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DancingApocolypse — Planned
Published: 2009-02-19 03:10:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 85; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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planning was something you never didi can't run fast enough, can't slow you down
i must be in a dream
a dream where you can't run away
from that monster chasing you
but no, i'm awake
i have to be
don't do this
you can't do this
i need to save him, his future, our future
screaming! so very loud!
he's leaving, in the most painful way possible!
cords tied tight
his breathing wavers
NO!
running up his street
bare feet pounding
don't bother to knock when i reach your door
i run up your stairs, not fast enough
crying so hard, tears flowing
open, not fast enough
i run to you
oh dear god rick
you hang there so weak
i scream your name, pull at the cords
your eyes so pale
your chest unbreathing
at the sound of my voice your eyes turn to me
your blue eyes.... barely living
i pull you down, cords too tight to release
i rest your head on my lap, we cry together
i know you're dead now, as you look at me
take me with you, i whisper
your hand in mind
and my hand in yours
our lives fade together
without a final goodbye
Comments: 2
This is very powerful (I hope it's not a true story...)
I find some of your word use to be cliche, like "crying so hard, tears flowing".. but then, it's a very straight-up method of speaking, so maybe that's what you were going for.
Well done either way 
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it's slightly true.
my boyfriend commited suicide, and this was a nightmare.
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