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davechisholm — LGTU page 13
Published: 2007-10-11 23:42:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 1698; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 15
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let's go to utah page 13!best thing ever!
the song is called 'david's country,' by a slc band called 'band of annuals.' they are awesome. look 'em up.
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thanks! i think it turned out OK here..
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Finally I can leave a comment! The site's been down all day! Love the last few pages, and I think that the transition between timelines is done really well here! great stuff, Dave!
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thanks! keep reading...it gets better, i promise...
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Just a thought, I hope you don't mind unneccessary criticism, but when I got to this page and he hits the horn again, I was thinking maybe it would be cool if they both just did the "Close Encounters" thing with their mouths instead of the horn.
But ey, you're the man behind the scenes, I'm just throwing in a thought I had
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yeah, that's a cool idea. that will happen later in the story, because the dave character is still very much "in his shell." leif's gotta get that uptight prick out in the real world a bit!!!
haha
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Leif looks like he's had too MUCH of the real world! Hehe every time I picture him I envision that nightmare version...
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haha well it's only a dream, friend.
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thanks! this page was really hard for me to do for some reason. blah i'm just glad it's done and looks ok.
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