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Description (EDIT: took out most of the godmod)
Sweet Susie:
Age:22
Height:5'7"
Prologue
After the tragedy of Neopolis. Susie's soul as grown more mature and thus her armor has gained a new form. In addition to its reboost from being in contact with its origin verse, the armor's power has increased from the determination of Susie to save the souls of Neopolis and to rekindle the fire.
Story
Susie was born into this world as an orphan as her mother died while giving birth to Triplets. Her father left Susie to the care of his brother who was a professional boxer at the time who married a secret agent. At a young age, Susie love to visit the local temple and work with the monks until she told her "parents" that she wanted to live like then. So she lived a monks life and practiced kungfu and hardbody training with them. Although, not a monk, Susie live like them and did what they did. When she was 12, a 14 year old boy, moved into the temple to continue his training, Susie and him where friends from the start. They soon fell in love as they spent nearly very day of their lives together. However, war soon brewed in the East and he went off to fight. He never returned. Susie became sad and loney. She took refugee in the Triple Gems (a buddhist term.) in order to forget about her lost love. She practiced kungfu in an attempt to toughen herself up. However, the more her body became powerful, her heart became weaker, she prayed to The Great and Compassionate Guan Yin and ask her for help. She told Susie to travel the world to find the path to enlightenmnet. Susie, became aware that people around her suffer as much as her and she forgot about her love and vowed to save humanity from suffering. Although very gentle in nature, Susie will not hesitate to fight for what she believes in. Susie treats humanity like her child, she allows mankind to make mistakes yet is there to save us, in a way, Susie is the manifestation of Humanity's will to survive and redem. Although exetremely mystic, Susie has many human attributes as well and possess the same fundamental flaws of human emotion. She has even taken a boyfriend who is Claudius . Susie also likes to surf
Through her travels she finds artifacts to help her solve the mystery of her destiny.
Connection To Adina the Pure
Adina is the name of a Celestian Priest from another universe in time. She was a prominent figure in Pura religious politics. In her universe, there is one religion, Pura, divided to 2 sects. When Adina died, she became a saintly figure and a symbol for tolerance and compassion. Susie is her reincarnated form within another universe. As a result from her canonized state within the other verse, Susie has the power to retrieve objects of power from her past universe to the current one
Susie's Fighting Style:
Susie uses a style that involves complete defence against all attacks. Susie uses her own Chi to create a temporary force field in the area of attack. When susie is in this defensive position, its almost impossible to break it with ordinary means. The only way to break the defense would be a constant energy attack. Complete defense also extends to mental defense. As a Buddhist, Susie trains to protect the mind from distracting thoughts and vile sugguestion rather cause by her or from an outside force via telepathy or genjitsu, illusion. Susie's faith in humanity, her friends, as well as the divine makes her a nearly impenetrable fortress.
Susie, like most martial arts masters, can predict an opponent's moves and this is why her defense is so strong so Her most obvious weakness is against a foe who is unpredictable.
When susie attacks, she attacks with a lot of power becuase she also uses Chi in her attacks. The attack range of her punchs, kicks etc. extend beyond her limbs becuase of this and have a spread out attack. The closer you are to her when she attacks the more it hurts you, like a shotgun effect.
Susie isn't all that fast movement wise but her attacks are more than four times faster than a snake's strike. (its possible according to National Geographic's Fight Science, Martial Artist can strike faster than a snake)

Susie rarely kills her opponents, she only makes them surrender.

