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Published: 2014-09-03 04:58:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 1037; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 0
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Weep not for meif I should leave
before the break of day.
If I must go,
this much I’ll know –
I’m just not meant to stay.
Weep not for you,
or what you knew,
if I’m not to be found.
The world will turn.
There’s much to learn.
For better things we’re bound.
Weep not for us
if, in the dust,
you find it hard to see.
Eyes closed at night,
within your sight
is where I’ll always be.
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Comments: 9
nice rhymes and meter. better than most, to be sure
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Hi, Sean here from We-Poets FINALLY stopping by with the critique you requested.
Wow, zero critique needed!!! Just read it and it's perfect! Awesome poem! Great job!
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Thank you so much!!!
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