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Published: 2014-11-13 05:08:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 1886; Favourites: 88; Downloads: 0
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keep your eyes forward;you weren't meant to watch what you're
walking away from
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This makes me anxious, and I'm sure that's the point. Wonderful work.
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Wow. This is a fantastic haiku. 
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thank you so much
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Welcome!
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This is difficult to read. The truth and honesty is brutal and clear. It hurts to read and acknowledge. But why do I feel lighter, after having read it?
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This is heartbreaking and evoking and so real and it almost sets me back to a place where when walking away felt a lot more like drowning.
Stunning piece!
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Wow, thank you so much! It really means a lot knowing you can connect to my work
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Compelling and stunningly human! Great poem
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I've seen you on the front page a couple times and I must say, you've got some creative stuff! I mean, I can't relate to all of it, but this poem especially is just something nice to think about when you have a bad experience. Good job!
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Thank you very much
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Blah I love you omg you're amazing agh and this is perfect and omg just wow
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aww 
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Hi there! I've chosen you as the 144th person for my 200 Comments Project Challenge. Basically I'm giving comments to 200 different people in a time frame within a week
I can kinda relate to this as sometimes I had feelings towards someone and they have kinda moved on from me. And they expect me to do the same and I try my very best to keep on looking forward. I really like the language and phrases you have used - it does give a positive message and I admire that
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What an honor! Thank you for the comment and for sharing how you relate, it adds a new depth to to the poem knowing that someone has shared the same feelings
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You're very welcome! I really like it when I feel I can relate to a poem 
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This is perfect. Very true and inspirational.
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thank you very much, I'm glad you can relate.
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Do you get your inspiration from oaklungs ?
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No, though I admire her as a poet, my inspiration always comes from personal feelings and experiences. If you're referring to the "." as a title that's just how I separate my finished and unfinished works. Things with a title are complete, those with a "." are waiting to be revised or only the first bit of what I plan to develop
Thank you, it's a hard feeling to deal with but writing always helps me stay strong and positive. Β
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I'm not actually running from anything and it's laughable, considering "I" would probably catch myself in the end
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