The Armor:
The armor Susie wears was crafted by the ancients some millenia ago in another universe for the purpose of fighting in the various Purian wars. The armor allows the user to control his or her Chakara or Chi and protects him/her from most physical and energy attacks. The armor's power is drawn from the person's will, it can't be removed by conventional means. The armor is materialized from the past verse by Susie before a fight or wore already as perparation. The armor is a one-size-fits all meaning it matches the body of its summoner. The armor's power increases with spiritual development.
Explaination on Power Jewels:
The Technology of the Ancients created mystic power jewels which emit certain energies depending on the type that either increase or decrease a person's power both physically and/or spiritually (as the jewels where once used on criminals to weaken them) However, people with a strong will can be immune to the effects of the jewel depending on whether or not they accept the extra boost of power. Power Jewels are indestructible.(they can't be destoryed, only removed from the game, xD Magic the gathering joke)

An example of a power jewel is the jewel on Susie's helmet. The power Jewels energies can be controlled if the person in question is strong enough to will it so. (thats why susie can use it as a flashlight, so that means it can be a ranged weapon also)



As a past priestess of Celestia and a Sister of Liliac, Susie/Adina has many chats memorized. They process of reincarnation had destroyed her memories but her reintroduction with that world has sparked memories within her genes. Her chant of the compassion turns water into wine and does useless stuff like make pants grow because she has not yet masted the lines.
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Comments: 46

LoveJunkies [2008-05-30 18:27:26 +0000 UTC]

Great design of a character. I really like the helmet piece and the halberd (Because polearms are so cool) The helmet even has a bit of a Chinese feel to it, so I think that stands out with the western style armor. The red tasil/tail thing in the back I thought could show more, even when viewed from the front

It reminds me of Valkyrie from Valkyrie Profile though. Not sure if that was the intention, but maybe changing the shape or look of a few armor pieces could change that

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danielcherng In reply to LoveJunkies [2008-05-30 22:41:23 +0000 UTC]

she's suppose to look valkyrie-ish.

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The-Real-Mags-Satan [2008-05-29 16:12:00 +0000 UTC]

I think I'd end up doing using *AshleyLange 's tactic... armor removal! But sillyness aside, this is really kick-ass.

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kamethehermit [2008-05-14 15:04:13 +0000 UTC]

nice armor!

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danielcherng In reply to kamethehermit [2008-05-14 19:33:34 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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ronaldlocke [2008-05-09 13:37:02 +0000 UTC]

Dude.. u got better.. good job!

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danielcherng In reply to ronaldlocke [2008-05-09 14:00:17 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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MaxkofValiant [2008-05-09 08:50:03 +0000 UTC]

Too...long....@_@

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danielcherng In reply to MaxkofValiant [2008-05-09 14:00:25 +0000 UTC]

lol XD

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Zeela12 [2008-05-09 02:00:13 +0000 UTC]

With that kind of artstyle I think you should go find a job for a game or something and go draw concept art, that would be awesome.

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danielcherng In reply to Zeela12 [2008-05-09 03:03:25 +0000 UTC]

yeah

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Petitoe [2008-05-08 21:24:19 +0000 UTC]

Dear goodness, she has more Armour. I wonder how she moves in it. -pretends to be susie-

well anyways, I can tell you've improved! Love how this was colored e.e also try to add a link to Claudius so ppl know who he is. 8^O

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danielcherng In reply to Petitoe [2008-05-09 01:25:43 +0000 UTC]

thanks and ok

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Mafagafos [2008-05-08 16:08:39 +0000 UTC]

Let me say this ._____.
OMFG for design, coloring, shading and description!
Loved her armor! Color combination is really eye catching ^^ . Great work Drawing plus descriptions must have taken you some time ! o-o

see ya...

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danielcherng In reply to Mafagafos [2008-05-08 20:43:44 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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guabobe [2008-05-08 12:15:04 +0000 UTC]

Lord... That armor must be cumbersome. you still SDL-ing mate?

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danielcherng In reply to guabobe [2008-05-08 14:01:45 +0000 UTC]

i haven't had a duel in ages

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guabobe In reply to danielcherng [2008-05-09 04:29:32 +0000 UTC]

ditto. my chara needs an overhaul design-wise.

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danielcherng In reply to guabobe [2008-05-09 05:23:27 +0000 UTC]

lol

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neji-hinata [2008-05-08 04:03:05 +0000 UTC]

omg, it's lovely.

goodluck on the competition!

