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A little work in progress sketch for Zakeido ‘s Working Equitation competition with my little 13hh baby!Related content
Comments: 13
PoisonSoldat [2018-01-22 22:30:14 +0000 UTC]
Mmmm yes c:
Can't wait to see how it'll turn out!
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Allicorn [2018-01-21 23:35:39 +0000 UTC]
Cool, I didn't know there was something called working equitation!
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CalyArt [2018-01-20 08:39:04 +0000 UTC]
oh lord that looks SO amazing!! *o* can't wait to see the finished work!! ;O;
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Dancing-Ponies In reply to CalyArt [2018-01-20 10:40:21 +0000 UTC]
Now I just have to find the time to finish it and make it all nice and pretty.
Thinking of doing livestreams while I do it just to get that extra bit of critique
Composition wise, what do you think could be changed here?
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CalyArt In reply to Dancing-Ponies [2018-01-20 11:00:47 +0000 UTC]
I'm pretty sure you will! and when you need an extra extention then i think zakeido will totally grand you that if you ask her :3
i think the background view is REALLY awesome, you can see so much of the surroundings and this makes a great general view! the only disadvantage that wonderful background has is that the focus isn't mainly on the horse, and that horse-rider pair can be overlooked very quick... now the question is how you can solve that...the only thing you can make is either put the background or the horse in focus, and that goes anlong with a detriment of the other part :/
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Dancing-Ponies In reply to CalyArt [2018-01-20 11:47:56 +0000 UTC]
I could possibly solve that with dramatic lighting
Thank you so much! I will definitely keep all of this in mind as I keep going
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iguana-rama [2018-01-19 16:41:54 +0000 UTC]
Even your loose sketches are gorgeous T-T Duno what you're talking about because the arena looks gorgeous! And the pose is super pretty. Can't wait to see how this changes
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Dancing-Ponies In reply to iguana-rama [2018-01-20 10:41:16 +0000 UTC]
I sort of like the pose but the whole thing looks off balance... ahhhh help
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iguana-rama In reply to Dancing-Ponies [2018-01-20 19:46:51 +0000 UTC]
Nooooo it looks awesome! Maybe less open space on the right? I dunno! I love it as is, cuz it's a great way to show off the building, but if you'd rather the focus be on horse and rider, maybe pull in a bit? That said, there's nothing wrong with some distance shots and building focus. Interiors are tough, so it's nice to see other people tackling them with finesse!
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iguana-rama In reply to Dancing-Ponies [2018-01-22 17:22:39 +0000 UTC]
So smexy now. The addition of the equipment on the right side really balances it out.
So smexy.
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KittycatNita [2018-01-19 16:36:08 +0000 UTC]
This looks fantastic so far! Can't wait to see the finished version
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Dancing-Ponies In reply to KittycatNita [2018-01-20 10:43:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! I can't wait either, to be honest
Do you have any tips? Things still look quite 'off'
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