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(Theme was taken from Lunar series - Lunar 2: Eternal Blue

The song is called: "Desire")

Give it a go...! ^_^

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THE MESSAGE - CONCLUSION

WHAT I HAVE TO SAY? Not anymore for final pages, it's WHAT YOU HAVE SAID.

Your testimonials, opinions and deeper thoughts for the comic had summoned some critical themes and elements I wished to portray for the current Sonic Universe.

There were many of the ones I know who have mentioned the themes I had wished to portray for Chapter One - Spending a Day with Sonic, they were scattered throughout all the pages, but they didn't actually realise they did! ^_^...

Awesome. ^_~ Thumbs up to you guys. *thumbs up* ^_^

Here are some that were based on the previous critical page.


--- "Awww ;.;.. That is just so tender! Even though I had to read the wording a couple of times to get it, I found it sweet that Sonic would grant him 'adult freedom' on his birthday..

*Giggles to self* For some reason, that sounds a bit out-of-character of Sonic, on my part xD I guess it's because that's something a parent would say.. but Sonic and Miles seem to share more of a sibling relationship rather than a father-son relationship.. Sonic always seemed like the 'omniscient' big brother Miles looks up to in his eyes.

.. *Ponder* But it makes sense since Sonic was always looked up to back then by Miles and he had a giant "I wanna be just like him.." dream.. I guess that probably makes him happy as well because not only does he have freedoms, he reached that goal in a way.. he's gonna have adventures on his own from now on.. what he has always dreamed of..

.. How depressing as well xD It's almost like when you graduate college and have to go live out on your own without your parent holding your hand everytime you make an error.. that can't happen anymore.. you can't depend on that parent forever..

.. Wow. Sonic really does resemble a father-figure now O.O

Hopefully, Miles can realize that and thank him ;.; Even though Miles never saw his real parents, Sonic was the closest parent he had back then..

.. Wow. How blatantly airheaded for me to be yammering on about this and not even offering criticism on the art xD!!"


--- "And the final hug... is just... I dare to say... perfect.
In all these years that I've know Sonic and Tails I believe this is the first time that I see them hugging and I must say it's feels so right. With the friendship they both share one would think they've probably hugged several times but it was never seen before.
I really don't have a clue how you do it Darkspeeds but this page makes me feel very good. ^____^"


--- "awwwwwwwww... the true meaning of friendship... I LOVE SONIC'S EYES!!!!!!!! He rocks!!!!

Tails is sooo touched that he even dropped his "priced possession" the family photo? I guess freedom means a lot to me ne~"


THere's many more but I'll keep it short and praise the others for thier efforts next time. *huggles* ^_^ But to the ones I've mentioned above, thank you. ^_^ *hugs tight* XD X3


NEXT CHAPTER

Chapter 2 ~ My Bid Farewell Home



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REPLIES

On the next page - a blank page to end the chapter, nothing special.

Also the next deviation will contain so extras and sketches of (not forthcoming... ) but future chapters of Tails Away.

See you then and oh! O_O

THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR AWEOSME CRITICS AND FEEDBACK! O_O It made me cry reading them! O_O;;; *SHOT* XD No really it touched my heart reading htem and I couldn't thank you enough for it. ^_~ Ja ~ne! ^_^

*waves good bye till then. ^_~*
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Comments: 67

tygrisica [2013-03-25 16:44:40 +0000 UTC]

wow it's just awesome how you draw. I'm not particulary a fan of character older or younger of what i know them but i love it

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yesenix [2012-12-04 17:22:31 +0000 UTC]

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CDAntiAlias [2012-05-28 23:05:02 +0000 UTC]

1) That's awesome

2) I'm the first commenter in SEVEN years lol

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maggieSonicandTails [2012-04-23 10:39:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh it's so adorable !
I love this hugging !
Sonic and Tails are like brothers and sometimes father and son.
And the others have tears in their eyes. They're happy for their young friend.

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pamr3001 [2011-11-03 18:12:22 +0000 UTC]

nice but is so sad

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Zatosama [2011-08-02 03:51:07 +0000 UTC]

nice and sad ending.but i like it

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tailsthefoxx [2010-11-25 08:33:05 +0000 UTC]

Nevermind my comment below. I found the first page!! WOOHOO!! I just gotta say that this whole thing is very moving... *sniffle* I LOVE IT SO MUCH can I marry it? JK JK JK. But maybe I'll ask it out.

