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Description There were crimson roses on the bench;
they looked like slashes of blood.
But that was only at first sight.
As I looked closer
I could see each intricate rose petal;
each flowing green thorned stem.
The moon shone on the bench
which was were the flowers lay.
The red roses stuck out on the cold cement,
looking like a bright neon sign.
I walked over to that bench and sat.
I took up the roses,
tied with black lace,
and put them on my lap.
Each petal seems to speak to me.
Each one told a story.
The story was the same for all.
and this is how it goes:

Two people they were
that met by chance
one day along the street.
She had dropped her bag,
some beggar took it.
Off with it he ran.
She cried out at the man
but he did not pay attention
for all he wanted was to get away with money.
That was when an knight came
and after that beggar he went.
And it was he who brought back her bag
which held her most dear belongings.

She barely got his name that day
before he disappeared.
Byron was his name.
And never would she forget it.

This lady went back home that day
ready to tell her mother
all of the events that day
but when she got there she couldn’t.
For all of the words were stolen
right from her mouth.
There, standing in her kitchen, looking out of place
was her Knight in Shining Armor.
Byron was his name.
Her eyes lit up
and his did who, but neither said a thing.
Her mother was trying to talk to her
but she just couldn’t listen,
for her eyes and ears were for Byron alone.
She had fallen in love.
She turned to her mother though
when she heard her say the words:
“Daughter, you are to marry Sir Byron,
and make yourself a good life.”
The girl was shocked
First to hear that he was actually a knight
and next that they were to be wed!
She started to cry right on the spot
and her mother took this for sadness.
“No, no Mamma. It is tears of joy I shed,
for I believe this is the man I love.”
Her mother looked be-riddled
until Sir Byron explained.
When all was clear she clapped and said,
“We have a wedding to plan!”

So for a week there were preparations.
The wedding was to be small.
Just close family,
and some friends.
This wedding was just all too fast
so that is why it was small.
At first Byron wanted an all out extravagant thing.
But then he relented to the fact that not all are rich.
And his lady was definitely one of them.

The wedding was in an hour.
The lady could not wait.
She was jittery and anxious
for she was actually marrying for love.

The wedding was in an hour.
Byron could not wait.
On the outside he was calm and collected
while on the inside he was scared.
For what would happen if he ever went to battle?

The ceremony was beautiful;
short sweet and concise.
the bride was decked out in white,
carrying crimson roses.
Byron, the groom, had on his uniformly clothes.
He looked dashing, standing there with a wide grin on his face.

The vows were said,
each exchanged the gratitude of their love.
Rings were put on
and tears were shed
right before they kissed.

Down the aisle they went
now husband and wife.
Outside of the church they went
and stopped short.

Standing there was an angry mob.
Rapiers were brandished.
“These two should not be wed!
A commoner and a Noble man!”
That was their chant as they lunged forward.
Byron grabbed his Lady’s arm
and pulled her towards the woods.

Together the two ran,
hand in hand.
Their breathing was labored
and their cheeks were flushed.
But on they went,
just for their love.

They ran for hours
until it was dark.
The full moon was out,
illuminating a concrete bench.
Together the two sat down,
and looked each other in the eye.

“My Lady,” said Sir Byron.
“I know whose men are those
that chase after thee.
I know that they want blood shed.
We must keep fleeing.
We cannot stay.”

Her reply was only this”
A Kiss.
And then a shove.
“Go my knight.
Go flee like the wind.
I would rather stay and die
than have to keep running.
I have lived and,
most importantly, I have loved.
Now go, I hear them coming.”

So off he ran giving her one last look.
In that he held much love.
But soon he disappeared.

She dropped the flowers next to her,
on that cold stone bench.
This was the last remnant
of her would be wonderful husband.

The mob of men came running
brandishing their swords.
“There’s one!”
They shouted, slowly descending upon her.

There she sat
decked out in white
calmly waiting for the end to come.
Down the rapiers did come.
One after another.
Slashing her dress
and her delicate skin.
Crimson stained the white of her dress,
as she lay there dead.

The flowers, oh the crimson flowers
on the bench,
they told me this story.
And now they sit here,
forevermore, to mark where she had died.
Each year there are new flowers put,
by her lovely Byron.
How would I know?
I can see him standing in the shadows
holding a bouquet of crimson roses.
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Comments: 28

JohnnyChester [2006-07-01 19:12:41 +0000 UTC]

well i read and it was long and good kept me hooked i liked it

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DanielRadcliffeLover In reply to JohnnyChester [2006-07-09 21:55:40 +0000 UTC]

Wow..I was bracing my self for a harsh comment....

