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Published: 2015-06-25 20:27:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 1910; Favourites: 62; Downloads: 21
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Introducing my new genie Bula, She is a bubble genie who has the power of bubbles
Comment or Critique on how you like her because I'll make more of her real soon
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I'm going to start off by saying that this piece is gorgeous! I love all the highlighting, it looks great! So I am going to give some constructive criticism and tips. If you don't like criticism, please don't read this critique. I don't give criticism to offend anybody, I give it to help. I'm going to start off by saying the automony could use improvement, now I am not the best at atomony either, and in my opinion is one of the most difficult parts to a drawing. aa! boobies, I hate drawing them so much! Breasts are very difficult to draw, especially when you have a bigger size in mind, I admit when I try to draw bigger breasts it looks like balloons hanging from their chests. I think that it would be better if you look at a few more refrences. so If you are looking to draw larger breasts look up anime girls, we all know they are famous for their big tata's. And I've noticed her torso is incredibly tiny, and then goes to a huge waist, if you are trying to go for a curvy style, you will have to make the torso thicker so it looks like it can hold up her upper body, and look more natural. The last thing I want to talk about is her outfit. There really is nothing wrong with it, but the only thing bothering me is her jewelry. The necklace looks like that its going to snap her little neck, so try making the beads a little smaller. And the earring, it just really bothers me, it looks like a giant ball on her ear, and looks like its going to rip her ear. try making that smaller too to make it look natural.
I hope this helps! I am exited to see more come from you! Have a wonderful day!
~NyaChan
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shit i brought up the torso thing but i said waist
i dunno my anatomy sobs
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Hey random person! I found this via someone else's critique so i thought i'd give one also
1. the colours are rather nice and i really like the bubbles- they look like actual bubbles! She has a nice and seemingly interesting design, you have a unique style, also i like how your lines are confident and not the sketchy things i see a lot, Also, a bubble gene? Interesting concept... But how much can she do with bubbles? Look all pretty n' shiny n' stuff?
2. Now what i think you could think about fixing. The shading on the hair and pants seems to be placed rather randomly on her--- I'd suggest not shading those lines on the fringe bit--- i might just be nit-picking but yeah, Over shading can be a real issue sometimes but i guess its fine for now. Also, the glow in the eye is really strong, where is that light coming from? The earring she has (And i see most of your drawings have big earnings) Look like they could rip off her ears, sometimes less is more, maybe a smaller earring? Lastly; the body, the waist is to small and the neck is to thin; While you may have your own style but it would still be good to be relatively anatomically correct, she is thin and curvy like jasmine (Who i see alot of in this character) off Aladdin- Who has one of the most impossible body shapes ever, I'd suggest giving her a bigger waist- she can still be skinny but within human standards-- she needs a rib cage and all that magical jazz.
All in all, this is a cute piece of art and i hope to see more in the future (And i don't critique much so i hope its ok...)
So... So very shiny...
Cheers!
~Rando
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Wow! Amazing! Fantastic! Very very very beautiful! I fascinated with this art! Good artwork ^^
I love this hair style, looks beautiful and coldly calculated. I love her body, perfect body! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
The shadow and color is perfect too! How can you make it perfect like that?! LOL!! XD
The background and bubbles are sparkling in my eyes XD
The outfit style is simple but cute and much combined with her personality. She looks like a mermaid, a beautiful mermaid e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
This art had nothing to blame about! Keep up the good work, make more arts of her! Damn her cute! XD
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I really like the detail you put into this piece. The line work looks good!
I especially like the outfit you chose for the character it fits her perfectly. And it really goes great with the back ground excellent job.
I particularly like the bow in the back of her hair and the ear rings with her out fit its goes great.
The facial expression fits her nicely.
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Here goes Bubble Genie Bula by dsargentX
Vision: She have a original look. Bracelets and earrings are really fit her body this time. Her bubble Powers are looking cool? Thats nice but we need know her personality a little bit more. Fine shadings and fine colour combination you have. Background is Nice. Bubble effects are really good. Background looks great and charming. Eyes are nice.
Originality: Well it's original. And have nice background. Pose is Nice
Technique: You should work on hairs. You will get better in time.
Impact: Δ°t's nice.
Overall: Δ°t's a nice picture. Δ°t's good but you need more pratice.
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Ack I accidentally clicked the unfair button while scrolling through the critiques!
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Thank you for understanding ;w;
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everyone makes mistakes lol
it's happened me too...
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ok this has gotta be my new favourite artowkr EVER! like bubbles... and a genie... who wouldve ever thought to do this its the most perfect combination ever! and i love the white crop top and bagy pants with the blue long hair! i also love the hint of black and the beaded belt and necklace! the bow in her hair is so cute too and she looks so mysterious yet sassy the way her eye is which is amazing! and the backround with the bubbles ust works perfect overall there is nothing wrong with the piece of art work!
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This is such an amazing work! A truly stunning piece, the use of light and shadow is nicely done. I really like the colors and proportions. Her eyes, hair, and everything are well done! I don't know if this girl is in a show or not but you did really good. It almost looks like you got your work from an actual show! LOL! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
The things I like about her:
*her hair (I love hairstyles)
*her eyes (Oh, so pretty)
*her body (Oh, so fit!)
*being a genie with bubbles? (So cool)
This would surely have a great impact! I can't wait to see more art of her. XD Keep up the good work, fellow Deviant.
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very nice done!
although waist should be a bit larger and belly buton a bit up^^
nice work!!! You've improved a lot! and I love the colors and the atmosphere!!
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I love the colors, the white looks really good on her.
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I find that the color use in this piece so amazing. It's such a cute piece of art.
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I really like this character! She's so beautiful and mysterious!
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oh lovely. would love to know more about her
Lura: yeah more bubble Genies!
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