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Description I'll put a poem here eventually...

September 30, 2012

My dA bud got tired of waiting for my poem and provided the following excellence:

The asylum in Brooksfield lied abandoned for years
Through time and erosion became the subject of fears
But of all these dark stories I found one far to queer
And should you go searching these halls, first lend me your ear

On a dark hallowed night, but just few years ago
A girl like yourself, ventured forth - just for show
But she never returned, and what she saw 's left unknow
Her corpse found 10 months later - bloody legs, stomach grown

Some say it was suicide, signs there for us to see
Some hush another tale, that she birthed a demonic seed
Just know then what you'll find inside, should you not take heed
Legend speaks of a child's voice, whispering - "Hug me"


Which is waaay better than any smartazz limerick I'd have put up here...
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Anovoca [2012-10-29 18:04:54 +0000 UTC]

The asylum in Brooksfield lied abandoned for years
Through time and erosion became the subject of fears
But of all these dark stories I found one far to queer
And should you go searching these halls, first lend me your ear

On a dark hallowed night, but just few years ago
A girl like yourself, ventured forth - just for show
But she never returned, and what she saw 's left unknow
Her corpse found 10 months later - bloody legs, stomach grown

Some say it was suicide, signs there for us to see
Some hush another tale, that she birthed a demonic seed
Just know then what you'll find inside, should you not take heed
Legend speaks of a child's voice, whispering - "Hug me"

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DarkRiderDLMC In reply to Anovoca [2012-10-30 02:59:06 +0000 UTC]

Is this yours? If so, can I place it under the graphic and credit you?

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Anovoca In reply to DarkRiderDLMC [2012-10-30 03:03:03 +0000 UTC]

Of course. That's why I wrote it .

(you mentioned a poem to come but I got sick of waiting and commissioned my own.)

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DarkRiderDLMC In reply to Anovoca [2012-10-30 06:29:31 +0000 UTC]

Well, it's a good thing SOMEONE put a poem there! Damnit Jim! I'm a biker not a poet! And what of poor Mabel, cut down in the prime of her time?

Thanks, I have used it and credited you

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Anovoca [2012-10-17 16:35:01 +0000 UTC]

featured [link]

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noro8 [2012-05-27 21:03:15 +0000 UTC]

Cool and creepy!

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DarkRiderDLMC In reply to noro8 [2012-05-28 17:30:38 +0000 UTC]

Ty!

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GypsyH [2012-04-13 18:48:05 +0000 UTC]

Yo Bro' - better not hurt my baby"

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DarkRiderDLMC In reply to GypsyH [2012-04-15 19:44:12 +0000 UTC]

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sed [2012-03-27 17:08:52 +0000 UTC]

Fascinating, Captain

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DarkRiderDLMC In reply to sed [2012-03-28 02:08:33 +0000 UTC]

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Whazizname [2012-03-19 03:45:14 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, sure, I'll hug you...; one moment...

Nice creepy scene!!

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DarkRiderDLMC In reply to Whazizname [2012-03-21 04:08:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I LOVE creepy!

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lenoueveo [2012-03-18 13:13:13 +0000 UTC]

scary

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DarkRiderDLMC In reply to lenoueveo [2012-03-21 04:08:46 +0000 UTC]

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kram666 [2012-03-18 09:59:51 +0000 UTC]



awesome, very nice work man

"To learn how to use your head, you have to go out of your mind."

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DarkRiderDLMC In reply to kram666 [2012-03-21 04:09:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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xmas-kitty [2012-03-18 00:02:30 +0000 UTC]

Extremely well done!!!

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DarkRiderDLMC In reply to xmas-kitty [2012-03-21 04:09:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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