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Published: 2003-12-30 00:52:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 110; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 56
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This is the first drawing that was actually detailed and good.I know some of the proportion sucks, and there is like no curves, and the skirts too short, and my hand sucks, and my head/hair sucks. But i love the shoes and the idea. Im gonna try to fix this and maybe make it bigger. (i suck at drawing "big" o well.) comments? critiques? either are welcome.Related content
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nice work 
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I think it's really cool, and I like it very much...!
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thank you! i needed some reasurment.
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the concept of the picture is realy good, maybe u should think about drawing (this is what i do atleast) the out line of your charicters body first, things like: the head (with out hair), arms legs, ext.. then build up from there, that usualy works with me,..... the head does look a little funky, but its a great idea for a pic, its comin along!!
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no problem, glad i could help!!
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yeah. thanks. i hate heads. i really do. and its ok but not great. i am fixing it. thank you for the hints!
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woo! ive seen that picture! i love the crumpled paper even tho its probably not intentional, but i love the little creases! nice drawing too. yeah the porportions like the hair it should lie flatter instead of sticking straight out everything else really i think looks dandy unless u wanted to have her wearing a tighter shirt to show the curves like u mentioned in ur discription, but i really love the riples in the skirt.
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I can see the idea was right on, you just need more practice with form and proportionment...
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