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Page 3 of Red the Paladin Against the Queen of the Star-Monsters, featuring (although not on this particular page) the OC created by pumpmonger

if you compare this finished version with the rough version (Red comic - Page 3 WIP ), you'll see a couple of changes I've made in the layout: in Panel 1, a better pose for Demitros as he hurls his spear at Kallaton; in Panel 2, a more interesting angle on Kallaton. Panels 4 and 5 are also improvements over the repetitive close-ups of Demitros and Kallaton respectively. (And I added a line of dialogue to Panel 2.)

You can read the previous pages here:

Red - page 1

Red - page 2

and see the first 11 pages in rough form in my scraps .

(and if you haven't yet, check out the poster I made for the story: Red - movie poster )

Description
Page 3 of Red the Paladin Against the Queen of the Star-Monsters, featuring (although not on this particular page) the OC created by pumpmonger

if you compare this finished version with the rough version (Red comic - Page 3 WIP ), you'll see a couple of changes I've made in the layout: in Panel 1, a better pose for Demitros as he hurls his spear at Kallaton; in Panel 2, a more interesting angle on Kallaton. Panels 4 and 5 are also improvements over the repetitive close-ups of Demitros and Kallaton respectively. (And I added a line of dialogue to Panel 2.)

You can read the previous pages here:

Red - page 1

Red - page 2

and see the first 11 pages in rough form in my scraps .

(and if you haven't yet, check out the poster I made for the story: Red - movie poster )