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Published: 2014-11-08 17:44:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 331; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 0
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So I tried realistic drawing for a change
it took me a whole day literally to finished it ...i guess I turned out okay ...uhm just dont look at the original photo. jiaren.org/2012/05/28/zaoan-23… That chin ...I still need a lot of practice.
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Firstly, I want to say how good your shading is here, and the detail on the top is excellent too. The folds in the cloth are nicely done too.
I was going to say she looks tall and almost too skinny, but that's the model in the photo too
I think some of the height comes from the fact she's more upright in your version than the photo, making her torso a touch too long. That throws out the balance of the whole figure, making the head look too small and giving her a stretched, bony look.
I wouldn't be too worried about the chin, the model's chin looks disproportional too. Sometimes you can't just copy a photo exactly and have to edit your drawing a little bit to make it look 'right'.
Her neck looks very thin, making her head smaller too, I think it's where you'd followed visual height clues on the photo, but didn't adjust the proportions.
I know it feels like I'm picking a lot of faults here, that's not what i meant to do. The drawing is very skillful it's just the proportions are slightly out.
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Its okay thats what I want to know, other peoples perspective about my drawings ...the mistakes so that I would know where should I start to improve myself. Thanks for this really appreciated.
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h........how did you make something this good
AND HOW ARE YOU SO MODEST!!!!
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You really think it's good? I'm not modest just being true. xD
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the body shape is nice
the detail on the dress is amazing
and the shading is beyond impressive
so yes a very good piece of art
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Sooo happy to hear that! Thanks!
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Ya. So what do you think ?
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i can't tell i dont draw this type of drawings, what do you think about it?
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of course id say its good its' my drawing xD ...i need others opinion.
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ok fine i can help but usually when i judge people report me and deviant art send me a report that i cant judge... so dont report me pls!! the light source is perfect theres no mistakes with that for the face i'd say the chin is too thick~ or large(im not native english sorry) the rest is good depending on what was your objectives. if i'm correct u didnt want to represent a sex symbol just a normal person so for that reason i must say the body is well drawn.
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waaaa. yeah you're right the chin is too thick xD ...well you judge pretty good, . what is wrong with those people who reported you? haha Thanks! XD
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now u judge mine
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