Thank you. I am very glad you liked it!

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rage69 [2006-06-30 06:54:25 +0000 UTC]

Wow, i dont think i could ever write something like that, it is very good.

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DanielRadcliffeLover In reply to rage69 [2006-07-09 21:52:12 +0000 UTC]

Lol..Well thank you.

I remeber I wrote it in a 45 mintue period....I think I could have done better if I had had more time.

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rage69 In reply to DanielRadcliffeLover [2006-07-10 04:21:36 +0000 UTC]

all that in just 45 mins? thats awesome

i could be all day thinking and would be...

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and nothing

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DanielRadcliffeLover In reply to rage69 [2006-07-10 23:26:20 +0000 UTC]

XD

That's not awesome.......It's pathetic!!! *cries*

I have no life.....

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rage69 In reply to DanielRadcliffeLover [2006-07-13 06:16:13 +0000 UTC]

Before i got this job, i used to sit in front of my computer playing video games (FFXI) all afternoon and most of the night, my only social life was at the weekends when i get to hang around with my friends.

You are very good at writing, me? im just a lazy bump <.<

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DanielRadcliffeLover In reply to rage69 [2006-07-13 21:49:01 +0000 UTC]

lol.....I've slowly started to become a Video Game addict again....XD My sister just got her Legend of Dragoon game back from a freind and I've started to play it like a maniac....I'm still only on teh first disc....Last time though I remember I got stuck on the second one which SUCKED!!! So I ended up watching my sister go through all four discs. XD

And I'm not THAT good at writing...I jsut do what I can.

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InPossibleExistance [2006-06-28 20:16:23 +0000 UTC]

I must say, this is pretty good. Even for you. (Last part's a compliment, so you know ^^)

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DanielRadcliffeLover In reply to InPossibleExistance [2006-06-29 19:54:11 +0000 UTC]

First of all:

OMG YOU ARE TALKING TO ME!!!!!!!

Second of all:

HOLY CRAP!! I GOT A COMPLIMENT FROM MARTYN!!! THE MAN WHO NEVER DOES THAT!!!

Third of all:

THANK YOU!! YOU ARE LIKEONE OF TEH ONLY PEOPLE WHO ARE CRAZY ENOUGH TO READ THIS!!! times 1028975347537472347345937598237598234798 34759834759834757!!!

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InPossibleExistance In reply to DanielRadcliffeLover [2006-07-02 19:53:06 +0000 UTC]

Of course i'm talking to you. I like you. Apart from the occasional "omg ur ugly and you'll TURN OUT LIKE ADAM! IT'S INEVITABLE!" and I give plenty of compliments...I just haven't been on DA for a while. Kati wished me on.
You're welcome for the reading thing. It was actually kinda fun to read.
So what's your problem with communism again? ^^

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DanielRadcliffeLover In reply to InPossibleExistance [2006-07-09 21:59:13 +0000 UTC]

*cringes*

According to KT you got really hot.....Or was that someone else....*ponders on that* I dunno.

Maybe you won't turn out like Adam......He's very egotistical.....Did I spell that right?? Anyway...

I'm glad it was fun for you. I mean, it's not like very day that you read a tragic poem about a girl who falls in love and then dies for that love.

I had a problem with Communism???




OH!! WATCH OUT!! I HEAR MICHAEL JACKSON WANTS TO MOVE TO IRELAND TO FIND LEPROCONS!! (Now that I know I spelled wrong)

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InPossibleExistance In reply to DanielRadcliffeLover [2006-07-11 19:46:17 +0000 UTC]