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tailsthefoxx [2010-11-25 07:42:50 +0000 UTC]

This is great. NOW WHERE'S THE FRICKING BEGINNING?! D:

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Tails02574 [2010-10-28 17:49:09 +0000 UTC]

c':
I still love this page!
I know it's ooooold, but it still leaves an impact.

Tails had parents. c:

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redfireblossoms [2010-04-21 20:33:47 +0000 UTC]

If I were a teacher and this was yr homework, id give you an A+. A biiig kiss 4 U ^3^ (kiss) LOL

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YinReneeMoonveilYang [2010-02-12 04:41:07 +0000 UTC]

u have talent,poor tails though..

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KyaTessa [2009-11-10 23:11:13 +0000 UTC]

Yay Tails!

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freebeatstudios [2009-07-04 00:51:14 +0000 UTC]

I acn't find the song....help?

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wolfluv158 [2009-03-03 10:40:39 +0000 UTC]

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LUV LUV LUV LUV LUV!!!>.👍: 0 ⏩: 0

FullNekoAlchemist [2009-02-25 04:49:19 +0000 UTC]

o wow, I'm looking forward to seeing this whole thing, this was the first page I stumbled apon.

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XxXcommieXxX [2008-12-16 00:56:28 +0000 UTC]

How do you make those manga pages? I am writting mangas but I don't know how to draw them and I have no clue how famous authors make their drafts. Can you tell me what program you use?

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charmythebee456 [2008-04-18 20:02:45 +0000 UTC]

''Sniff''.So beautiful!

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Tiki-Tails [2007-08-04 06:41:14 +0000 UTC]

*applaudes* This is the second time I read this and I still love it!

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HedgeCatDragonix In reply to Tiki-Tails [2007-09-27 19:29:52 +0000 UTC]

aww wow *crys*
thats soo beautiful
but wheres Tails's family?

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Tiki-Tails In reply to HedgeCatDragonix [2007-09-28 11:36:52 +0000 UTC]

He went to go look for his parents. I think that's what the whole thing's about...

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ODBOD [2007-07-20 01:19:54 +0000 UTC]

OMG, dude, that whole chapter was awesome! I want to cry.

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cOOkees [2007-07-02 08:59:32 +0000 UTC]

so knux and rouge are married...sonic and amy are married too right...what bout shadow??!

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Shadogal94 [2006-07-26 20:10:47 +0000 UTC]

i know that im commenting on a semi-old comic pic, but that pic is just touching! *sniffles*
i just LUV the emotion that you put into everyone! you even put some emotion into knuckles! its awesome.
its all TOO emotional, though *sobs* i cant... TAKE IT ANYMORE! *starts to cry uncontrolably*
its a great comic!

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shadowrules [2006-06-03 23:15:55 +0000 UTC]

once again, inspiration hits me again! i love your comics sooo much! i just hope you will continue all of them! LONG LIVE DARKSPEEDS (not in real life but you get the picture)!

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LovelyAnime [2006-03-14 13:18:32 +0000 UTC]

Good I have read this story a few times now.. Of some reason I get a happy feeling in side me when I read it /


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Please, mooooore chapters (L)

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racheart [2005-06-04 23:09:43 +0000 UTC]

must not cry ,must not cry ,must not......hell with it.....WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA(starts to drown in my own tears)ssssooooooo EMOTIONAL!!!!

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jonny777 [2005-01-21 06:35:18 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE the second panel down from the left That is excellent.
I like how in the last panel you show Tails with Sonic not there, giving the perspective of Tails being on his own (or at least that's how I interpretted it )
Great job

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iSymmetryKid [2004-02-29 04:01:34 +0000 UTC]

*Tear forms in eye* Man I was crying when I read this emotional scene in the comic. What can I say? I was happy for Tails. Couldn't help myself from doing it. Also, the first half theme I listened to
(archer's theme from Star Trek: Enterprise)
Also made me sob for Tails. god I got so emotional over this...
Great job man
*faves*

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Marcusthehedgehog [2004-01-25 23:12:06 +0000 UTC]

T_T *Sob*

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colinygtan [2004-01-19 11:57:35 +0000 UTC]

Love the expressions on everyone's face, looks so natural and touching.....especially the third panel ^_^'

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luleiya [2004-01-17 23:53:28 +0000 UTC]

What was the first thing that came into my mind when reading the last 2 pages? Simple....

