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Published: 2006-12-16 05:33:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 2423; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 21
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Continuing my experimenting with my style, and that I heard enough P and M from my audience, I'm now attempting to make Pippkin's on bubble speech without the accent. He'll still use the terms though, can't be British without it.Related content
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Wow, looks like these hunters are taking Scarlet down 8O
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Hello Dave, been a while, you've really improved on your storyline ^^ love it
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Thanks. Wait til you see what I did in Lost Boy Found. Provided you're interested in helping me proofread it.
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i would if i could, but i will be leaving for the no internet zone AKA "home" on the 2nd
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<.<... It wouldn't be that much of a problem if Pipkin got sauced X3! (Just kidding! I know it's a semi-Disney-Esque cartoon... Sides <.< I don't think Scar would deal to well with a drunkie.) Anyways! Good work!
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Well, since I'm not 3.5 pieces left to go until I can say that I've written the whole book (I hope to get past that milestone this week, a week before the deadline of the 31st 
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<.< In my personal experience it's better to write out how it sounds. Example for a Brittish Guy:
Oi! Wah say yew ahn me go ou' ahn settle this heah lil issue!
...>__> Ok I like Yangus! Screw you!! >.<
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Heh.
That accents so strong, you'd make Pippin sound like the lead singer of The Toy Dolls.
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If I do that, I'd really have people wanting my hide.
What I'd do now is something like . . .
Pippkin: Oi! What say you an' me go out an' settle this hear little . . . issue.
That, and Yangus is gay for the Hero, whoever his name is called
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I like the accent better here...it's hard to capture the nuances of an accent with text, and even harder to decipher in the context of a comic so I like the level of accent here.
Otherwise, lookin' forward to what happens next
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I think I realised that problem. It's definitely something I need to work on and study.
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As long as you're going to keep Pippkin's 'Britishisms', remember it's 'mum' or 'mummy', not 'mama'.
So the sound of a door opening can ONLY mean 'OMG SCAR'S BEING ATTACKED'?....
huh?
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Can't front logic like that.
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Understood. Now that's two typos to correct when I get back home from my parent's apartment.
Over the phone internet sucks.
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And everyone was Kung-Fu Biting!
>__>;... Yep. S'all I got.
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What do you expect from Scarlet getting jumped.
Her fangs can crit for 6d8 damage.
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b-cuz eye lik the response I get
{Evil Laugh}
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It makes me cry with sad, it does.
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For some reason, that's the response I like
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David, you sadistic bastard.
Have you no shame? ;_;
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"Fisty"?
I think you mean "feisty."
And I'm not familiar with the phrase "getting pear-shaped."
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Thanks for letting me know. I'll correct it as soon as I can.
And I believe that some of my brit fans can tell you what that phrase means. I think an American version would be "Nutking Futz" or "SNAFU"
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Does anybody really use "Snafu" anymore?
Also, I'll have to go back ad try and re-read as to those guys that are apparently now fighting Scarlet, because i have no idea what's going on.
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meh on 'Snafu,' check out the next page comming up so that I can pull my butt out of his hole. I've done it before.
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