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Darkmoose84 — Invader Zim, Aliens -- Chap6
Published: 2007-06-12 08:45:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 1809; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 2
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Description Chapter 6 – Sensing
The Brynhild made its way towards the Odin at a slower pace than when it had during takeoff. The radio was now playing “Kick It” by Peaches and Iggy Pop. The stars seemed to drift on into nowhere.
“And that’s when I thought she might have left me for an alien,” Dib said, referring to Gretchen. “But either way, I’m still okay with it. I always felt Tak was going to come back.” Gaz was only partially listening. She was having yet another bad moment of intuition she wish she could have shut off. Suddenly, a strong force of violence hit her mind, and she knew it was from the Odin.
“Zim’s in trouble!” Gaz exclaimed, her voice breaking, “And so is Tak! There’s just been a horrible murder up there.”
“Is this another feeling? You mean Tak’s on there? Really? But what about the dead?” Dib asked spasmodically.
“Dammit, Dib,” Gaz asked in an agitated tone, “can’t this ship go any faster?” She then reached over to Dib’s control panel and hit the boosts to maximum. All she could think about was Zim’s well being, fearing that he might be one of the slain. And if they did meet, what would happen? She feared it was going to be a lot more awkward than that time Kimiko shared with her all the guy problems she had been having with Raimundo and Jack.
Dib reached over her shaking arms and typed the code to hack the docking gate. They landed right next to Tak’s ship as the gates behind them closed. Dib picked up his backpack and looked out, seeing the blast door to the hallway was already open and fearing the worst for Tak. Gaz felt the same way about Zim but would not say it to her brother. She ran over to the Irken shuttle and found two more pulse rifles inside, taking them both. She handed one to Dib and cocked the other.
“Gaz, you know I don’t like these things,” Dib said.
“Whiner,” Gaz chided, “It’s them or you this time. Now, come on. Lets rock.”
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Dark-Gamer-Kitsune [2010-04-05 23:32:20 +0000 UTC]

What excitement!

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Chibigirl16 [2009-12-12 19:57:39 +0000 UTC]

2 short!!! and awww they miss their alien beu(s)

ps- yea i cant spell

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JasmineAlexandra [2007-06-12 14:53:15 +0000 UTC]

your such a bastard! I'm sorry, I just like saying that, it draws attention to my comment! What a great story and the Dib and Gaz was short and sweet... but it was too short! What the hell? Now I understand, it is great that you wrote this much! You are a talented writer, and I think you'd deserve a break! You are up so late I'll bet! Thank you for writing such a marvelous tale, and I wish you would put this on fan fiction.net! but I'm adding this to my favorites to, because I so this! And I noticed that Skooge and Gretchen reference... now where would you get that suggestion? I must have more! your stories are like potato chips! you just can't have one!

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Darkmoose84 In reply to JasmineAlexandra [2007-06-13 19:38:44 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I just wanted to close on a light note and go to bed. The next chapter should be where everyone meets again.

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Alias-Hugo [2007-06-12 14:17:08 +0000 UTC]


XS reference! Kimiko's guy problems feature bigtime in my comic, so you get a for that one

Also, I have Gaz saying "whiner" on my iPod - she says it a lot in the show. That made me smile

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Darkmoose84 In reply to Alias-Hugo [2007-06-13 19:56:21 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I had to do the XS reference. I can see Kimiko with either Rai or Jack, so why not a love triangle? They happen, they're rarely fun, but they happen. And yeah, I had to use that ever so famous Gaz line. Glad you liked it.

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Alias-Hugo In reply to Darkmoose84 [2007-06-13 20:23:46 +0000 UTC]

In my XS comic I use that to spur Jack and Rai's rivalry (stops people pairing Rai and Jack, well, not really...)

It's told through Jack's eyes, the premise:there's two sides to every story.
He's a fun narrator.

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Darkmoose84 In reply to Alias-Hugo [2007-06-13 21:35:11 +0000 UTC]

Awesome. I look forward to reading it.

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Alias-Hugo In reply to Darkmoose84 [2007-06-14 16:24:43 +0000 UTC]

[link]
There's the link to the Cover of no.1 - with links to the other pages!
There's a lot to read so don't feel pressured to read it all - or at all

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Darkmoose84 In reply to Alias-Hugo [2007-06-15 13:06:03 +0000 UTC]

Actually, I just started; it's very funny indeed. You have a wonderfully active imagination. I'll elaborate further when time permits me.

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Alias-Hugo In reply to Darkmoose84 [2007-06-15 13:20:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks
This is what I imagine when watching TV
I've found a really good theme song for Gaz, since you include music in your story it got me thinking ~ "The Moon & Back" by Savage Garden, I think the words fit her quite well

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Darkmoose84 In reply to Alias-Hugo [2007-06-16 06:52:33 +0000 UTC]

Wow, glad I could get you thinking; that actually flatters me greatly. And yes, one wouldn't normally assume this of me, but I do like Savage Garden. Their first album made wonderful Hieronymus Bosch reference with images from "The Garden of Earthly Delight," and then their name itself shows they have a taste for Anne Rice. Here's a song that I listen to nearly any time I write: [link] yG7C_AfRdo I actually quoted it in a preview email I sent out to my class before I gave my senior seminar presentation. I felt like they had a deep connection to a possible spiritual epiphany Phil Collins had (I like his older stuff; I feel it was a lot more artistic, but then I'm also an '80s new wave dork). [link] .
Your comic has been quite funny so far. I look forward to reading the rest soon.

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Alias-Hugo In reply to Darkmoose84 [2007-06-17 19:21:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I shall get listening (I like nearly all types of music, as long as they're good )

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Darkmoose84 In reply to Alias-Hugo [2007-06-19 21:18:23 +0000 UTC]

Tell ya another singer who's really strange, Bjork. I actually really like her stuff, but she's an acquired taste. 30 Seconds to Mars obviously liked her enough to cover her song "Hunter", and I think they did an okay job, considering. But I do listen to some of her stuff whenever I need to write something surrealistic. She's not for everyone, but I like her.

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Alias-Hugo In reply to Darkmoose84 [2007-06-20 08:40:36 +0000 UTC]

My favourite is "It's Oh So quiet" ~ I like her older stuff, eg: Possibly Maybe, because some of her really new stuff doesn't resemble songs anymore!

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Darkmoose84 In reply to Alias-Hugo [2007-06-20 22:35:51 +0000 UTC]

I haven't heard "It's Oh So Quiet" but I did like "Possibly Maybe". "Hyperballed" and "It's in our Hands" were two more I really liked. Haven't heard any of her newer stuff, though, but I regret to hear that it's no longer musical.

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Alias-Hugo In reply to Darkmoose84 [2007-06-21 08:56:47 +0000 UTC]

From what I heard, she says she takes inspiration from babies crying and car alarms (no really!)

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