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Published: 2015-05-12 18:33:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 623; Favourites: 81; Downloads: 0
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The surprise card I had made for my trade withGray Wolf Stock 31: White Wolf in Fog by
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Otaku8315 [2015-05-12 19:56:39 +0000 UTC]
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This is a very beautiful wolf but once again I am having trouble seeing where the light is coming from with the shading. Also the left back leg is very off. It doesn't look quite right. It should be a bit more angular than round like drawing a joint instead of a bend. There also should be some shading around the eye, the left front leg towards the bottom and it starts going underneath (If that makes sense.), and around the toes. For the most part it's really good but since before you said you were having trouble with shading I would suggest looking into it on the internet or getting a book and figuring out the anatomy a little better because the back leg looks like a banana in a way. (Sorry ^^ I actually had a pet wolf several years ago so I know exactly what they look like.) Also maybe making the wolf a little thinner and fluffier would have been a good idea since they don't really eat a ton and they have around 2 layers of fur. Other than those things good job and the blending with the water colors is really nice. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Daniocity In reply to Otaku8315 [2015-05-12 20:44:11 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the critique I knew this had a ton of flaws (I was more interested in playing, I think than in really working it). These are perfect suggestions
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Otaku8315 In reply to Daniocity [2015-05-12 21:13:25 +0000 UTC]
Thanks and I'm glad you didn't take my critique in a mean way XD I just nit pick at stuff with wolves since I had one. She was black and white with one super light blue eye and one brown eye. *^* She was so bootiful! XD
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Daniocity In reply to Otaku8315 [2015-05-12 21:16:54 +0000 UTC]
Lol not at all... I was actually expecting a much worse score than you gave me. Having a wolf must have been pretty neat!
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Otaku8315 In reply to Daniocity [2015-05-13 23:09:56 +0000 UTC]
Yeah she was a bug sweetie. She was always next to me when I was a baby, like she HAD to be right by me and if I moved and inch she would be propped up and watching me. XD Her name was Cheyenne and she was one of the biggest beauties I had ever seen. I can look at the drawing again and nit pick if you want but those were just some major flaws I saw. I thought it was pretty good compared to others I have seen. I'm always up for helping artists get better so let me know!! ^^
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BorisFedorov [2020-04-12 00:50:58 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, that wolf looks pretty happy in the situation which he's in for this evening in the wilderness.
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Daniocity In reply to Roxynor [2016-03-31 11:36:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
I'm booked up at the moment, but perhaps in the future
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Daniocity In reply to gelid-ataraxy [2015-05-24 13:54:41 +0000 UTC]
You are a truly awesome person ... this totally made my day!
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taibossigai [2015-05-13 13:17:21 +0000 UTC]
Nice work with this one! I like the purple hues in the background, and how you can see the texture of the paper.
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RavenDANIELS In reply to Daniocity [2015-05-13 19:52:11 +0000 UTC]
Welcome! ^-^ oh and thank you for the favs <33
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PurpleWish23 [2015-05-12 18:51:46 +0000 UTC]
oh dear,you don't know how I was happy when I saw this aceo. It looks incredible,I love it so much
thank you again
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Daniocity In reply to PurpleWish23 [2015-05-13 15:26:57 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you liked it, my friend!
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