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Published: 2014-04-02 05:27:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 9766; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 17
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Todd continued to run down the hall and out the door, bidden by the same unknown force that had persuaded him to shear off Mary's bounteous red hair. He felt the pull to run a block away from the school, and ended up at a half-finished construction site.He could feel the hunger of the being that silently called him as he ran Mary's severed locks through his clenched hands. His feet fell softly on a patch of newly unearthed soil, and he spotted it: a deep hole, no more than a couple feet in diameter, a palpable darkness emanating from within it. He knew that whatever had brought him here dwelt down there. Well, he gleaned, not really in the hole, but beyond it somehow. As if there was some other world far away and yet right there in that spot. A portal, perhaps?
His thoughts were interrupted by a black, snakelike tendril emanating from the pit. His mind was invaded by a voice. It was hungry, desperate, and demanding.
"Bring it to me."
Todd moved closer, repulsed and frightened. The tendril wound itself around the mass of hair greedily, savoring it, and dragged it down into the black void. He stood frozen, rooted to the spot as a pulse of energy emanated from the pit and through his being. Whatever was down there had just grown more powerful, somehow. It spoke again.
"This is the right one. You have done well."
The tendril again emerged, strong and menacing. Before Todd could blink, it snatched him by the leg and pinned him in place. He began to panic. He did NOT want to go down into that blackness with whatever was waiting for him. The screeching, hissing voice returned. "Now, the question remains: are you of any further use to me? Or should I dispose of you now?" The tendril's grip tightened, pinching his leg.
"I can get you more!" Todd answered. "Please! Whatever you want!"
The tendril's grip relaxed a bit. "I am still weak. But I have the power to kill you as I will...unless you do one more thing for me."
Todd sensed this was his chance to save himself. "Yes! Yes! Just tell me! I'll do it..."
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Comments: 21
Ultimateportalmaster In reply to LimeTH [2014-04-03 03:05:49 +0000 UTC]
The puns begin but they don't ever end. XD
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DangerCurl In reply to Ultimateportalmaster [2014-04-03 03:46:00 +0000 UTC]
You guys crack me up.
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Ultimateportalmaster In reply to DangerCurl [2014-04-03 03:48:55 +0000 UTC]
That was probably not a pun at all but I'm just going to say that was excellent. XD
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Flipfartz998 [2014-04-02 16:03:55 +0000 UTC]
Story is getting even more interesting!Β Very happy to see how quickly you're moving with it too.Β Keep it going!!
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Ahumanstory [2014-04-02 13:28:22 +0000 UTC]
Kind of interesting develop of the Story. I am curios what lies down in the hole, now we need a plan to rescue mary's hair ? .... Anyone .... ?
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DangerCurl In reply to Ahumanstory [2014-04-03 01:50:36 +0000 UTC]
It'll be a tough one...
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Ahumanstory In reply to DangerCurl [2014-04-03 02:35:23 +0000 UTC]
Dark Soul teach me the toughter there are so greater the revour. And what could be a better one than Marys hair.
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Drawfail In reply to Ahumanstory [2014-04-03 20:15:01 +0000 UTC]
It really is a good game for teaching life lessons
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Ahumanstory In reply to Drawfail [2014-04-04 02:48:42 +0000 UTC]
Yes your right and it`s make so much fun.
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Ultimateportalmaster [2014-04-02 11:56:46 +0000 UTC]
Oh oh. Looks like we got floor mice again. XD
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Ultimateportalmaster In reply to DangerCurl [2014-04-03 03:05:26 +0000 UTC]
Like we need to call pest-control for this hair napping demon Thief! XD
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Drawfail [2014-04-02 10:28:52 +0000 UTC]
Interesting, the story gets split into two separate series now, hmm?
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DangerCurl In reply to Drawfail [2014-04-02 12:00:40 +0000 UTC]
More like mini-arcs or chapters. Once one is finished, I start the next one.
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Drawfail In reply to DangerCurl [2014-04-02 14:15:09 +0000 UTC]
so it's going to be a while before we get to see what becomes of mary? :]
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DangerCurl In reply to Drawfail [2014-04-03 01:47:54 +0000 UTC]
No, this one is super-short, then I'll get back to Mary and we'll meet some new girls as well!
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Drawfail In reply to DangerCurl [2014-04-03 20:18:31 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, i'm curious what else this demon wants todd to get him. Β It could just want more hair, but the way the demon phrased it makes it sound like it's after something else besides just hair.....the mystery deepens
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