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Published: 2018-03-22 19:56:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 1236; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 1
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Description Donatello’s tongue was cut out. The attack had left him feeling weak, powerless, and vulnerable. Raphael tries his best to tend to his brother while Leonardo obsesses with finding Donatello’s attacker. Mikey tries to keep Leonardo from going over the edge in his need for vengeance against someone that had mutilated a member of his family. 
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Comments: 20

Dr-Innocentchild [2018-06-03 14:32:18 +0000 UTC]

Raph is so sweet <3

wow, cutting someone's tounge!!!

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DarkClosure In reply to Dr-Innocentchild [2018-06-21 07:33:33 +0000 UTC]

This was such a dark comic for me to draw. I honestly think Raph would be more rage induced but when it came to taking care of his bro he'd be way gentle. 

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Dr-Innocentchild In reply to DarkClosure [2018-11-23 23:11:15 +0000 UTC]

I'm still in love with all your ideas

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DarkClosure In reply to Dr-Innocentchild [2018-12-11 08:21:16 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you so much!

I honestly had to stop myself from making more because this would be a VERY dark story.

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yukarishii [2018-03-23 22:43:59 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I heally liked the background story! So, Don is not talking anymore? He looks dreadly, like he gave up...

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DarkClosure In reply to yukarishii [2018-03-24 06:43:48 +0000 UTC]

He tries not to make much sound as the vibrations make his healing tongue hurt. He'll be able to make some noises after it fully heals.

I was wondering about having this a Leo/Don story, what do you think?

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yukarishii In reply to DarkClosure [2018-04-17 17:16:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I'd love it very much!! Leo/Don is something I crave for!
And stories where Don is injured and Leo going mad is very appealing to me. It can turn into something with angst and very fluffy too.

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DarkClosure In reply to yukarishii [2018-06-21 07:48:50 +0000 UTC]

I agree so much!!

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TwoLeftShells [2018-03-22 21:59:58 +0000 UTC]

... this is so heart breaking

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DarkClosure In reply to TwoLeftShells [2018-03-23 06:44:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, it was a heavy thing to create. Hard to do because I hate hurting these boys.

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DonellaTimbers [2018-03-22 21:28:02 +0000 UTC]

Doctor Raph? Interesting... And was his tongue cut out?! Wow!

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DarkClosure In reply to DonellaTimbers [2018-03-23 06:42:44 +0000 UTC]

I like to think that Raph would know some things about medicine, he gets banged up enough. It wouldn't be a far fetched idea to have Raph know a few things, so I like to imagine that he's second best doctor of the family after Donnie. (both not up to Master Splinter's level)

Yeah, Donnie's tongue was cut out. I'm still formulating this AU so I'm not sure who did it, not yet. 

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DonellaTimbers In reply to DarkClosure [2018-03-23 11:25:09 +0000 UTC]

I shall read that AU!

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katstories [2018-03-22 20:52:47 +0000 UTC]

Holy crapola!  Poor Donnie not able to articulate that big brain of his!  Not to mention eating, he's gong to have to use his fingers or a spoon you push it down.  Your tounge helps you move food around eating will be a whole new level of pain. 

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DarkClosure In reply to katstories [2018-03-23 06:40:17 +0000 UTC]

His diet will certainly have to be modified directly. Probably have everything blended up to a pudding consistency in order to swallow it.

Donnie can still write, still type, probably will figure out some modified sign language. He can still make noises, he's not mute, but making the right sounds for words will be very hard for him. 

Thank you for the comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I always love hearing from you!!

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katstories In reply to DarkClosure [2018-03-23 20:12:32 +0000 UTC]

With his mechanical skills he might make cybernetic tounge.

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DarkClosure In reply to katstories [2018-03-24 07:14:49 +0000 UTC]

Pffft! HAHA!!! New meaning to a silver tongue!!

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TMNTLovingLeo [2018-03-22 20:00:25 +0000 UTC]

This is an interesting idea!

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DarkClosure In reply to TMNTLovingLeo [2018-03-22 20:16:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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TMNTLovingLeo In reply to DarkClosure [2018-03-22 20:19:39 +0000 UTC]

Np!

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