"I'm so proud of my big bro Elson... ^_^"

No, I REALLY am. Just like Sonic is proud of Tails.

First of all.....it's amazing how much emotion you put into this comic. And how much it portrays you. But you already know the secret...... True art comes from the heart......^_~ *deep hugs* Wow......

Then, it's also amazing how FAST you moved on with the pages. O_O;; You have ALL what it needs to become a manga artist! ^_^

I'm wondering whatcha gonna do from now on? Which comic will you continue? The SA2 fanmanga? Or move on with Tails Away ?.......or maybe start Shadow: Road to Light? It doesn't really matter.....all of them are giving us pleasure to read! ^.^ *hug*

Can't wait bro! Luf ya like a sis! Huggies to ya! Mata ne! ^___^

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mayshing [2004-01-16 01:26:17 +0000 UTC]

What a sweet chapter. With a nice touching ending. ^^
You are stuck? You told me.
I don't see how you can be stuck at this point... Concept problem or???
Anyway... let me know the details if you need any help.

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gsg [2004-01-14 04:32:42 +0000 UTC]

This is such a cool page... the music fits perfectly with it...

I love this page, there's so much emotion poured into it. ^^
You drew everyone, so you can see how they react...

Wow, this is such a nice ending to this chapter, with Sonic giving Tails permission to go off on his own... Tails is finally responsible for himself now.

You kicked the Chaotix out?! ! You nut!

But really, great job on emo-scenes. (You can do anything! !)

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krusher [2004-01-13 10:50:08 +0000 UTC]

O___O!!! My words were mentioned as a chapter conclusion??
Darkspeeds-san... I don't deserve such honour! *bows*

Aww man... If the previous page had strong emotions, this one knocks out every single person who reads it!
And even if the feelings in here are somewhat mixed I couldn't help but laugh at the rendition of yourself! I think you're happy because of both things. ^_^
Totally awesome page to finish a chapter with. Everyone's beautifully portraited along with their particular expressions. Though I think that Shadow could at least give a little smile but that's just me.

May the next chapters be as good as this one or even better! ^___^

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jaggedice200 [2004-01-13 06:37:46 +0000 UTC]


A chapter finished ^_^
congradulations, your characters are also
happy I like the last panel with only a view of tails
very nice job

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hedgie-girl [2004-01-13 02:01:02 +0000 UTC]

Aww^^ thats a very cute ending to this chapter
it's all very sweet, and I like what Sonic said, Sonic has always seemed to be like Tails' big brother^^

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Kinichan [2004-01-13 01:14:49 +0000 UTC]

Goodness..........I believe this is my favorite page so far............. *cries with joy* ^-^ You did an awesome job big bro.............. I just love the 3rd panel with you instead of the chaotix~ X3 That's very funny~ xD Shadow looks so serious, and he seems to have no interest in what Sonic did for Tails-chan at all~ X3 This is a wonderful ending..... Awesome job Darky~ ^_~ *hugs you tight*

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sonictail [2004-01-12 15:23:13 +0000 UTC]

Well, what can I say, a satisfying finish t the chapter, no beach volleyball tho.

and what this reminds me of? Rajin Manga, when they finish off a chapter in there the translation tends to go that way. I like it tho and well, I await the next chapter.

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f3ng [2004-01-12 06:02:14 +0000 UTC]

Ok I feel a huge Tails adventure cominf up her. Cant wait to see it. I just love tail's expersion in the last frame. Great work.

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DarkHedgehog [2004-01-12 02:35:38 +0000 UTC]

wow,thats nice i like the part where you added yourself in the comic.cant wait for the next chapter

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shadow-freak [2004-01-11 22:05:58 +0000 UTC]

I luv how you did yourself on the third panel
I think you're happy more that you finished a chapter. Chaotix is supposed to be in that panel. I think only Charmy and Vecter would've shown any tears. Espio never hit me as the type of person that would cry.

*notices that Shadow is not crying*
Me: Shadow, I know your the badass type and all, but THIS IS AN EMOTIONAL MOMENT!!!!!!!! YOU COULD ATLEAST LIGHTEN UP A LITTLE!!!!!!!
Shadow: Dude, I'm not crying.
Me: You will at least look cheerful........ Or I will poke you........

