2018-05-13 02:10:43 +0000 UTC]

I know, but you did ask. I suck at drawing hands, mostly because I'm such a hardcore furry that I just plain don't LIKE drawing them. XD I've gotten so much experience drawing paws though that I've nearly mastered them.

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DamselinDepression In reply to Unownace [2018-05-13 02:33:43 +0000 UTC]

well glad you like it.

dont suppose you could throw afew points my way for the trouble? *shakes empty tip jar*

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Unownace In reply to DamselinDepression [2018-05-13 02:47:13 +0000 UTC]

Right, yeah the points. XD How many you want? 20? 30?

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DamselinDepression In reply to Unownace [2018-05-13 02:56:22 +0000 UTC]

oh fuck i was expecting like 5! honestly, i work for tips, i'm totally content with this just being a free work out of the goodness in my heart.


30 or however many you're willing to part with would certainly be nice tho =3

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Unownace In reply to DamselinDepression [2018-05-13 03:55:57 +0000 UTC]

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Unownace In reply to DamselinDepression [2018-05-13 03:03:16 +0000 UTC]

Points paid. :3

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DamselinDepression In reply to Unownace [2018-05-14 09:32:09 +0000 UTC]

pleasure doing business with you

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