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Published: 2015-04-17 20:26:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 962; Favourites: 109; Downloads: 0
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Description My half of a trade for iATC.

Two Japanese red-crowned cranes.  I'm not sure they can actually be found in that foggy mountain terrain, but I thought it looked pretty, so there they be  Also, according to google translate, the writing is Japanese for "crane".  Hopefully it's "crane the bird" and not "crane the construction machine".  Fingers crossed...

Prismacolor pencils, micron pen, paint pen, gel pen, tiny bit of pencil
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Comments: 38

taibossigai [2015-04-25 15:06:03 +0000 UTC]

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Originality

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Impact


Lovely work, and there is so much depth in this little painting!

I really like the symmetry of the painting, with the two cranes facing each other and feathers, I can imagine them performing their courtship dance and arriving at this moment for a second, only to change and dance some more. The two birds look quite realistic, especially around the eyes and beaks.

The only thing I might have changed is actually to increase the thickness of some of the lines, possibly around the moon, but not by much. I like the use of thin lines especially around the tail feathers to add detail. The only other thing I might suggest would be to vary the trees on the hillside a little more as they appear too similar to each other to me. I like the use of fog in the valleys to suggest early morning. The style is quite reminiscent of the ukiyo-e (Japanese woodblock prints), and I like that the colours are subdued like the style.

Oh yes, and the kanji is spot-on - tsuru for crane. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> Keep up the great work!

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wisahkecahk In reply to taibossigai [2015-04-26 08:35:07 +0000 UTC]

Wonderfull piece!!!!
Very fine techniques on display here!

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Daniocity In reply to taibossigai [2015-04-25 16:09:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for your critique! I definitely agree with you about the line thickness (though some of it could be that there was a slight tremble in my hand when I did it, so it's not quite as smooth as I usually do).

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taibossigai In reply to Daniocity [2015-04-29 12:38:35 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I find my hand trembles slightly too sometimes. I have to say though it's not really noticeable here.

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BorisFedorov [2015-05-08 21:51:29 +0000 UTC]

Well those birds are showing some true love for true, and like how you replicated the art of the old Japanese wood block paintings in a decent fashion.

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Daniocity In reply to BorisFedorov [2015-05-08 22:47:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks  It was a fun style to work in!

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BorisFedorov In reply to Daniocity [2015-05-08 23:11:41 +0000 UTC]

I bet it was for you.

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The-Last-Phantom [2015-05-08 19:52:24 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME!!!

You're a true Artist!!!

Great technique and imagination!

I love your art!!!

 

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Daniocity In reply to The-Last-Phantom [2015-05-08 20:08:40 +0000 UTC]

 

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The-Last-Phantom In reply to Daniocity [2015-05-08 21:13:56 +0000 UTC]

 

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Jenny42 [2015-04-21 17:24:20 +0000 UTC]

I love this!!  Amazing job! So pretty!

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Daniocity In reply to Jenny42 [2015-04-22 20:59:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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Celestial-Rainstorm [2015-04-19 04:33:32 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous! 

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Daniocity In reply to Celestial-Rainstorm [2015-04-22 12:38:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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Celestial-Rainstorm In reply to Daniocity [2015-04-22 17:03:03 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! 

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ceruleanmacaw [2015-04-18 20:57:09 +0000 UTC]

The terrain does look beautiful. The cranes look lovely, and the sunset atmosphere compliments their colour quite well. The coloured pencil has been applied very smoothly, so that it almost looks like a painting. Actually, the style here resembles East Asian brush painting, with the thick outlines appearing like ink strokes and the blending of colours in the mountains, trees, and fog much like the coloured pigments. I have tried my hand at both coloured pencils and the Chinese brush, though far more of the former, and I find it impressive that you have successfully replicated the appearance of brush painting in a western medium.

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Daniocity In reply to ceruleanmacaw [2015-04-18 23:40:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!  I've never tried to do something in this style before, so I'm glad it worked out okay

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ceruleanmacaw In reply to Daniocity [2015-04-20 04:30:19 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.^^

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atram95 [2015-04-18 17:44:53 +0000 UTC]

Your draw is Magnificent!! Congratulation I love it!!

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Daniocity In reply to atram95 [2015-04-18 20:36:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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HollyUmbreon [2015-04-18 17:23:49 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!

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Daniocity In reply to HollyUmbreon [2015-04-18 20:35:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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HollyUmbreon In reply to Daniocity [2015-04-19 18:10:05 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome! ^^

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Cora-Bokey [2015-04-18 15:45:08 +0000 UTC]

Superb!!

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Daniocity In reply to Cora-Bokey [2015-04-18 17:07:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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Cora-Bokey In reply to Daniocity [2015-04-18 17:09:01 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!!

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Alvro [2015-04-18 10:57:00 +0000 UTC]

verry nice :3

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Daniocity In reply to Alvro [2015-04-18 13:13:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!  

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Alvro In reply to Daniocity [2015-04-18 18:10:26 +0000 UTC]

je je you welcome ^-^

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yamisaibot [2015-04-18 07:11:35 +0000 UTC]

wow
thats so amazing 
I love so much the background and couloring 

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Daniocity In reply to yamisaibot [2015-04-18 13:13:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!  I'm glad you like it

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seralune [2015-04-18 06:18:17 +0000 UTC]

Omg this turned out really good, very beautiful!

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Daniocity In reply to seralune [2015-04-18 13:14:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Kitti!

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seralune In reply to Daniocity [2015-04-19 10:57:18 +0000 UTC]

 

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lost-nomad07 [2015-04-17 23:37:04 +0000 UTC]

Wow beautiful

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Daniocity In reply to lost-nomad07 [2015-04-18 13:15:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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UchihaPanda [2015-04-17 20:28:17 +0000 UTC]

So beautiful! (*^_^*)

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Daniocity In reply to UchihaPanda [2015-04-17 21:27:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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