*poke*
*poke*
*poke*
........................................ ....... *gets a knife to poke him with.*

Shadow: O.o;

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ShadyKitten [2004-01-11 21:48:30 +0000 UTC]

Awww... It's all over.. ;.; This Chapter has been incredible!! You have so much talent and I so totally can't WAIT to see your other comics and such. ;o; This page is so sad and so sweet... Everyone's all happy and crying and waah...

Ooogh~! I love the background in the first panel and the last panels are cute too. Very sad and gloomy yet meaningful. Omfg how cute! *Pokes the third panel with you in it and gives you a hug*

Awesome job, Darky. You keep it up okiez? ^^- I really look forward to seeing all your other pieces. Take care!!

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taeshilh [2004-01-11 20:56:42 +0000 UTC]

Wow O.O.. My rambles were actually mentioned in the description!
So much honor ;.;!! *Waves fist in the air* I AM SO NOT WORTHY xD *Makes a scene*

So.. yes! You're such a pro at making these touchy-feeling happy scenes ;.;! I adore the background in the first panel O.O Looks so bubbly and cool..

*Bursts into a fit of giggles on the third panel* That was so incredibly random xD!! But it fit so well! You should be happy to have finished this chapter => You should even give yourself a nice pat on the back for being so successful at it!

.. Something confuses me a little, though..

How old is Miles in the photo? o.o He looks 8-10 years old, but that can't really be because around that age, he met up with Sonic.. parentless and all..
Miles looks pretty mature in that photo.. and if he was as old as I think he is, wouldn't that mean that he clearly remembers them? I coulda sworn he had a faint memory of them and was probably separated at a very young and tender age..

But meh xD I'm confused easily. Sorry!

Still, awesome comic! => And congradulations on your first finished chapter! ^.^ Wish you luck on future chapters, though it's obvious from looking at the art and creativity on earlier pages that you definitely don't need it => *Waves a flag*

.. *Points* PENCIL xD *Shot*

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kati-kitani-st In reply to taeshilh [2004-01-12 00:36:34 +0000 UTC]

I don't know about Elson's version, but if you look at the original version of the picture the way I drew it, Tails looks like a good 4-5 from my style.

And I can't remember my 5th birthday... so...

Just thought I'd point that out....

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taeshilh In reply to kati-kitani-st [2004-01-12 20:28:10 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah! I saw that picture before ^.^ *Looks back at it again*

For some reason, Miles still looks 8-10 in your rendition ;.; I dunno.. maybe it's the height.. Or maybe that's just me Ironically enough, I think the main drawing on him at the top looks younger O.O..

Alas, I am insane xD Hope I didn't offend or something ;.;

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CosmicChaosX [2004-01-11 19:05:35 +0000 UTC]

Waaaitt one nano second, who is that person next to Knux?(Doubts SERIOUSLY Knux will ever get married reasons:He is shy, plus he hates company and to top it off he has a duty to protect the Master Emerald (Unless he builds his house right next to the Master Emerald then he can guard it!)
By the way SHADOW LOOKS SO BADA$$, why is everyone so sad?
Or maybe they are tears of Joy.

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RileyTheHedgehog [2004-01-11 17:33:55 +0000 UTC]

Wah! That was so great! I can't wait to see the next chapter!

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shadowgirl669 [2004-01-11 14:20:00 +0000 UTC]

Awesome Dark! n_n you did a great job on this whole chapter n_n *laughs at the 3rd panel* lol poor chaotix

awww and what Sonic tells him is just so beautifull.I cant wait to see more of this and see how he will do on his own n_n You are working on so many things that i am affraid you'll hit a burn out ! O_O ' Go easy on yourself

Take care and thank you for this wonderfull chapter n_n made me laugh like heck at times or want to cry like a lil baby at other times. (and sometimes both of them on a same page n_n '' )

*applaudes you* You did great!!

Take care Dark! n_n

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abikukat [2004-01-11 13:59:04 +0000 UTC]

awww so cute ^_^ beautiful chapter its nice that Tails can finally do what he wants :3
err -keeps on ranting about how great this is and all de other pages-

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yamithehedgehog [2004-01-11 10:32:34 +0000 UTC]

Awww, such a great end to a chapter!!!

*pets the Darkspeeds in panel 3* I think it could be both but mainly for Tails, I guess we've all been waiting for this and now its come. So pretty...*sniffle*

Awwww.....Knux is crying too! How sweet ^_______^ I guess he's proud of Tails too.....awww.....*snifflesob*

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