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Published: 2011-07-10 21:51:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 2908; Favourites: 83; Downloads: 22
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I didn't want to put it here, but I need an advice...This is my first sketch on a poster of TDC (Then Destiny is calling) my fanfic...Team "Phantom"... I was inspired by Krossan"s poster
Thank you, Krossan!But I need a little help, cause I really want to keep it untill I'll get a good grafic programm...Maybe I should change something? Or make it more heroic? Change poses? Anything... Right now I'm busy with examinations in the university
So untill August I'm afraid I won't come on DA for a long...So if someone has some ideas tell them
It would mean a lot to me Thanks!
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Спасибо
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KICK SOME ASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!
(seriously, they look badass!)
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The three comments before took away all I wanted to say. XD Both in improvement and praise. 
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Thanks
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Ahh, now I see it! X3 But I think you meant "shoot" not "shot", right?
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Oops, silly me hehe. Right,right
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Draw Danny Phantom Under The Influence Of Ryuma's Black Card.
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Actually I don't like then two diferent shows are mixed up...
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Well as a first attempt I can't really see anything wrong with it :/
Although Dan could be floating - or something - and Danny crouched down or fazing through the floor? o_O
Sam could have a more 'powerful stance'? Like, as if she was turning towards Danny with the wrist-ray over his head pointing at an enemy? Tucker could also be a little closer to the ground as if 'ready to pounce' kinda thing? Shadow could probably have a bit more leg room, with her right arm up in defense? And Clockwork is fine, though I can imagine his time-scepter besides his face with his hand grasping it or hovering above to button - or both
But all-in all it's an epic sketch 
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Okay
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Welcome and:
yay ideas
I think it's just a thing for Clockwork to have his staff with him at all times
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I like who you arrange them it looks very great! I think I would just space them out them give more elbow room, they do look alittle crowded.
But in all its look very daramatic
I like Clockwork in the back he's like " I already know how this will end." Hehe
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Thank you
Yeah I nned to give them space
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Its good for a first try!
Clockwork is totally the BOSS!
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Awww!!!! I love it little flappy clockwork
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This looks really cool!
I think if I'd suggest something, it'd be to move the back two characters (sorry I don't know their names) out towards the edge of the paper, so you have the front guy centered, the next two on either side slightly out, and then the back two would be even farther out, like a pyramid. That would leave less open space on the edges and not make them seem crowded.
Hope that helps, and again, it looks really cool!
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Thank you for your advice
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You're welcome, and goodluck!!
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