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Published: 2010-07-04 19:52:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 1122; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 22
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It's real sloppy, I know. >.< it's because it's a colored sketch.
(I can't draw guns* ... >_> I'll post the lines as well. in scraps. I know the shotgun looks a little awkward, hanging in the air. It's mor like in mid-swing. it's on a strap. if you can make it out. it's black. <_< like everything else. >.<Sketch:
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I like this!!!!
One tip: when you are working with guns one of the most important rules is that your finger should never be on the trigger unless your sights are on target and you have made the decision to shoot.
The girl in your photo should not have her finger on the trigger because she is not aware of where the weapon is pointing and is not ready to fire.
I would draw the trigger finger along the slide. (along the side of the top part)
Safe gun handling is cool!! Tell the girl in black! 
I like that your character is left handed!
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XD Yeah I know the safety rules. I've shot before. XP But it looked cooler to me with her finger on the trigger. When I tried it the other way it looked like the gun could fall out of her hand at any second. So, it looked less awkward this way. ^^ I would NEVER do that if I were really holding a gun. knowing me i'd shoot my foot.
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Hello there Kayla. I have decided to stop being ignorant and annoying, cause frankly, it was getting boring. And because no matter how much you hate SS, no matter how much that whore screwed up our relationship, and no matter how many of my friends are about to die, I still love you.
first of all the coloring is really pretty. Your use of the blues on the hair and skin is awesome. I usually don't use light blue for shadows, but here you made it work :D. I'd have gone for maybe a slightly darker blue on the hair, but that's optional. There's really not much to say on the coloring, since you did pretty awesome there.
I really like the way you did the hands/wrists this time yay! ^^ While i know pretty much nothing about guns, but the pistol...revolver...um...the little one...her fingers look a tad awkward and disproportional to her hand.
Last thing: Right sleve. I assume the jacket is supposed to be big on her, in which case, rather than looking blown up all around her arm, it should be closer to her skin at the top, with long kinda draping, for lack of a better word, folds. And down at her wrist, where the tighter cuff is, it would kinda...flare out? am i making sense at all? That's where it would look poofy n stuff. Or something. Hope you know what i mean cause i think i worded that bad...
Now, as un-pretty as this looks, without the nifty critique box...you silly button... here you go 
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Thank you. XP Now. was that so hard? I found it surprising the only thing you picked at were her sleeves and fingers. >.> Her fingers, I was pretty proud of those. But I can never see the issues. And her sleeves, no. The jacket isn't supposed to be big on her. The reason it's not closer to her skin at the top and is bunched up is because her arm is more vertical than anything. And it wouldn't match with the rest of the picture if it hung down. it'd look... e.e awkward. I thought I needed to improve more on the coloring of the pistols and the BG. Lineart I suppose would have made it so much better, but, the coloring is blotchy, isn't it?
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idk i'm just weird. I love the coloring.
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Lol. Well thanks. That's good to know.
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I really like it. It's a lot different from your usual style, but it's nice.
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Thanks. >3< could I bother you for a critique?
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Can I do it tomorrow? I'm in a bit of...a lot of shock and...well, life pretty much sucks monkey balls at the moment.
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Ah, just forget about it then.
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nuuu.
where's the crit button D:
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well there should beeee
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=_= just write it here.
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I don't care. o-o just do it.
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Oooh, I see the strap! This is a pretty cool coloured sketch, at that. ^^
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To be honest i forgot to color the strap XDD
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that's why it's so hard to see.
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Hardly surprising, that.
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