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  • The Grand ASHWORTH Fortune: Volume 01, Chapter 03 - Expect The Unexpected
    (edited on 24th April 2008)

  • Format: Western, reading from LEFT to RIGHT


    Last night was very interesting for me. While I was doodling some designs for Ashworth's new attire in my home office I revised my back story for the first book and tried to tie it in with some very refereshing ideas to make the plot more interesting.

    It was a long and challenging process because I had to make sure that there were no plotholes in the story if I were to implement the new ideas. At the same time I had to make sure that the story still remained consistent with what I planned in the near future.

    I can tell you now a few things:

  • Ashworth's personality changed for the better (to fit the story). He is not the semi-emo character you think he is now. He's much more upbeat and enthusiastic but knows how to keep cool and be serious when he needs to.

  • All the main characters will show up instead of having our two main protagonists (Ruby & Ashworth) find them on an seek-for-crew-while-adventuring basis (i.e. ONE PIECE style where Luffy naturally recruits his nakama). That means Fei, Parmir, Healix, Geena & Laureen will all be present when Ashworth introduced them to Ruby.

  • Three new characters (from the good side) will also be created for the purpose of the new story. The names of these characrers are: Leon, Wintereis, Great Leader Sandra.

    Leon (nicknamed Magician) has the ability to mimic other people's styles and magic for a limited time. He also has his own signature power of manipulating gravity.

    Wintereis has the ability to command powerful ice, water and a hidden elemental magic.

    Great Leader Sandra is in control of a free-for-all guild for fortune hunters called: The Grand ASHWORTH Fortune.

  • Designs for the new characters have not been attempted yet. I will do them tonight.


    Anyway thanks again to everyone for your lovely comments and input on the cartoon series so far! There's so much to add to the plot and character developments of the cartoon series - it's very exciting times indded for me.


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    Comments: 34

    Crystal-Dream [2007-11-03 11:12:03 +0000 UTC]

    Ok, i know that this is a really late comment, but i have been so busy recently....

    anyways, Ruby is really lucky that she hasnt been detected yet, that was really close!
    anyways, cheers for creating new characters. I wonder how you got the name Wintereis. Because the word is a german one and means "winter ice" in english. and the name is already a good hint to his powers.

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    darkspeeds In reply to Crystal-Dream [2007-11-04 10:52:12 +0000 UTC]

    Don't worry about it.

    Yes I deliberately named her winter ice in German. ^^ Indeed it is a good hint to her magic abilities. *thumbs up*

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    InfernotheHedgehog [2007-10-30 00:44:58 +0000 UTC]

    Dude, this is getting pretty good!

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    draon19 [2007-10-28 19:28:58 +0000 UTC]

    cool story. I read all your comic's I like very ''Angel Of Darkness''

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    ad777 [2007-10-28 10:00:36 +0000 UTC]

    The Arthur's design is great. But, he has got really a... moustache?
    Quickly the suite!

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    XX-Midnight [2007-10-28 02:57:36 +0000 UTC]

    This is getting good. Can't wait for the next page!

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    EvyCrystal [2007-10-27 16:28:41 +0000 UTC]

    nice job ^_~ hehehe

    oh so your changing things! changes are good XD I just change Skull look! he doesn't have quills but hair now XD (Sega won't sue me XD) yay XD

    I think he looks awesome ^_~ (better then before!)

    I think yours changes are fine ^^ if it goes well with the story and makes it better go for it!!!

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    Remain-Kun [2007-10-27 13:24:00 +0000 UTC]

    Well if that isn't Ashworth. xD So,are Fei and the others already with him when he met Ruby? That's the part I don't really understand. oΓ΄ His new personalety sounds cool,can't wait to see him. And the new characters sounds interessting. I'll look forward to see their designs. Great page as always. ^^

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    ShadowofLatentMinds [2007-10-27 02:28:14 +0000 UTC]

    ARMY OMG!

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    angel-heart13 [2007-10-26 22:26:04 +0000 UTC]

    Nice page! Love the expressions!
    Woo plot changes! Keep up the awesome work! ^-^

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    CountChocola [2007-10-26 22:15:25 +0000 UTC]

    nice !

