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It appears that Jennifer has gone through all five stages of Coffee Use:  theoatmeal.com/comics/caffeine

Thanks for Pory for the edits.
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PorygonV [2014-09-09 02:31:11 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I know we're all busy people, but here's some quick-fixes.

Panel 4, Amber: Break the sentence into two, end the first with a question mark.
Panel 5, Amber: Last line needs punctuation.

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davidfoxfire In reply to PorygonV [2014-09-09 03:51:05 +0000 UTC]

And I'll correct it asap

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davidfoxfire In reply to PorygonV [2014-09-09 03:49:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the correction.  I'll do better next time

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