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Published: 2010-01-09 10:04:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 4168; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 62
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"you should have healed me!"the elf guy's armor was rushed so please excuse the blurry details.
hiatus made me miss much of the challenges on
gotta make up for it
nude version>>>>>[link]
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Nice pic, cool style, sexy outfit....What more could you possibly want?
Well here are a few things:
In some spots the window lights need fixed, like there are some spots that arent yellow underneath on the highest windows.
Also your right the armor could use some tweaking. The helmet seems a little messed up, but you have a deadline, i get it.
Great job!!!! I hope you continue your fantabulous art. P.S. love the expression on the girl! She's cool.
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dawww thanks dude! of course i'll continue!
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Ternyata beda gambar bisa berarti beda hahahah~
Nice art though
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gw emg master membelokkan maksud sebenarnya
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I like lots of things about this picture. Background is lovely and cozy, anatomy is quite decent (not talking about the chick's neck here)hair are magnificent (for the chosen style that is).
What is killing it for me are the faces. I don't understand them at all. They are not cute enough to fit the overall style and not real enough to look realistic, they are somewhere in the middle. It's confusing. Everything is equally soft / blurry again, the hardest part of pic are the hair, they are well defined. But armor should be harder than hair. Also you would benefit from better use of ambient lightning. The warm light coming from the buildings is so strong that both actors would be quite affected by it, armors, skin, everything.
Keep up the good work man, you are getting better.
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yeah it was VERY challenging to get a lot of elements in order on this one
Dang i always suck at necks!
but it was a fun 3 days anyway.
LOLZ now i understand what looks like a hard edge, okay so i just need to apply it to the rest of my art
as for the faces, you think it's okay for a face to be 'in between' realistic and cartoony? coz i feel happy about how they look right now
could you pretty please point out the blurry parts in this one for me? *puppy eyes*
i bet you would say "all of them"
btw i've posted in CA, and boy it's kind of hard finding my way around the controls, say how do i reply directly to a user? can i only reply to the thread?
oh yeah thanks for the time and the help on that site. i see more time going to be busy on it.
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About the faces - you can of course develop your unique style. With this picture there isn't really anything all that wrong with their faces, but it gives me a feel of unexpectedly taken photo. When you do a fantasy picture people expect the protagonists to look as cool / cute / tough / whatever as possible. To me it looks like the boy is eating and the girl is uncomfortable. (body pose + her mimic)
Blurry parts - the helmet looks like it's made of caramel and guy's armor is still way too soft given the material we suppose it is.
I checked your first post on CA and you got some nice feedback! You can use the "thanks" button if other users are nice enough to help you. More thanks = nicer you seem = more people willing to spend some time and post guidance. You don't need to answer directly to specific user, just follow the posts. The thread is there for others to see and learn, too. If you want to address somebody in particular just use the "quote" options or write down their name before you answer.
Hope that helps!
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i couldn't hold back my grin when u said it was made of caramel
haha caramel armor, stats: +1 to defense, special bonus effect: increases the chance of bug type monster spawn in an area around you
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God damn it that would be nasty, but on the other hand bugs are usually quite easy to kill and if you happen to be a low level noob, it could be some sweet experience points.
Buy caramel helmet newbs! LEVEL UP!
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an MMORPG like that would fail 1000 times...
but then again, i have heard of a poop helmet
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makacih!
duh GMT nih, bule pada bo2 akwkawk
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ah iya bener,,, wakakak,, submit malem" tuh bule pada standby semua
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iya lgs bengkak viewsnya...
lha kalo siank? lemoooooot
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what are you speaking???????
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patriot code
indonesian, care to join?
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