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EpicGurl13 [2014-02-28 11:35:39 +0000 UTC]

;^;

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pastelknees [2014-02-28 03:09:13 +0000 UTC]

wOW THIS IS A LATE COMMENT I'M SO SORRY MY BBU <3

I'm just gonna give a little critique, since I think it deserves one~

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I really like how you did the expressions on both of them. Mokaro's eyes seem just a bit too…. Chibified in my opinion (but that's just me). I really like how you did the shape of the bodies and how the linework looks like you just rushed all of it, though I can tell you took quiet the time to work on all of this.

I really like what you did with the shading and the perspective of Canas' falling bod. The only thing I can say about saying things is that Mokaro's arms look a little…. Disproportionate. I think it was just how they needed to be drawn, and you prolly just improvised. I like how his hat flaps are just flowing as they fall, though they look like they could be rised just a bit higher (once again, just my opinion).

For some reason, I just really like looking at how the tears from Canas' eyes are flying up, but you still gave them that cutie cartoon style; not getting too dramatic with the flow of tears (like me ) I don't really understand why she's biting her lip, but hey, it could just be how the scene is rolling. Other than that, all I can really say is that I absolutely ADORE how you did the shading on her hips, thighs and arms. Though her right arm looks like the fingers were rushed- they look very stubby and stuck together as if they have no motion. Another small thing is how Mokaro is catching her- rather holding onto her arm- but I don't see any real things that both me except for how his hand is shaped around her wrist. It just looks off/ doesn't look right. Anddd…. That's really it. Only thing I can say is: shade his face or his tongue darker, I can tell his mouth is open, but they're both the same colors. Maybe use a really dark pink mixed with red for the tongue? I don't know, just my little thingy thing~

Other than that, I suggest you sign your artwork or it's gonna get stolen xD

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NNNGGHGGH <33333 ALL THE MOKACANA

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SigwardtheLizard [2014-02-11 21:42:49 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing~!

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Racici [2014-02-11 05:27:05 +0000 UTC]

This is really cool. The shading and shine a spectacular!Another hreat job by Dark

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AriaHope [2014-02-11 02:18:14 +0000 UTC]

This is sooooo good!

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mimininikiki [2014-02-11 00:55:48 +0000 UTC]

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Wandeler3cute [2014-02-11 00:34:14 +0000 UTC]

CUTE!!! AND AMAZING!

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EpicGurl13 [2014-02-11 00:24:41 +0000 UTC]

HNNNNNNANNNNNNNNNNNNNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

MOKARO

CANAS

JUST

JUST *dies*

I SHIP THEM SO HARDDDDDDD

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angelforever555 [2014-02-11 00:20:24 +0000 UTC]

what is is this Dark? why did you make it so majestic? XD

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MegasomaMars [2014-02-11 00:18:23 +0000 UTC]

this is too good for words....

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