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Published: 2011-08-18 16:16:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 1284; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 20
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Lookwhoitis :3again
Any suggestions or comments?
I'm not sure about much of the anatomy xD Er. So if there are any comments anyone would like to make about that, I would be thrilled to have your feedback
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Reference Picture
The Homunculi Series
Gluttony
Lust
Wrath
Pride
Envy
Art (c)
Character (c) Hiromu Arakawa
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Comments: 23
For the improvement club, do you still want us to correct this piece?
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Man! I was so upset when he let greed take over his body. -__- Me and my husband were both like: NOOOOOOOO
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Lol xD same here, though i guess it was pretty predictable eh? He was a bit power hungry . . . x3
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Oh! The picture is wonderful, btw. The only thing I can see wrong with it, and this could be due to perspective, is that he seems to be missing part of his face. Other than that, it's very good!
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thank you
Yes x'3 the other half of his face was supposed to be darker . . . but that didn't work xD
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I really love this, you have a very awesome unique way of drawing him :3 Xx
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Nice sketch! The hand and shading on the skin look very nice. The only critique I have is the anatomy of the face. The eye suggests a 3/4 view, but the nose and mouth are drawn in side profile. I would either change the eye and brow to side view, or convert the lower face to 3/4 view. Otherwise, very nice work!
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First off, the hand looks great. I cant draw hands that well, and this one is amaznig
Well the nose tells me that this is a side view, but the way you drew the eye its a profile view. the eye should match the view of the nose. And since this is a side view, the mouth wouldnt be as wide. a realistic smile would not reach anywhere close to the ear. (you may have intended a different style, in which case ignore the mouth part 
those are all my suggestions! good luck!
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Shading + expression are perfect - as well as anatomy for neck and the hand >w< Go on like that!
Ankle of the head is slightly strange but the ankle itself is very tricky and your reference picture had the dark background to cover it. I'd love to tell you how to fix it, but I am strugglin with the same problem right now >.<
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Ooh, it's all shady! xD
I actually think your anatomy is pretty good! ^^ The fingers look a little stubby though, but maybe that's because he's got stubby fingers? xD
I really like how you did the ear/jawline, it look very natural. I always struggle with that part. xD
Overall: awesome!
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thank you for the critique ^^
and yes xD apparently he has very stubby fingers . . . /stares at drawing o.e
xD
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No problem!! ^^
Stubby stubby! xD
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I like the white suit, though I thought it was Kimblee even with the tattoo.
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haha xD I see what you mean
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