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DanielPriego — Falls Like Rain
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Published: 2015-01-18 20:15:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 2808; Favourites: 144; Downloads: 28
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Model: BG: butterfly:The rest painted
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Comments: 22
The composing itself is really coherent, you did a great job bringing together the various parts.
Room for improvement:
- The number of raindrops really disaccords with the number of water splashs on the floor
- The background is very sharp but the model looks blurred. Not sure if this is intended or just poor image quality but it really distracts the viewers eye
- I think butterflys seldom fly during heavy rain ^^
- The big black tree on the left is a bit disturbing because its so massive, I would have moved the background a bit to the right
Much love and keep going,
Thomas
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Butterflies and moths seek shelter when moisture increases, even before rain falls. Most of them physically cannot fly in rain.
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Beautifully sad. Highly emotional. You have done an awesome work!!!
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Beautiful composition! There is an overall sadness and beauty to this scene well done!
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Thank you so much for you comment
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