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Published: 2013-10-22 15:52:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 6312; Favourites: 323; Downloads: 91
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I like how the color of her skin goes from pink to blue. Very interesting combination
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Lovely! You obviously paid attention to details and it show! I love the pattern on her shirt.
I don't know if it's the perspective or something but the legs look a bit too short to me. But that's the only thing I can critique.
Everything else look perfect!
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Thank you! 
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not sure if anyone pointed this out yet, but the arrow is on the wrong side of the bow itself. the arrow should be put on the outer side of the bow, no matter which hand you use to shoot
apart from that, well, nothing to critique at all ^^ your paintings are outstanding
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I had no idea. Thank you for pointing that out! 
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Really nice composition! I love her outfit and the great detail on the branch.
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I'm glad you like them!
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you are welcome! ^^
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i really love the colors You've used, especially the warm browns on her cloth
and the expression on her face is kewl too!
the only thing that bothers me a little bit is the leaves on the upper left corner. they could have been less "edgy" and dark, because my eyes can't decide at first glance which is closer to me: the bow or the leaves :>
other than that it's nice job! ^^
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The bow is supposed to be closer, but I wanted to kinda blend it in with the leaves and create some sort of lost edge there... 
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i see!
well, it's Your art in the end, so do as You please
and You're welcome!
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I really like the tones used for her skin, it's quite dynamic!
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This is beautiful. I love her pose and the colors chosen. My favorite part is her face, her nose and cheeks are a little red and her eyes look sad, almost as if she's been crying or is fighting back tears. It adds a possibly backstory for me, which I love. If I had to give any criticism I'd just say as you move away from her face things look less finished. I think her face should be a focal point, but I guess it feels like it's a little out of balance with how undetailed the rest of her body is. But overall it's a wonderful piece!
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Very interesting point of you. I wanted to establish a strong visual hierarchy in this piece, but maybe it came out too abrupt... Either way, thank you very much for commenting.
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The pose and brushwork are amazing, but I feel like her right leg has some minor foreshortening issues. My roommate says the thigh may be a bit short or the knee is under-defined. It may help to add a little more color or light to it?
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I was having some second thoughts about that leg, too... Thank you for the feedback!
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amazing pose, style, details everything, maybe her nose seems a little too red but still awasome artwork
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Yeah I went a bit overboard with the colors... 
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You are very welcome.
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Awesome !
I love the colors and the girl is soo pretty yet I wouldn't want to meet her face to face... 
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Thank you! I can see why...
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I really really love background colors (and picture in general
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I always like a good female archer picture ^_^.
I like the attention to detail here, like the quiver at her hip, instead of behind her back. And how the bowstring is nearly invisible.
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