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Dave-Dreamer — The Fun Begins

Published: 2011-12-07 22:01:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 6497; Favourites: 63; Downloads: 227
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Description Seriously? You didn't see this coming? Needless to say our heroines have fallen prey to a nefarious mystery man. What's in store for our hapless trio? Only daneremo01 [link] and I know for sure.



Dazzler, Invisible Woman, She-Hulk and the villain of the piece (c) Marvel
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Comments: 16

jimbor [2012-11-29 17:25:51 +0000 UTC]

I guess we all knew the preceeding panel were leading up to some thing like this .
But I do want to say that I very much enjoyed the "opening sequence " and appreciate that you took the time and effort to make such a nicely detailed entertaining and satisfying introduction.

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Dave-Dreamer In reply to jimbor [2012-11-29 22:37:09 +0000 UTC]

Originally it was just gonna be the girls performing for charity. But then I got the idea of having them kidnapped after the show. This project started from a little acorn and grew into a tree.

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jimbor In reply to Dave-Dreamer [2012-11-30 08:56:06 +0000 UTC]

It grew into a wonderful and mighty tree ,I must say

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Dave-Dreamer In reply to jimbor [2012-11-30 09:44:39 +0000 UTC]

Every now and again I go back and re-read my stories and find I actually still enjoy them. Normally it's "GAD! What was I thinking?"

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jimbor In reply to Dave-Dreamer [2012-11-30 17:40:06 +0000 UTC]

That( Gad...) is a normal reaction ,though (I find) taking another look at earlier stories is a useful "learning tool" ( how could I have made that phrase /scene / sentence /paragraph better)
But I believe that this story stands up to repeated re readings.And part of the reason for that is this opening sequence.

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Luckyman64 [2011-12-15 00:16:33 +0000 UTC]

Hot!!!!!

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Dave-Dreamer In reply to Luckyman64 [2011-12-15 00:30:43 +0000 UTC]

sssssssss

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Nonagesimal [2011-12-08 10:18:52 +0000 UTC]

I fear for the trio with the word 'nefarious' used.

After all, I spy 3 coke cans.

In films, if you see a gun then that gun eventually goes off.

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Dave-Dreamer In reply to Nonagesimal [2011-12-08 20:56:13 +0000 UTC]

Your fears are justified. The coke cans are an unintentional red herring. The drug was in the green bottle.

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jimbor In reply to Dave-Dreamer [2012-11-29 17:29:44 +0000 UTC]

Green bottle? Am I not seeing something ? Or is it off screen.

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Dave-Dreamer In reply to jimbor [2012-11-29 22:16:58 +0000 UTC]

Take a closer look at the coke can near the edge of the picture.

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jimbor In reply to Dave-Dreamer [2012-11-30 08:54:38 +0000 UTC]

Ahh . I see it know . I should have looked closer

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Dave-Dreamer In reply to jimbor [2012-11-30 09:45:25 +0000 UTC]

The "Where's Waldo" of knock out drugs.

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Nonagesimal In reply to Dave-Dreamer [2011-12-08 21:21:15 +0000 UTC]

That villain got me!

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Dave-Dreamer In reply to Nonagesimal [2011-12-08 21:34:35 +0000 UTC]

This is a story I always wanted to see featuring one of the heroines. But any chance to include Dazzler in the mix. I hope you like the results when done.

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Nonagesimal In reply to Dave-Dreamer [2011-12-08 21:37:48 +0000 UTC]

I eagerly await.

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