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Published: 2016-03-31 03:07:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 1047; Favourites: 70; Downloads: 4
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Islabell is very excited about the first time she has ever saving the day
Islabell belongs to Me
Art by Me
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I must say, this is very cute. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="
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You did ask for a critique, so I must give you what you asked for. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="21" height="19" alt="
• The highlights are too much. There is too much emphasis on the highlights and it hurts my eyes. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="
• The lines are a tad bit wobbly, and the outline goes in places that it isn't supposed to go, for example, the bow on her pants.
• The shading could use some work... It seems like to me that shadows were randomly added in any place possible.
• The hands are great. I kind of suck at doing hands. On good days, I can draw them. But it looks like every day is a good day to draw hands for you. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="19" height="19" alt="
Keep up the good work! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n… " width="35" height="31" alt="
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Thanks for the critique but I disagree of most of what your'er saying but I agree with the rest.
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Okay. I'm not good with words. I want to say something but I don't know how to say it and it comes out with something that isn't even true. Curses.
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Maybe I should get a translator for critiquing. ;-;
When I said "the highlights are too much," what I REALLY meant was that it was too BEAUTIMOUS for me.
When I said "the lines were wobbly," I meant that you do a great job of not using the blur tool all the time. It's BEAUTIMOUS
So the whole critique was supposed to say that you have achieved BEAUTIMOUSNESS. I can't use words the right way. I have "special needs" if you know what I mean .-.
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Her facial expression is very cute! When doing cell shading I would suggest hard lines of shade not soft but thats just my preference
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Here's How
About My Art Style, Big Earrings on My OC's?Hey everyone! I wanted to just tell you a small history about how I drew my art and the designing of my characters. The number one question is how did I draw my OC's and why do they have big earrings?
First answer is that I sketch on paper with a pencil, ink it, erase pencil markings, scan it, crop, and used a art programming software to color and shade. I know I haven't used a tablet but a different mixed way.
Second answer is that an anime character designer named Tsukasa Kotobuki who done Saber Marionette,VS Knight Ramune & 40 Fire and Cyber Team in Akihabara has inspired me to make my own characters in what it is today. I really don't see much characters wearing big earrings so I drew therm for my OC's.
I hope you know how I drew my OC's and why they look the way they are because of their designs, comment to let me know what you think about it
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nice drawing the earrings are nice they kind of remind me of pecha berries from Pokemon also may i ask what program you used to draw/color it?
thanks :3
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