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darkhellian — You Lie
Published: 2004-01-07 21:59:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 143; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 27
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Description You say everything will be alright,
I am okay,
I don't need help.
Its all a lie.

Nothing will be alright,
I'm not okay,
I do need help.

You lie to me.
To make me feel better,
It's not working.
Everyone else says i need help,
im not okay,
nothing will be alright.

So why do you lie?
I know the truth,
I know im going to die.

"Later" you say.
It's not true,
Soon.
That is true.
I will die soon.

"Everything will be alright" you reassure me.
It won't.
I won't be okay,
I need help.

"You don't need help, your fine." you tell me.

Its all a lie.
Nothing will ever be alright,
I won't be okay,
I need help,
I'm going to die.

"Soon." I reassure you.
Soon i will die...
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Comments: 17

spaddy [2004-01-20 23:17:10 +0000 UTC]

i like the piece, good work!

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presto [2004-01-08 22:25:49 +0000 UTC]

uh oh

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devildragonofhell [2004-01-08 12:20:12 +0000 UTC]

great i luv it also

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Sanguinary-Gallery [2004-01-08 02:51:01 +0000 UTC]

Thats really good. Very raw, and open. Excellent work.

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darkhellian In reply to Sanguinary-Gallery [2004-01-08 20:30:41 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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psycholoser63 [2004-01-08 01:57:53 +0000 UTC]

its good. hmm sorry about tyler!

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darkhellian In reply to psycholoser63 [2004-01-08 02:04:33 +0000 UTC]

yeah. no prob. thanks

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SatansLilSista [2004-01-08 00:52:42 +0000 UTC]

Wooo! Dont ya love how people are like that?

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darkhellian In reply to SatansLilSista [2004-01-08 01:01:39 +0000 UTC]

lol. yeah i know. its about my b/f. he just pissed me off when he was telling me all that shit. cuz none of it was true!

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SatansLilSista In reply to darkhellian [2004-01-08 01:24:06 +0000 UTC]

Yeah some of them do that.

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Adrian27 [2004-01-07 23:53:33 +0000 UTC]

wow awesome... i luv it.

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darkhellian In reply to Adrian27 [2004-01-08 01:00:43 +0000 UTC]

omg! thank you soo much!

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Adrian27 In reply to darkhellian [2004-01-08 04:49:20 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome this deserves no less

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zeropulse [2004-01-07 23:07:03 +0000 UTC]

Lovely, although I think that is the wrong word to use, but still.. Its sad, and quite realistic. It could have a relation to many things, another good thing. Overall, great work.. Keep it up.

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darkhellian In reply to zeropulse [2004-01-08 01:02:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you soo much!!!!!!!!!!!!! i needed a lot of reassurment on this poem. didnt like it at all. but a lot of you people do. so heh. im happier.

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LostTrust [2004-01-07 22:13:23 +0000 UTC]

nice job morgan

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darkhellian In reply to LostTrust [2004-01-07 22:26:19 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!!!!!!!!!

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