Well you know KT. Always exaggerating such things. Yes, Adam deals with the abuse he receives by hyperinflating his ego ^^ whereas I just..ok, I only know other people's coping mechanisms. But Adam...is like the most unlike me person you could find.
It actually isn't every day I read tragic poems about girls falling in love then dying for it, seeing as I only read the deviations of people I like.
Yes you had a problem with communism! Do you not now? Is it even legal in the USA for you to not express complete disgust at the mention of the word communism?
Well, i'll explain. You told me how you disliked money, and all the corruption it brought, like people stealing from others, the rich taking advantage of the poor, inequality between races, and the like. I said I thought communism might solve that, but wasn't sure at the time.
You replied "Communism?! ARE YOU INSANE?!" To which I said "I like to think so."
And Michael Jackson would undoubtedly have the sense to go to the GOOD part of Ireland, rather than the "Black North". It's not called that from any sort of racial thing...The south is much more accepting in terms of race. I wonder why COUGHCULTURECOUGHOFCOUGHBEINGCOUGHTHUGSC OUGH.
Anyway, I almost definitely will not turn out like Adam. He wants money for his own use, whereas I, for better or worse, care about the lives of my fellow human beings that could be saved. Ah, such is the way things go. And it probably was my dear KT that said that, as I don't know anyone else foolish enough. Poor girl.
Anyway, i'm sure this is a long enough message for you to get on with ^^ so...
BON SOIR!

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DanielRadcliffeLover In reply to InPossibleExistance [2006-07-22 20:24:58 +0000 UTC]

He hyperinflates his ego?? You mean it can go that big??? So in other words you just kind of clam up and go into your shell and you just don't deal at all? And I realize now that you and Adam are not alike....For one: You are nicer. and Two: yeah..you're nicer.....

I'm glad you like me then???

And yes, it is legal to not express disgust on communism....It's called freedom of speech. First ammendment....You can say almost anything.... I dunno...I don't care about Communism stuff right now..My major concern is letting gay marriage me LEGAL!! THEY ARE TRYING TO MAKE AN AMMENDMENT TO OUR CONSTITUTION TO MAKE IT ILLEGAL FOR TEH WHOLE US INSTEAD OF IT BEING A STATE WIDE DECISION!!! GAH!! The Congress has turn the bill down twice now so I'm happy....

Why is it the Black North??? I thought the Northern part of Ireland was better......@_@ Your country's confusing....

Just how rich is Adam?? Cuz that's prolly why he's so bigheaded................

Yes, Bon soir to you.....

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InPossibleExistance In reply to DanielRadcliffeLover [2006-07-24 11:16:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh Northern Ireland is the hell not better. Noone wants Northern Ireland. The UK doesn't, and the Republic...well..a majority want it, but they don't realise how sucky that would make the economy.
I don't know what I do. Maybe I just agree. Adam inflates it for the time in which he's dealing with the abuse.. Although he's not so good at it anymore. You should be glad I like you. Not everyone gets to be liked by me.
Freedom of speech in the US! Pull the other leg, Steph!

Adam owns a couple of houses and 3 cars. They're not crappy, either. One of them's a huge housewife leaving kids to school thing, and I dunno about the others. But I know they're in AWESOME condition. OH YEAH I once was told that if they sold their property they'd have over £1 million. Which is a lot more than a million dollars. I think he said one of his parents makes over 5 times the average for our country. Undoubtedly his daddy. Which basically led me to thinking "I, when I begin to make money, will only take that which I deserve, and in such, only take an average wage! And give the rest to charity! Hooray for giving!" Then I told that to my dad and after a while I realised I was making myself out to be a communist, as I said all this before I knew what it was. Yep. I might as well have had a large moustache and a hammer and sickle on my hat. T_T ah well, I need to go finish my LIST OF DOOOOOM!

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DanielRadcliffeLover In reply to InPossibleExistance [2006-07-25 20:10:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh.....................

How do you not know what you do? I let it all build up and then explode at some random person or a pillow...Or both....^_^;; Adam must be abused a lot then...........And I am glad you like me. I dunno what I'd do if you didn't!!!

But there is freedom of speech.......To an extent I should suppose.....*sigh* If people speak out for the gays you practically get pummeled to death and the media stands there taping it while the police and government sit there and do nothing, saying that they brought it on to themselves and that they should watch what they say. Yup.

Does he have a limo for his royal butt? A BMW? A Hummer? A Lexus? Porsche? Corvette? Mustang? SS Monte Carlo (Hey, I have an SS Monte Carlo!!)? His own private jet?!

The exchange rate for a euro is like 1 euro to $1.26 here I believe.......I'm not sure on that though...But that's a lot more than what MY house and property are worth......Mine's like $119,000.00.......Or something close to that....XD

I wish my parents made over 5 times the average.....I think we make 5 times below the average some months......What does his Dad do?

I think you should save your money because the charity you would give it to would undoubtly probably give it all back to you......>_<;; I know they would to me.

Did you finish that list?