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danielcherng In reply to neji-hinata [2008-05-08 05:05:08 +0000 UTC]

sknat XD

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shirabara [2008-05-08 00:50:53 +0000 UTC]

you have so many ref sheets of her! which one is the final??

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danielcherng In reply to shirabara [2008-05-08 00:57:20 +0000 UTC]

never have a final!

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shirabara In reply to danielcherng [2008-05-08 01:16:51 +0000 UTC]

you gotta be kidding me....

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danielcherng In reply to shirabara [2008-05-08 01:20:07 +0000 UTC]

nope

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shirabara In reply to danielcherng [2008-05-08 02:27:03 +0000 UTC]

i usually have a final for everything unless my art spontaneously evolves

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danielcherng In reply to shirabara [2008-05-08 03:32:19 +0000 UTC]

my art spontaneously evolves

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shirabara In reply to danielcherng [2008-05-08 03:41:49 +0000 UTC]

every week?

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Mad-Plot-Bunny [2008-05-08 00:07:44 +0000 UTC]

The helment looks kinda werid with the white stuff but none the less. I love it; Good luck Susie.

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InsanityAndSugar [2008-05-07 21:10:09 +0000 UTC]

It looks awesome... but really complex. I'll try reading the description. I can tell you've put a lot of thought into that.

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danielcherng In reply to InsanityAndSugar [2008-05-07 22:32:31 +0000 UTC]

yeah, an old character

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InsanityAndSugar In reply to danielcherng [2008-05-07 23:14:02 +0000 UTC]

As I can tell.

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iwan13 [2008-05-07 19:36:50 +0000 UTC]

nice awesome colors ... ill read the story and other notes later ... too looong for me to read it now :<

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danielcherng In reply to iwan13 [2008-05-07 22:32:12 +0000 UTC]

yeah, this is an old characters. She's almost 1 years old now

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Wanderer2021 [2008-05-07 19:06:05 +0000 UTC]

*sigh* this is gonna be a rough competition. Better get to work then, if this is the new incarnation

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danielcherng In reply to Wanderer2021 [2008-05-07 22:31:56 +0000 UTC]

yep

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ashlelang [2008-05-07 18:04:11 +0000 UTC]

goddamn I do NOT wanna animate that but that means it's grood! Love the new shading technique, and that helmet is epic.

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danielcherng In reply to ashlelang [2008-05-07 22:31:08 +0000 UTC]

so you would give up instead of fight me?

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ashlelang In reply to danielcherng [2008-05-08 00:01:17 +0000 UTC]

No, I'd find a way to get that armor off her

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danielcherng In reply to ashlelang [2008-05-08 00:16:44 +0000 UTC]

oh shit, noessss. who knows. i might get sick of drawing it too xD

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Naga26 [2008-05-07 17:39:18 +0000 UTC]

she looks better and better, every time i saw a new one of your charakter-sheets
^^

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danielcherng In reply to Naga26 [2008-05-07 22:30:57 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Eternityhero [2008-05-07 16:10:45 +0000 UTC]

freaking awesome! Susie is back! and more incredible than before!

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danielcherng In reply to Eternityhero [2008-05-07 22:30:49 +0000 UTC]

that's right! >:3

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J3V1L [2008-05-07 16:04:11 +0000 UTC]

Sweeeeeeeet.
(Extended commentary, for those who dislike one worders: The coloring on this is incredible, and Suzie looks like she is at the top of her game here! This looks like a compromise between her Tomb-Raider-esque outfit and her Zealot armor. at least, I feel, one that is awe-inspiring! I like how the Armor compliments/balances her figure as well.
Just a question about the Insignia on her Gauntlet: What is it exactly? I want to say it's chaotic, but I could be wrong.
Altogether, Suzie is bringing her A-GAME, Broddah!)

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danielcherng In reply to J3V1L [2008-05-07 22:30:38 +0000 UTC]

the insignia is the symbol of the Santuria Celestia. :thumb78700123: its the thing on her headdress

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