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DarkOfThree — Stop sign
Published: 2007-03-29 04:30:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 3241; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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if the wind stopswhat happens to the air?
perhaps it fades.
if the day stops
what happens to the hours?
perhaps they vanish.
if the heart stops
what happens to the man?
perhaps he dies.
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Comments: 12
Wow, really beautiful. It's clever, though-provoking, and has gentle colored images that please the reader in it's short condensed and nearly poetic form.
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Thank you very much. 
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Try working some more or those pure thoughts into poems;
I think you might have something there..
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Ah... I fear I haven't many of those. Something to work towards, I suppose.
Thank you. One can only hope for so much, eh?
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You're very welcome.
Yes, indeed.
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I took your advice and wrote something I think is satisfactory......though it certainly has a lighter attitude than what I usually have as the tone. Different is better, I suppose, in some instances.
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Then I have achieved my purpose. Thank you!
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Awesome. :3
...I only gave you a weird look because I was thinking: the wind won't ever stop blowing. It's perverted like that.
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I rather like it. Tis a nice phillosophical piece.
If you would like a scientific answer, I can give that too.
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My thanks. Heh, no to the scientific answer, I think my head would spin.
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