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Published: 2010-08-18 20:34:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 8234; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 83
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long time short comic i had with 's character Cassy CobraAs u can see i was not in my top shape when i scribbled this.Did it for fun
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it's not in my vocabulary
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what, the english language?
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engrish, i don't know that word
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I'm making fun of your garbled wording of english.
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feel free to correct my gibberish then
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"sorry hun am no summoned minion of u i am devilish tickler"
Would be better as
"Sorry hun, I'm not one of your minions."
Just remove the redundant crap, word the sentence properlly, punctuate it, and your result is a line of dialogue that isn't totally shitty.
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Wow, sean. Still an asshole, I see. -_-
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It's called criticism, you hairless fish. Notice how I'm trying to help.
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No...criticism would be something along the lines of "Hey look, you're tryin' your best here, but the grammar and spelling of your artwork could use some improvement. Here are some dictionary/thesaurus websites for you." Instead of "UR SPLLNG SUX. FEEX EET." And before you "criticize" me on that last comment, I'll point out to you I'm making a POINT. That you're a jerk, and your definition of help is something interesting, to say the least. I would hate to see what YOU define as being an asshole.
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I like how the quotes that are supposed to be mine are spelled like some chump wrote them. Nice touch.
Anyway, what's it to you? I believe praise is destructive, so that's why I'm so vituperative with my criticism. I don't have a very high tolerance for things that aren't as good as they ought to be. Forgive me for not sharing your brand of false morality.
Did you know that this kid went on to get his comics published? He's cashing in on this stuff now. Now it doesn't matter if his grammar is wacky, because he's his own man.
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Well, that's your belief. It's incorrect, but that's your belief, and you can hold it because free speech is protected here. For now. And I don't have false morality, but there's a phrase I know called "sparing one's feelings." Maybe you've heard of it. It's what separates civilized humanity from the /b/tards of 4chan. Again. Read my earlier comment. I know you didn't, and won't, but I may as well try anyway. I get the SAME point across without crushing the author to the point of tears. Artists (and other creative professionals) have quit because of people like you, Sean. And as for what's it to me? Well, I'm just a nice guy. Something that seems to escape you. So, when I see people getting f-ed with unfairly, I step in. Shady doesn't deserve your ire. Maybe, when you got started with Sassy, you just thought you could go on and rip anybody you wanted, huh? Sorry, it doesn't work that way.
BTW, really mature of you to go and insult my profile. Shows more about your character than I could ever bring to light.
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I'm not responsible for the way people interpret my words.
For the record, I've never used 4Chan for anything. I think you may be a little prejudiced.
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owkidoki i'll keep that in mind
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Hee hee hee!!! Who doesn't enjoy ticklin' Cassy? X3 Adorable lil comic! It's always cute seeing Cassy getting herself in trouble! X3 Luv it!
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i dunno , one who doesen't want to get tickled back ?? 
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It's cute! And I always enjoy seein' Cassy laugh! X3
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who doesen't XD o yea Cassy herself meaby
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Last full critique of the night. As this is a sketch, full commenting is a little difficult.
Cassy is rendered quite cute in this comic. Itβs hard to make scalies look attractive to people more used to hair, but I think you pulled it off nicely. Her eyes are very sexy and expressive, and her tiny fangs are quite adorable.
Her hands in the first image are very articulate and I love the billowing of smoke that obscures the room. Her hands and face continue to do an excellent job of portraying emotion through the next two images, with the waving away of the smoke and her surprise at being wound up.
Of course, itβs the final image that I like the most, with the adorable laughing expression, the very soft and cute feet, and the almost feathery tickling tentacles. And the position is one of my all time favorites. Your avatar manages to pull off a very evil expression.
All in all, a fun and enjoyable comic. You really should do more of them. Stellar work!
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Thanks ,i appreciate the load of feedback since i get almost none that helps me improve so these are a great help.
True but this whas more of a quick doodle then more of a good sketch rly.
Eh am happy with the first 2 , rest looks so off to me but i whasen't rly making looking it the same.
Aaaaah hands , so many angles , so little experiance in drawing em >< but ya some worked out some need more detail on em.Smoke effects or any other hard to do in pencil it's something at least to show whats going on.
Gha thats the ugliest of all imo, i messed up the angle and proportional rating of her body but that wahs tthe last panel and i whasen't feeling up for finishing so that whas a very quicky, still yea am evil XD
i'll try , depends on what i come up with and when i have the chanse/feeling for it.
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