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InPossibleExistance In reply to DanielRadcliffeLover [2006-08-06 12:27:10 +0000 UTC]

I just don't know what I do. Probably just sit there fuming. Or make various evil comments towards Adam or hit Shahram.
Although I thought I only did those things for fun. Well, if I didn't like you...I think you'd just lack in basic knowledge. *nods* Your life would be devoid of intelligence, and without Steph, my life would be without...an amount of compassion for gays.
^^
Oh, pounds are worth more than Euro. Which means that ADAM LIEK OWNZ JOO! HE COULD BUY J00 FROM SLAVERZ!
Couldn't buy me, because I know how to use a musket. He doesn't have a limo, but he does have a blacked-windows big car thing. For stealing children and selling them. I assume that's how they get most of the money. But his dad and mom run a clinic place, and his dad also advises a football team on health issues, and gets paid well for it.

There is NOT freedom of speech. Talk to a cop about how much you hate bush, like gays, and want to kill your teachers. You'll spend a couple nights in jail. I assume i'm quite well off by most people's standards. Although not like Adam or Comrade Winchkoff(he's the richest communist IN THE WORLD). My grandparents are the ones with the real money. Although i'd hate for them to die. Although I would undoubtedly receive some benefit financially, I quite like them. Uuuuurgh, my grandfather made me want to have a really high-paying job! I told him I didn't want one, and that a lot of the money would go to charity, and he explained how that was THE BEST reason for being a rich asshole. He's good at that. He almost single-handedly un-atheisted me. Stupid...educated christians...some of them are pretty damn smart.
Grr. I went to Ireland and got KT presents. And noone else. Oooooooooooh she's special, my KT is. Right now i'm all "omg liek shez da 1 lol!1" and almost putting 1s instead of exclamation marks.
It's scary. Oh. I finished the list. With flying colours. FLYING!
It was a good list. You might be able to see it some day.
I got a dreamcatcher made by a gay Irish hippie. It's black and has some feathers that ARE ALSO BLACK on it.
Doesn't work, though. I killed one of KT's relatives in my last dream.
BON SOIR AGAIN!

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DanielRadcliffeLover In reply to InPossibleExistance [2006-08-07 21:32:29 +0000 UTC]

it's nie to knwo I have some sort of knowledge..without you I don't think I would have every figured that out!! lol!!

And I'm VERY glad you have compassion for gays...if not......Well, let's hope you wouldn't try to use that musket on me..Other wise I'd have to get Vincent on you..MWAHAHHAHAHAH!!!

Adam would never want me as a slave..or anyone else for that matter...I'm too damn lazy...

Uhm...My Dad is friends with a cop and he agrees with everything I say about Bush and teahcers and gays....Especially gays!

" I went to Ireland " what's that supposed to mean????????????????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Irish hippie huh? lol....and I know dreamcatcers don't work...my dreams are too weird...

boy, does that say a lot about my subconscious.....lol

^_^

You never IMed me back........

T_T

ciao

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InPossibleExistance In reply to DanielRadcliffeLover [2006-08-08 19:09:14 +0000 UTC]

I doubt even if I didn't have compassion for gays that I would use a musket on you. I'm a LITTLE too unconcerned about such things to travel to the states for them. There's only two things that could make me go there...
1: The US trying to take over the world
2: KT.

Don't underestimate the power of slavery, Steph. You'd be a good slave. Tall and muscular. *snicker*
Yep. Bought a dreamcatcher from an Irish gay hippie.
When I say "I went to Ireland" I mean I went to the good part of it.
AND GOT KT PRESENTS!
I hope you get vincent from FFVII to attack me.
He was keeeeewl.
But yes, I know your Vincent is a different one.
One that I don't know of. But a Vincent nonetheless.

Is your dad's friend one of those cops that wear the pink uniforms?
Yes, I have had "The Dope Show" by Marilyn stuck in my head all day.

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DanielRadcliffeLover In reply to InPossibleExistance [2006-08-13 23:52:20 +0000 UTC]

So your saying you WOULDN'T use a musket on me or you ARE? Because that sentence was quite confusing for me to comprehend (head got hit a few too many times Friday).

Well, I hope you'll come for the latter of the two reasons. If the former happened I don't think me and KT would be here.

Shut the fuck up with your snickering alright? Like you'd make a better one any way! You're freaken small in more ways than one!

I still can't get over the fact that he was an IRISH hippie! I thought hippie's only were in America.....^_^

Oh, well, that makes more sense then. So where do you live? the "bad" part?

