HOME | DD

#aceo #artcard #atc #cat #feline #gold #ink #kitten #kitty #lechat #stars #white #artisttradingcard #artnouveau #lechatnoir #artnouveaustyle #artcardseditionsandoriginals #art_card #artcardatc
Published: 2015-06-18 21:08:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 1384; Favourites: 185; Downloads: 0
Redirect to original
Description
Hmm... I think when I updated the photo of this all my text here disappeared...This is my first attempt at Art Nouveau for a trade on iATC.
Micron Pen, gold paint pen, gel pen, colored pencil
References:
White Cat 08 and White Cat 07 by brenbren
Related content
Comments: 48
Eulas [2015-06-19 20:57:54 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Hey ! Um, this is the first time I write a Critique, but I'll do my best.
Forgiveness in advance for any errors that you find in it.
So ! To begin, I would first point out that this is a very beautiful drawing in respect of traditional art. I don't know if you possess a draft to the mine under these ink strokes or if you did it to the show of hands, but anyway I take my hat off to you.
In the drawing in general, I just love the concept of a cat under a full moon.
The shape of the cat is simply beautiful, its position and its slimming of feline make it looks very refined.
The way you make the fur is also very beautiful ! Therefore, I might have done least at the bottom of the neck and at the beginning of the tail and I would have a little more sophisticated them (especially in the tail)... certain lines seem made too quickly, you should take your time and choose more carefully where they go (it will allow you to put shadows in more accurate locations than small spots here and there).
I love the shape of the face, ears and eyes, the cat as a whole to good proportions.
If I go with the colors depth, I find them well chosen. There's a contrast between the dark night represented in the background and the white cat. The moon and the stars gold and silver/white are very pretty. The orange color of the cat's eyes differs from the repetition of white cats with blue eyes (or green) that are seen everywhere.
There's one thing that I love. Is that you did not make the gray shades ! Most people think the lights and shadows on a drawing boil down to white, gray and black, this is not your case and continues with this way of thinking ! It's much prettier.
Very beautiful drawing, sincerely congratulations !
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
DanielleMWilliams In reply to Eulas [2015-06-19 21:07:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your critique!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Eulas In reply to DanielleMWilliams [2015-06-19 22:02:37 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome, you've done a great artwork !
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
agataylor [2015-06-25 00:45:46 +0000 UTC]
Wow, just gorgeous! Elegant colors and lovely composition
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
miki-sunshine [2015-06-21 12:32:05 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing! I love the choice of colours you used.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
DanielleMWilliams In reply to miki-sunshine [2015-06-21 15:01:35 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
BorisFedorov [2015-06-20 13:48:54 +0000 UTC]
Well for your first attempt. It's a pretty decent one for sure.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
BorisFedorov In reply to DanielleMWilliams [2015-06-20 19:31:56 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome girl.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
DanielleMWilliams In reply to icemaidenArt [2015-06-20 13:29:32 +0000 UTC]
Haha thank you so much!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
seralune [2015-06-19 20:16:31 +0000 UTC]
Aww i loe this to, so pretty and you drew the fur so great!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
DanielleMWilliams In reply to MysticalMysticism [2015-06-19 19:40:29 +0000 UTC]
Lol very punny
Thank you!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
ansdesign [2015-06-19 15:16:16 +0000 UTC]
This is a wonderful piece, Danielle. I love Art Nouveau!
Your work has been selected for the permanent galleries of Nine Muses.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
DanielleMWilliams In reply to ansdesign [2015-06-19 19:40:48 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much Ans!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Minisnatcher [2015-06-19 12:38:20 +0000 UTC]
Very beautiful, I love how you did the pattern of the fur/ tail
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
DanielleMWilliams In reply to Minisnatcher [2015-06-19 19:38:22 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! That was one of those things that I completely hated until it was finished
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Minisnatcher In reply to DanielleMWilliams [2015-06-20 09:27:54 +0000 UTC]
yes, sometimes stuff looks really bad until the final dots have been placed
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
DanielleMWilliams In reply to Cora-Bokey [2015-06-19 19:37:41 +0000 UTC]
Merci beaucoup Coraline!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Cora-Bokey In reply to DanielleMWilliams [2015-06-21 09:42:02 +0000 UTC]
De rien, Danielle!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
DanielleMWilliams In reply to The-Rosalina-Guru [2015-06-19 19:37:19 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
The-Rosalina-Guru In reply to DanielleMWilliams [2015-06-19 22:59:38 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
DanielleMWilliams In reply to PookieGrace [2015-06-19 19:36:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
LuckySpirit14 [2015-06-19 04:25:03 +0000 UTC]
LOVE this!!!!! So beautiful!!!! I love this style!!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
DanielleMWilliams In reply to LuckySpirit14 [2015-06-19 19:36:32 +0000 UTC]
Haha thank you! I've never tried it before, but it was a lot of fun!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
LuckySpirit14 In reply to DanielleMWilliams [2015-06-20 04:23:25 +0000 UTC]
Really? Wow! Great job! I've always wanted to try that style. Its one of my favorites!!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Skellysaver [2015-06-18 21:11:35 +0000 UTC]
I realy love her eyes... So mysterical and wonderful.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
DanielleMWilliams In reply to Skellysaver [2015-06-19 19:35:50 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad you like it
👍: 0 ⏩: 0