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Published: 2007-03-25 04:35:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 2891; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 30
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Description I'd like to thank all of you for the right spelling on Kigurumi, and I do hope I spelled it right then.

Part of me wanted to tell more of the transformation process for the kig characters--and someone wanted me to do more such transformations in this scene--but Pippkin's thoughts and ethics (Yes, he has ethics) won out.

Once again I get the feeling that I should be writing a series on Scarlet.

Deviation edited for Text Corrections
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Comments: 12

DreadedOne131 [2014-11-15 21:42:41 +0000 UTC]

Wow!  They wanted to put that suit on Melody!  Who are the bad guys in charge of this lab? 8O

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AzabacheSilver [2014-08-15 18:08:35 +0000 UTC]

Transformed into Sailor Scouts xD
They did plan some bad things, but I guess this is better than getting rid of them in some way!

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Relee [2007-03-27 16:13:00 +0000 UTC]

Well it's true that I would have enjoyed more details of the transformation process but you draw what you wanna draw. ^.^

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davidfoxfire In reply to Relee [2007-03-27 17:58:49 +0000 UTC]

Like I said, I'll be able to put in more details when I make it a text story.

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Relee In reply to davidfoxfire [2007-03-28 15:10:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh I must have missed that! You're going to make it a text story huh? That's great!

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davidfoxfire In reply to Relee [2007-03-28 17:22:46 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. I have the feeling that the text format (or an illustrated story) would be a better format for me to work with. No constraints with the page or strip dimensions here.

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Relee In reply to davidfoxfire [2007-03-29 17:17:05 +0000 UTC]

An illustrated story is pretty good, especially with a sensual style. Sometimes a text description of a costume or an event or a process can really be helped by a picture next to it.

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davidfoxfire In reply to Relee [2007-03-29 17:58:47 +0000 UTC]

Such is my intention. Keep your eyes on my account for further developments.

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Hyakureiki [2007-03-26 18:43:45 +0000 UTC]

"Of course, I'd do that to all kids, but specially her" Taken out of context, that would be a very creepy line.

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davidfoxfire In reply to Hyakureiki [2007-03-26 22:02:47 +0000 UTC]

I'll rewrite that part too. Again, as soon as I can.

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mimi-na [2007-03-25 05:23:47 +0000 UTC]

Couple of corrections:
The word is 'discontent', not miscontent.
Also, Cockney Londoners do not say 'aye', that's Northern.

Best to just have him saying 'yeah'.

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davidfoxfire In reply to mimi-na [2007-03-25 21:39:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for letting me know

I'll make the corrections as soon as possible.

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