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Published: 2004-01-07 21:59:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 143; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 27
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You say everything will be alright,I am okay,
I don't need help.
Its all a lie.
Nothing will be alright,
I'm not okay,
I do need help.
You lie to me.
To make me feel better,
It's not working.
Everyone else says i need help,
im not okay,
nothing will be alright.
So why do you lie?
I know the truth,
I know im going to die.
"Later" you say.
It's not true,
Soon.
That is true.
I will die soon.
"Everything will be alright" you reassure me.
It won't.
I won't be okay,
I need help.
"You don't need help, your fine." you tell me.
Its all a lie.
Nothing will ever be alright,
I won't be okay,
I need help,
I'm going to die.
"Soon." I reassure you.
Soon i will die...
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Comments: 17
Sanguinary-Gallery [2004-01-08 02:51:01 +0000 UTC]
Thats really good. Very raw, and open. Excellent work.
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darkhellian In reply to SatansLilSista [2004-01-08 01:01:39 +0000 UTC]
lol. yeah i know. its about my b/f. he just pissed me off when he was telling me all that shit. cuz none of it was true!
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SatansLilSista In reply to darkhellian [2004-01-08 01:24:06 +0000 UTC]
Yeah some of them do that.
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Adrian27 In reply to darkhellian [2004-01-08 04:49:20 +0000 UTC]
you are welcome this deserves no less
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zeropulse [2004-01-07 23:07:03 +0000 UTC]
Lovely, although I think that is the wrong word to use, but still.. Its sad, and quite realistic. It could have a relation to many things, another good thing. Overall, great work.. Keep it up.
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darkhellian In reply to zeropulse [2004-01-08 01:02:49 +0000 UTC]
thank you soo much!!!!!!!!!!!!! i needed a lot of reassurment on this poem. didnt like it at all. but a lot of you people do. so heh. im happier.
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