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Published: 2010-06-29 20:12:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 2443; Favourites: 79; Downloads: 15
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"Haha Nafi slowly you should know that you cant make fun about me!""Hey.. Kharun? Do you remenber? This is the place we first met each other... haha I remind I fall over you 8D"
"Oh my dear.. these was.. is so typically for you haha
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Wow ;m ready xDD Okay i like this one.. even though the background doesnt look like I want it..
naa... Im to tired to write much... Q_Q
Sorry guys!
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The expression of the characters are fitting for the story to go with it, and they set the mood for the image effectively. I like this.
I also like the the colouring on the characters, and equally I like the colouring on your background, although it seems poorer than the one on your characters.
The main problem with this drawing is that it feels disjointed.
and I think thats because of the scaling of the characters against the background.
Adding a light source to your trees and checking the constancy of the light source(S) and it/their direction against the characters too would help. A little more influence from the background bar the few tufts of grass.
The figures themselves are well drawn for what they are and the communication between them is clear and expressive. I love the direction of the tufts on the figure standing but why hasn't gravity taken affect to the mane of the lion underneath?
I don't really know what else to say about this image other than the fact Its enjoyable but feels flat.
All aside,Good work!
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Oh my, where to begin!
Now the character's emotions catch my eyes. Although, it kind of looks like Kharun is a bit cross eyed. I would recommend fixing that e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="
The background is nice, however the grass looks a bit like fog. Perhaps, try using a hard brush and use the technique of shading....?
Also, I don't think I see any lighting. Just the base colours and shading.
Perhaps some highlights would make it look detailed.
The trees have a nice effect, although they look flat. Not round, nor does it have shading around the edges to give it the round approval.
And one more minor thing. The claws look strange, they look flat.
Besides that, everything else is good! I like the distant background. the anatomy is very well done, you have an extreme grasp of anatomy, which is excellent. The emotions. The pose choice was also nice. Well done!
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Okay first thank you for the fast criticque. xD
The problem with his eyes is.. he looks to Nafi, in my first version he looks more cross eyed. But I try to fix it 
And next time I will try with a hard brush, I just don´t understand how you mean this with the technique of shading. Did you mean I should make some colourlayers like in the shading?
And yeah not really any light 
Thank you for the tip with the trees
And can you help me with the claws? Or say whats wrong? I have big problems with them, this is why I don´t draw them most oft the time |D
and thank you >.< Also for the criticque. I think it will really help me
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I aim to help when it comes to critiques xD
Well the claws, you know how they look "flat" at the base of the claw? Well try to make it look like a diamond. Like this--> [link]
If you look at the claw at the bottom of the ref, you can see that it is round and more in a diamond shape.
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okay thank you
I try to fit it the next time
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also ich find das is das beste was du je gemal hast
das is echt fats perfekt, der blick von Kharun(?) is zwar meiner Meinung nach i-wie seltsam aber ich mags total ♥
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awwr4 danke
okay alle meckern an dem blick herum xD Ich glaub ich editiere doch...
XD
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mhm wäre viell. nich schlecht
dann wärs perfekt -knuddel-
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Yaay, das kenn ich doch auch xD
Ich finde das Bild voll klasse~
Das einzige was ein wenig seltsam aussieht, ist dass Kharun ein wenig schielt xD
Der Hg ist zwar einfach, aber er sieht toll aus
Ganz besonders das Shading (was ich wohl nie hinbekommen würde) gefällt mir <3
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awwwr danke
Das shading ist garnet so schwer.. ich dachte auch das wäre sooo schwer xD
und kharuns Blikc werde ich wohl aktualisieren xD
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Wow, ich liebe das Muster des größeren ... etwas. Ich will jetzt nicht falsches sagen.
Ist der Hintergrund meiner? 
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awwww >.< ja ich wollts noch verlinken und dich überraschen ffff
Sorry :0 warte xD
*editier+
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Hehe.
Ich mag das aber, toller Job!
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Ne xD Acherra ist die Rasse von Kharun
oh und danke
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