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DarkPhyre024 — The Fall
Published: 2004-03-27 00:54:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 278; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 15
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It hurts insidea flooding pain
nowhere to hide
like acid rain
my emotions flare
and I lash out
but I can't bear
to scream or shout
I fight as one
no help at all
my life is done
I start to fall
Everything's dark
a nonstop void
a menacing shark
I can't avoid
I'm taken whole
no place to go
black as coal
I fall below
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Comments: 10
hehe.. I dun even know how to respond to a ::sigh::
hmm.. if its a sigh for my 'being depressed', dun worry.. this was written last year..
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Nah, I was just kinda sad and frustrated when I wrote that comment. I just put that cuz it reminded me of how depressed I was
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aww.. 
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*grins* It's ok, you did when I was, but I'm ok now. Nice poem btw
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hehe.. well actually I wrote this like back in November I think..
thnks for readin it tho..
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i can relate to this and i love the words you used, ver descriptive
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Thanks! Its good to know others can relate...but, im sorry for your pain
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