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Published: 2016-03-15 18:10:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 14920; Favourites: 196; Downloads: 73
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Translation: AlexFLS
Fonts: longren.deviantart.com
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DarkZ67 [2025-03-29 15:05:54 +0000 UTC]

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farrarjo [2023-10-19 03:08:50 +0000 UTC]

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author2210 [2022-12-17 06:08:04 +0000 UTC]

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Mighty2028 [2022-10-08 15:45:50 +0000 UTC]

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UltraTheHedgetoaster [2016-06-02 08:45:24 +0000 UTC]

SWEEP SWEEP SWEEP SWEEP

...Spike, what's wrong? Don't you like Twilight's newest #1 hit single?

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JasAnderson1215 [2016-04-22 00:48:20 +0000 UTC]

It's about time Spike stands up to Twilight! Loved this.

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age3rcm [2016-03-20 21:49:38 +0000 UTC]

he will be back after he realises he is dependant on twilight for a living

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YesImDeadpool [2016-03-18 17:00:13 +0000 UTC]

Whoa. XD

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cajobif [2016-03-17 02:09:23 +0000 UTC]

Then, Rarity won't be happy to come here and find this place dirty!
R-r-rarity?
Yes, Rarity. She is supposed to come borrowing a new book from the-
  You're bluffing.
Hmmm. Do I? I know her and she would be so disappointed to see this place so dirty all of sudden... and you know how she hates dirt...
What to do... what to do...  I can't let her see what she knows I keep so clean to look now a mess...
*sigh* Alright! But then, I go out all day!
Fine with me.
What do you want me to sweep?
The entire floor.
  You're kidding right?
Think about Rarity.
Yeah. But it still sucks.
I'll be in my room.

Five minutes later, in Rarity's boutique, Twilight teleported herself ther.
Twilight? What are you doing here?
Rarity! I need your help! Spike was about to leave and quit when I told him you were supposed to come by any minute!
Come again?
He is cleaning right now because I told him you would come. You know Spike... he has a... he cares very very much about you and if you don't come I'm afraid he would...
Calm down, darling. Spike wouldn't leave you even after a little dispute.
But... but...
I will help you. But you will eventually have to tell him the truth. And give him more free time. Is that okay?
I guess.
I'll be there in ten minutes. Is that okay?
Yes. But twenty would be better.
Okay, then. See you in twenty minutes.
  Thank you so much Rarity! See you later!

Twilight disappeared in a flash.
Poor darling. I guess I will have to... Wait! She haven't told me the reason why I was coming.

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DarkCollaboration In reply to cajobif [2016-03-17 12:55:12 +0000 UTC]

Nice one story!

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cajobif In reply to DarkCollaboration [2016-03-17 22:41:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad that you liked it.

Despite the fact that looks like a sequel... apparently.

Oh well, feel free to use it, then.

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FralLeman In reply to cajobif [2016-03-17 03:40:32 +0000 UTC]

Jeez!  You basically wrote the sequal!

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cajobif In reply to FralLeman [2016-03-17 22:44:56 +0000 UTC]

I know. I felt bad for these two.

And for writing something this long after a comic.

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Chiyawa In reply to FralLeman [2016-03-17 05:47:09 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, might be good. I like some short comic series.

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catz537 [2016-03-16 16:46:57 +0000 UTC]

Welll then
I guess Spike really ISN'T the Number One Assistant

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HellArmy [2016-03-16 16:22:12 +0000 UTC]

"Spike, you're fired!"

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Mastergrader In reply to HellArmy [2016-03-16 16:46:00 +0000 UTC]

Spike is an ass and we won't be working with him again.

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karkovice1 [2016-03-16 14:56:54 +0000 UTC]

There's only so much SWEEPING this dragon can do! *SLAM*

...........

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Sturmlion1 [2016-03-16 14:10:31 +0000 UTC]

She has magic, can't she multi task and sweep it all up at once.

