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Published: 2014-01-12 23:03:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 1094; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 5
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aaah i started this a long, long while back and made myself finish it today. i really don't like the shading with this- it didn't work out for me.i'm really happy with the linky thing tho - very glowy :3
yeeaah- aiden and jodie from "beyond: two souls" you never actually get to see what aiden looks like, so i went the typical fangirl route and made him pretty //shot
i used to ship aiden and jodie together... until i learnt that they were related. oops.
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SpadeSwift [2014-01-12 23:37:19 +0000 UTC]
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The shading of this and the effect it has on the eyes is very good. I like how Aiden is transparent and smug looking, beside the courageous and serious Jodie. The colors are very well distributed throughout the picture, not too powerful but not boring!
The background is simple, and I don't think it fits the scene, but it is well done and doesn't distract from the picture.
The anatomy of Jodie is almost a different style from how you drew Aiden. She is thicker and more realistic, and he is very skinny and I would say more Manga-ish?
Overall this is a good piece to sum up the game. Good job!
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DaniiRoo In reply to SpadeSwift [2014-01-13 20:29:07 +0000 UTC]
thank you for this insightful critique! I'm pleased with the general, base colouring but not too pleased with the shading... I don't know, it just kind of comes off as "dirty" (more so the shade tones than the highlights).
I wasn't too sure what to do for the background, so I kept it simple. Thank you though!
Yeah, I kind of added Jodie as a second thought - and I have issues with style inconsistency; especially between males and females... That would explain why Jodie and Aiden look so different.
Thank you!
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Rach-E-L [2014-01-16 23:11:13 +0000 UTC]
SEE THIS. THIS IS WHAT YOU CALL AMAZING.
Don'tyoudaresaythatyoudon'tlikethatshading-waifuwillgetupset
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DaniiRoo In reply to Rach-E-L [2014-01-27 20:45:45 +0000 UTC]
HUSH NO NO BBY NO
noplswaifuplsdon'tgetthesadsnopls ;-;
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xXAllieBomboziXx [2014-01-13 01:44:39 +0000 UTC]
AHHHH THIS IS BEAUTIFUL <333333
Fantastic work <3
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DaniiRoo In reply to xXAllieBomboziXx [2014-01-13 20:17:46 +0000 UTC]
aaAAH- thank you!! <33 ;v;
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BeefcakeSpaz [2014-01-13 00:20:23 +0000 UTC]
Love the way you made the color, the lighting, shadows, all of it is sooo very well done!! if only I could do that XD it's artists like you that make me try harder each time! :3 <3
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DaniiRoo In reply to BeefcakeSpaz [2014-01-13 20:19:11 +0000 UTC]
thank you ;v; amg no- i'm sure you could do it if you tried - i'm so unhappy with the shading and lighting on this =w=
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BeefcakeSpaz In reply to DaniiRoo [2014-01-13 22:24:38 +0000 UTC]
No problem :3
Ahh I tried many times, failed each time. It's just I haven't had a lot of time with computer programs. Especially now I can't, I get scared experimenting with my markers. Not to mention they aren't cheap ;n; so I don't like wasting the ink.
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DaniiRoo In reply to BeefcakeSpaz [2014-01-13 22:37:42 +0000 UTC]
shh, it's impossible to fail at something every single time - you'll improve with each attempt until you finally achieve what you want! but yeah, i know what you mean with the markers; i keep all my traditional work simple because it's harder to fix mistakes and the equipment isn't always cheap.
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BeefcakeSpaz In reply to DaniiRoo [2014-01-13 23:01:24 +0000 UTC]
Mmm I guess I'm rarely satisfied so I can't tell if I improve or not.
it's good to know that someone feels my pain X0
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DaniiRoo In reply to BeefcakeSpaz [2014-01-27 20:52:07 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I know the feeling of being constantly dissatisfied, and it sucks ;-;
aah, yiss eve
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