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    lightningninja [2007-10-26 20:15:17 +0000 UTC]

    thats one kick ass mustache

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    Emily-Young [2007-10-26 19:49:26 +0000 UTC]

    Cool!^^ Now Ruby is like a spy!^^

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    spdy4 [2007-10-26 19:42:47 +0000 UTC]

    Nice Arthur looks Awesome XD

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    SelThePorcupine [2007-10-26 19:25:00 +0000 UTC]

    sooo cooool;}

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    EWsonicgirlz [2007-10-26 19:14:04 +0000 UTC]

    I love that one

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    Arlion16 [2007-10-26 19:01:09 +0000 UTC]

    Awsome work! The story sounds like it's coming along really great! ^^ Same with the characters.

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    mikeala13 [2007-10-26 18:54:41 +0000 UTC]

    Hmm.... Well, I cant help but notice all the white on this page.... But besides that I like it.
    Hehehe, funny moustache man~ ....He looks French o.0
    So is Ashworth no longer badass?

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    phoenixdaughterAM [2007-10-26 18:29:36 +0000 UTC]

    So Ash has a personality change. Hmm....

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    HayaKenta [2007-10-26 16:19:12 +0000 UTC]

    Hmm... Interesting... Wonder what's gonna happen next. Also, that's great that you have some new characters for the good guys. I can't wait to see 'em! Oh... And it's okay if you changed Ashworth's character a bit. I don't mind. He's still cool to me.

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    CCG [2007-10-26 14:20:47 +0000 UTC]

    Target is in the Sacred Shrine? Hm...could that be Ashworth...? Or perhaps something/someone else...=O Another great page, Elson. x3 Things are certainly building up! I'm curious to see the new Ashworth...as well as the new characters you mentioned. ^_^ I think it's always good to have a wide range of different characters. Afterall, a story wouldn't really be much without their characters now would it? x3

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    Mafalda-chan [2007-10-26 14:10:54 +0000 UTC]

    Ouuuuh,suspens...

    A sacred shrine... Could it be that a certain character will appear?

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    RyuTheHedgeWolf [2007-10-26 14:07:27 +0000 UTC]

    Great page! Can't wait to see more!

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    TorisLaCroix [2007-10-26 12:22:49 +0000 UTC]

    very nice work ^^

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    FireFoxgirl [2007-10-26 12:21:39 +0000 UTC]

    Another great page!

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    Lord-Random [2007-10-26 11:48:28 +0000 UTC]

    Um... interesting

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    Foxy-Sierra [2007-10-26 11:45:42 +0000 UTC]

    Oooo, the Sacred Shrine sounds so sacred 83*shot for obvious*

    Awesome new page! The suspense is killing me >X3

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    KentaruZ [2007-10-26 09:57:45 +0000 UTC]

    wow!!! look at that mustache!!! amazing Elson, amazing!!!
    hehe, it is a great picture bro!!! n_n
    Can wait for seeing what happen!!!

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    Sketched-Chibi [2007-10-26 08:25:44 +0000 UTC]

    LOL Arthur spits when he talks (last panel lolol)

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    thundera584 [2007-10-26 08:00:11 +0000 UTC]

    oh i cant waith

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    ArohaTheStrange [2007-10-26 06:54:29 +0000 UTC]

    I am guessing you have moved from pencil's to ink?
    Ooooooooo, new characters! You have a bigger imagination than I have
    Can't wait to see what they look like!!
    And on the part where Ruby had to say: "Aye Sir!" Did she have to maker her voice kinda like a guys?
    Great comic page, as always!!

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    felousefarnayne [2007-10-26 06:53:54 +0000 UTC]

    every man in the army that commands needs a moustache it comes with the territory XD anyway sure looks really well drawn this page especially expressions nice work and keep it up ^^

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    SoftKeychains [2007-10-26 06:44:54 +0000 UTC]

    Funny whisker man, XD (or moustache, guess so....)
    For a close Ruby wasnΒ΄t be discovered^^
    Hum...a thing: That means Fei, Parmir, Healix, Geena & Laureen will all be present when Ashworth introduced them to Ruby
    I got doubts about it (sometimes I canΒ΄t understand since is english): thatΒ΄s means that Fei and the others are already with Ashworth when Ruby met him? Kinda, officially a crew already formed? Sorry for the question, but I really donΒ΄t get it......
    Great comic page as always^^
    See ya!

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    Kinggigasmon [2007-10-26 06:42:40 +0000 UTC]

    Ooh, it's getting good!

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