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vick330 [2007-11-16 17:17:09 +0000 UTC]

Overall an exellent piece, my only comment would be the left arm looks too long with the elbow reaching lower than the right one. If you measure, the left hand would reach the knee instead of mid-thigh. Since this was done entirely cg I am surprised that that's the only thing that's really off, I could never do a piece 100% cg myself.

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carlfoxmarten [2007-10-28 06:09:24 +0000 UTC]

Overall it's actually a very good piece.

My only comment would be on the hair (unless that's your art style, in that case you probably should leave it that way) as it doesn't quite look enough like strands of hair and a little more like a mop.
I'd recommend using slightly longer strokes on the highlights with a little less blending between them and the rest of the hair a little darker for contrast.

Hope this helps,
Carl.

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Dyemelikeasunset [2007-10-28 05:47:46 +0000 UTC]

try a different color for the shading on the toga instead of grey...like....try pink o3o

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