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theuntitled91 In reply to Sturmlion1 [2016-03-16 14:35:13 +0000 UTC]

She actually could do all the chores spike does in about a 10th of the time but doesn't.

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Sturmlion1 In reply to theuntitled91 [2016-03-16 19:02:54 +0000 UTC]

Slave Driver!

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HermitBrony [2016-03-16 13:46:40 +0000 UTC]

That's what you get, Princess. Dragon boy can only take so much..!

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Legacy-Galaxy [2016-03-16 13:31:13 +0000 UTC]

Wh--

The library is dead!

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Luckysweep [2016-03-16 13:13:11 +0000 UTC]

Ah, yes. You start a job just to be nice, and the people who asked you to do it start adding more and more onto your plate. A bit annoying, isn't it?

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AJR001 [2016-03-16 12:18:05 +0000 UTC]

Dust yourself off Twilight...

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LordKane666 [2016-03-16 11:55:25 +0000 UTC]

mah he did more then I would have

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Jatheus [2016-03-16 11:16:55 +0000 UTC]

Cutely drawn... such rage though!

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Gray--Day [2016-03-16 09:26:35 +0000 UTC]

Woah there, Spike. I think he needs some sweepy time tea to relax.

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tigreanpony [2016-03-16 09:13:24 +0000 UTC]

Lol, yes I have a feeling that will happen eventually, still it was funny.

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ThirstyBoi39 [2016-03-16 08:38:03 +0000 UTC]

 
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

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Lukhanus [2016-03-16 06:56:59 +0000 UTC]

Getting real tired of your shit, Twilight...   
Dragons don't have pony rights. You are classified as a pet according to the book---   
Buck you!  

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Claw11 In reply to Lukhanus [2016-03-16 10:01:45 +0000 UTC]

haha good one

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jardape [2016-03-16 06:08:35 +0000 UTC]

Luckyly Spike isn't lazy aggresive human.

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DuomoChiaro [2016-03-16 05:38:42 +0000 UTC]

Jeez, learn to clean yourself, princess pain in the ass

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Kachu-AppleKiwi [2016-03-16 04:53:54 +0000 UTC]

I can't help but to think of Friendship is Witchcraft, except that Spike would've been the one to get hit with the broom...

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JustJoeKing [2016-03-16 04:52:21 +0000 UTC]

*watches with pork skins as twilight takes off her belt*

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Maverickwolfzx [2016-03-16 04:36:49 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, just like my mother and me.

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AplReach [2016-03-16 03:51:59 +0000 UTC]

Facebroom XD

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templar127 [2016-03-16 03:50:01 +0000 UTC]

F*** this S*** I'm out! XD

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SPB2015 [2016-03-16 03:49:56 +0000 UTC]

Come on, Twilight, Spike has his limits. You should know that by now.

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SteelResolve In reply to SPB2015 [2016-03-16 04:37:54 +0000 UTC]

Actually, canon Spike's limits are pretty boundless. This is more of a "we wish he would say this" moment.

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EchoWing [2016-03-16 03:27:51 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I'm with you Spike. Only replace "sweeping dust" with "cleaning up dog crap".

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cmjohnson65 [2016-03-16 03:08:35 +0000 UTC]

They then make up and totally bang. 

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JustJoeKing In reply to cmjohnson65 [2016-03-16 04:50:22 +0000 UTC]

*knocks on your door*

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Tin-Foil-Hat-101 [2016-03-16 01:26:19 +0000 UTC]

Damn.

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PacificGreen [2016-03-16 00:20:24 +0000 UTC]

And then cue the scene where they apologize to each other, make up, and hug.

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madkrayzypony In reply to PacificGreen [2016-03-19 21:29:50 +0000 UTC]

And makes him sweep up everything.

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GUILLE832 [2016-03-15 18:37:15 +0000 UTC]

Jesus.
About fucking time, but still...
Jesus.

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fanwriter In reply to GUILLE832 [2016-03-16 22:50:59 +0000 UTC]

No kidding!  Spike should have done this first episode!

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