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There was a deceitful and dastardly creature, so radical on his ideas tjat though his race was known for their malevolent nature, even they cast his ideas aside.

A final argument with the leadership of his race was all it took for the creature to be exiled to from the haven above Equestria, to the ground below. Stripped of most of his powers, he took advantage of a friendly earth pony whose body served as a host, using the last of the creatures powers to transform into a facsimile of the pony inhabitants of the land.

The simple folk of that era were not the more educated of modern Equestria, and had recently been burdened with the loss of one of the two ruling monarchs of the time, Luna. Banished to the moon a few years earlier, Luna's sister, Celestia, took over all duties, leaving several issues to fall through the cracks due to the sheer workload she had now been burdened with.

In a far off town called Friendship Falls, the creature, still working on stabilizing his form, took advantage of a pony whose name history has forgotten. He saw in her an unsuspecting minion, one who was desperate for other ponies to simply take her seriously, listen to her ideas to help the town grow, and in the end, be somepony who could be depended on. He quickly struck a deal with her, one she eagerly agreed to.

Through underhanded techniques and carefully planned dialogue with the young pony, the hateful creature began to slowly set up the townsfolk into quarrels with each other, each chained to the next until finally violence broke out in the town.

It wasn't long after that, Princess Celestia finally took notice when a patrol of her royal guard went missing in the town, victims of the misguided townsfolk, and went to investigate herself.

At the same moment, the poor girl who this vile creature had manipulated finally broke down into tears as she watched her home and friends turn into shadows of their former friendly selves. She finally saw through the deception of this entiry, and quickly confronted him.

The male laughed at her, and told her tjat all he'd done was fulfill his end of the bargain they'd made. She'd wanted people to listen to her and take her seriously, and through his deceptive words and manipulative actions that she delivered for him, the town had listened to her, even thanking her as a true friend. It just so happened the ideas were not what she had intended at all.

The girl begged him to stop, but he reminded her of the bargain shed sealed with her word. He picked her up with his unholy like magic and made her watch as the town burned, revealing to her his absolute disdain for the sheer amount of happiness and friendship that oozed from it.

Calling out for a savior, any savior, the creature threw her with such force as to kill her, only to have his magical aura overpowered from above as Celestia arrived to confront this Malcontent in her lands.

To be continued. Feedback welcome. I've decided to slowly leak out backstory for my characters, as my computer is still down xD

Art by Brodogz
Malcontent by me
Celestia by Hasbro

BroDogz

Description
There was a deceitful and dastardly creature, so radical on his ideas tjat though his race was known for their malevolent nature, even they cast his ideas aside.

A final argument with the leadership of his race was all it took for the creature to be exiled to from the haven above Equestria, to the ground below. Stripped of most of his powers, he took advantage of a friendly earth pony whose body served as a host, using the last of the creatures powers to transform into a facsimile of the pony inhabitants of the land.

The simple folk of that era were not the more educated of modern Equestria, and had recently been burdened with the loss of one of the two ruling monarchs of the time, Luna. Banished to the moon a few years earlier, Luna's sister, Celestia, took over all duties, leaving several issues to fall through the cracks due to the sheer workload she had now been burdened with.

In a far off town called Friendship Falls, the creature, still working on stabilizing his form, took advantage of a pony whose name history has forgotten. He saw in her an unsuspecting minion, one who was desperate for other ponies to simply take her seriously, listen to her ideas to help the town grow, and in the end, be somepony who could be depended on. He quickly struck a deal with her, one she eagerly agreed to.

Through underhanded techniques and carefully planned dialogue with the young pony, the hateful creature began to slowly set up the townsfolk into quarrels with each other, each chained to the next until finally violence broke out in the town.

It wasn't long after that, Princess Celestia finally took notice when a patrol of her royal guard went missing in the town, victims of the misguided townsfolk, and went to investigate herself.

At the same moment, the poor girl who this vile creature had manipulated finally broke down into tears as she watched her home and friends turn into shadows of their former friendly selves. She finally saw through the deception of this entiry, and quickly confronted him.

The male laughed at her, and told her tjat all he'd done was fulfill his end of the bargain they'd made. She'd wanted people to listen to her and take her seriously, and through his deceptive words and manipulative actions that she delivered for him, the town had listened to her, even thanking her as a true friend. It just so happened the ideas were not what she had intended at all.

The girl begged him to stop, but he reminded her of the bargain shed sealed with her word. He picked her up with his unholy like magic and made her watch as the town burned, revealing to her his absolute disdain for the sheer amount of happiness and friendship that oozed from it.

Calling out for a savior, any savior, the creature threw her with such force as to kill her, only to have his magical aura overpowered from above as Celestia arrived to confront this Malcontent in her lands.

To be continued. Feedback welcome. I've decided to slowly leak out backstory for my characters, as my computer is still down xD

Art by Brodogz
Malcontent by me
Celestia by Hasbro

BroDogz