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Published: 2003-12-18 20:43:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 82; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 17
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The pills.so many,
Im weak.
I can't help it,
I don't mean to.
I just do.
Five at a time.
I take them with water by my bedside.
I want it all to end,
I hate this.
All these people,
they want to help me.
Just leave me alone,
thats all i want.
I hate everything,
all my mistakes.
I am ending it all with these pills.
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Comments: 9
first of all i am soo sorry you feel this way....
it seems to be a re-occuring theme in your poems...mistakes are just that..mistakes....everyone makes them....
the point is....there is nothing you could have done deserves ending your life...why so much saddness? if you ever want to talk about it let me know...i would love to listen....
you have soo much potential...i hope you see that....maybe you could explain this all to me....
James
John 3:17
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ehh. i guess im soo sad cuz my daddy committed suicide and my mum is a loon. well thanks for wanting to talk with me. just note me and ill talk more, cuz i dunno what to say if i note you. heh. well... note me and ill explain! thanks again.
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mm, lacks imagery, lacks individuality, it souns exceedingly similar to a lot of you other poems
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np. give credit where credit is due
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why would u want to end it all, morgan? i'm just trying to help. maybe you should listen to me for once...
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