I know about the presents. You told me!!!

Vincent is not from FFVII! Vincent is Vincent.

I never played FFVII so I wouldn't know if he was cool or not.

oh..Yes, he is different.

Yeah, it'd be weird if you knew him now wouldn't it? But yes, thank you for stating the obvious.

Har har. No. It's Navy blue for your information.

You always have Marilyn stuck in your head. Don't you listen to anything else?

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InPossibleExistance In reply to DanielRadcliffeLover [2006-08-16 20:24:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh please. American hippies? Next thing you'll say is that you actually have a left-wing news station, or a COMMUNIST PARTY THAT DOESN'T GET BOMBED INTO THE GROUND!
*dies of laughter*
I was saying you would be a good slave. And I'm only small in ways that don't count.
LIKE PENIS SIZE BECAUSE I'M GAY! No...not really. ^^ You wish, Steph-Ay-San.
Yep, I live in the bad part. Northern Ireland.
Well, Vincent from FFVII is pretty damn cool.
Ohhh I more often have SOAD stuck in my head nowadays. Or Nightwish if you wanna get really recent.
Right. Navy blue pants and a pink shirt and tie for police officers in the US. Got it, Steph.

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DanielRadcliffeLover In reply to InPossibleExistance [2006-08-18 22:17:48 +0000 UTC]

What's a left-wing news station? O_o............

And there were (maybe still are) American Hippies.......*random thought coming!* Jenna would make a good hippie. You can ask KT.

And I would not make a good slave............(Thinks about Mom and how when she says to do something I usually do it) I"M TOO FAT AND LAZY!

And I figures this would be about Penis size. *sigh* Well, you would not make a good gay guy. Why? Cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuz...uhm..........You just wouldn't. So I don't wish you were gay.

I thouth Northern Ireland was the good part......Wait, we went through this already didn't we?

Well, my Vincent is....Vincent. lol. I would say that he's pretty damn cool too but I haven't seen him in TWO WEEKS! So I dunno....lol......Pisses me off that I haven't seen him....

Oooooooooooooooh! I LOVE NIGHTWISH! They inspire me when I'm writing and I have to be angry and I'm not. Who's SOAD? I usually have Panic! At The Disco or Snow Patrol or The Fray stuck in my head. Or Call Me When You're Sober by Evanescence!

HAR HAR! Gosh, someone is just being the little comedian today aren't we?

Navt blue shirt, pants, AND tie. With a silver badge and gold PARMA pins on the lapels.

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InPossibleExistance In reply to DanielRadcliffeLover [2006-08-25 18:52:40 +0000 UTC]

There is no such thing as an American hippie these days. The ones that call themselves such....are fags. Not the good kind, either.
WHY WOULDN'T I MAKE A GOOD GAY GUY?!
Hell, any conversation with you turns out to be about penis size.
I decided i'd get in the first blow.
Northern Ireland was never a good part.
Except when it had the Clans of Ulster. Who weren't Christian.
They totally owned Brian Boru. For like...2 years.

You would too make a good slave.
I'm glad you don't know left-wing is. It justs proves me right in how bad it's gotten.
DON'T WORRY STEPH, THERE ARE COUNTRIES WHOSE GOVERNMENTS DON'T HATE BLACKS, GAYS, AND EVERYONE EXCEPT WHITE CHRISTIANS!

I'm always a comedian, Steph. It fits into all my career choices. In that I don't kill myself from a lack of humour. Tis why I have Shahram.
OH GOD ZOMBIES BYE

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DanielRadcliffeLover In reply to InPossibleExistance [2006-09-02 22:24:44 +0000 UTC]

You're too angry to be gay..that's why.

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DanielRadcliffeLover In reply to InPossibleExistance [2006-07-13 13:54:03 +0000 UTC]

O_o........That was too long for thsi early in teh morning.....You made me laugh about teh Communism stuff though.....I still don't remember that...XD

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InPossibleExistance In reply to DanielRadcliffeLover [2006-07-19 17:13:37 +0000 UTC]

Well you can read it some other time then...
And well...it isn't legal, is it? I didn't think so. Ah well. I'm sure it's legal to like fascism...*rambles*

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StirbNichtVorMir [2006-06-27 01:35:17 +0000 UTC]

I read that. It was long.

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DanielRadcliffeLover In reply to StirbNichtVorMir [2006-06-28 00:03:09 +0000 UTC]

I know.....lol....

XD

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