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Waterfall belongs to undertale 
Undertale belongs to Toby fox 
Art belongs to me 

Hope you like it 
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Comments: 25

3jaager [2017-10-06 17:48:04 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


You can clearly see that this is an area around Waterfall. You can see that it is Waterfall from the game Undertale by the echo flowers and the blue looks of the ground. There is also a wall in the back with a tunnel that proofs that it is under de ground. The only min point is the tunnel. It has some dept but the front looks out of place. For originality it is a place that does not exist in the game. I also haven`t seen a waterfall looking like that before. Well to be honest I haven`t seen manny drawn waterfalls. For techniek 4 stars. The waterfall and the water are wonderful and must have taken a lot of time. The Flowers are looking great to and there is enough dept. For impact a 3,5. It looks great but the front of the tunnel looks really out of place. Futher this drawing looks great and I will and my critique here with a good job to the maker.

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Eclipse-The-Awesome [2017-10-07 02:20:21 +0000 UTC]

I will write a critic for this! Just not tonight

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Dashigriffins In reply to Eclipse-The-Awesome [2017-10-07 11:28:11 +0000 UTC]

Ok then 

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3jaager [2017-10-06 18:00:43 +0000 UTC]

It looks good

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Dashigriffins In reply to 3jaager [2017-10-06 18:03:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you and thanks for the critique 😊

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3jaager In reply to Dashigriffins [2017-10-06 18:05:48 +0000 UTC]

No problem and I have a qeustion about it. Why can you vote foryour own critique???

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Dashigriffins In reply to 3jaager [2017-10-06 18:10:12 +0000 UTC]

I think its to let it show when its fair  or dont let it show when its unfair, i'm not sure 

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3jaager In reply to Dashigriffins [2017-10-06 18:13:06 +0000 UTC]

But I made it. I cant see the point. I made it so You already have my opinion. This is weird. I am going to click and see what happens.

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Dashigriffins In reply to 3jaager [2017-10-06 18:14:07 +0000 UTC]

I dont know 

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3jaager In reply to Dashigriffins [2017-10-06 18:19:34 +0000 UTC]

Do you  got anny complains about it? I am asking because it is my first critique.

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Dashigriffins In reply to 3jaager [2017-10-06 18:20:18 +0000 UTC]

No, i think its great (i haven't seen many pics of waterfall either so i have to get as many references as i can) 

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3jaager In reply to Dashigriffins [2017-10-06 18:23:02 +0000 UTC]

It cost a lot of time and talent to become so good.

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Dashigriffins In reply to 3jaager [2017-10-06 18:24:02 +0000 UTC]

Yeah 😓 i guess i should just keep practicing 😄

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3jaager In reply to Dashigriffins [2017-10-06 18:26:16 +0000 UTC]

What no! You got me wrong. I am telling that you are.

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Dashigriffins In reply to 3jaager [2017-10-06 18:28:29 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh 😅  thank you ❣

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3jaager In reply to Dashigriffins [2017-10-06 18:29:07 +0000 UTC]

You desurfe it

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Dashigriffins In reply to 3jaager [2017-10-06 18:31:04 +0000 UTC]

     

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rotburn-capricus [2017-10-06 15:30:57 +0000 UTC]

Look at that dazzling glow!
No! Look away before your blinded by the beautiful color~! 
Nuuuuuu!

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Dashigriffins In reply to rotburn-capricus [2017-10-06 15:33:04 +0000 UTC]

YOU LIKE IT ???

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rotburn-capricus In reply to Dashigriffins [2017-10-06 15:45:59 +0000 UTC]

Yeshhh

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Dashigriffins In reply to rotburn-capricus [2017-10-06 15:49:47 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOUUUUU OWO

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rotburn-capricus In reply to Dashigriffins [2017-10-06 15:55:29 +0000 UTC]

Just a little less bright in your water, a little more bright in the darkness to see more detail: possibly grass or more flowers. 
It's a great background overall, very mysterious.

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Dashigriffins In reply to rotburn-capricus [2017-10-06 16:08:59 +0000 UTC]

Someone is supposed to be where the giant patch of flowers are missing so i just wanted critique before i did the rest (this is for a very important friend so i wanted to get this perfect)

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rotburn-capricus In reply to Dashigriffins [2017-10-06 19:14:22 +0000 UTC]

You got this!!!
Woot!

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Dashigriffins In reply to rotburn-capricus [2017-10-06 19:15:22 +0000 UTC]

WOOOOO THANK YOU ^0^

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