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dbxgokai — Pacifist Rebertha (Undertale OC V.2)
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Published: 2016-01-22 05:47:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 789; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 0
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Digital versions of Pacifist Reb in casual (Waterfall) and Royal Guard (Hotlands) outfits.I worked REALLY REALLY hard on this one so I would appreciate commentary from those of you that view this. Please, tell me what you think! I would love to hear some (constructive) critiques! Please, don't let this piece just fade away into the back of DA. I will be very disappointed if I don't get any comments...so....please....say something.....ANYTHING.....even if its completely and utterly random. I would appreciate it.
Info on Rebertha: fav.me/d9nnezl
(made by me; Undertale belongs to Toby Fox)
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Should I be Nate Hawws(skeleton) or Ckase(Leviathan/Human genetic experiment)?
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Lol whichever you want!
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I think I'll be BOTH lol! Let's start!
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((Once upon a time, there were sisters....
These two sisters, much with other monster children, were children of the war between humans and monsters. Little Undyne and her sister Rebertha had grown closer than any siblings had done before. They loved each other and made sure to keep each other safe (although both were big troublemakers). When years had passed, and monsters were trapped underground, Undyne decided to join in the fight by becoming a part of the Royal Guard. Her sister, however, didn't wish to fight alongside her. They argued and fought.....
Eventually, they believed that the best solution was to split up....never seeing each other.....for years....and years........forgetting either even existed.......
Now, Rebertha lives alone in a tiny section of Waterfall that's tucked away, secretly hidden, with nothing there but a bench and an echo flower to keep herself company. She lives out her life "happily" by thieving away all the stuff she needs. She is happy..........?.........but alone.....
But soon....that will begin to change.....))
[Nice build up, huh? :3]
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((One day years after the monsters been released 4 different people from fantasile lived nearby, by the names of Bos, Victor, Ckase and Nate, all loners in life, waiting till somebody met them...someone by the name of Rebertha...they were told about her in legend but soon, the path will be clear... )) ((did I mess the story up? I think it was great XD))
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[Lol you did fine. XD]
Rebertha: *slides open hidden bunker door and climbs out* *yawns and stretches* mmmm...another mornin' in da underground.........welp! Oughta make it a good one! *pulls out a stolen breakfast sandwich and lies across the bench, staring up at the ceiling stones as they sparkle like stars*.........hmm........*takes a bite out of the sandwich*
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((Something in the water glows bright, kind of like an eel))
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!!!
((Rebertha stops eating....her ear-fin twitches at the sound of moving water))
Rebertha: *almost demanding*.....who's there....?
((She starts summoning her magic hook and chain))
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???: I see you're alone? I best stay in the water cuz I don't want to die due to that... *Smirks, showing sharp, shark-like teeth*
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((Rebertha's eyes sharpen))
Rebertha: *gets up and looks at the water walking slowly* I asked ye a question m8.......WHO ARE YOU. *she holds a tight grip on her chain as she looks at the water, a deep tiger-like growling coming from her chest, showing off her large shark teeth as well*
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???:My name's Ckase
((comes up to shore showing human-like torso, and giant tail with glowing stones on the side))
Ckase:I was injured considering I'm an experiment...
((Covers bloody arm with hand))
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((Rebertha looks at Ckase, confused slightly as to what he is (human or monster), what happened to him as well as how he managed to find her))
Rebertha: *continues looking at him in confusion but then decides to un-summon her weapon and help him* I don't kno how u managed tuh find my living quarters m8, but I'll ask questions late'a. U got quite the bloody arm there...............here......*removes his hand and covers the wound with her hand, as both her shark fin and hand glow gold*
Give it a sec......
*the wound begins healing itself before his eyes*
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Ckase:thanks for healing me... I found you after the barrier broke, I could pick up your scent. My arm's bloody beacuse... n-nevermind, I'm an experiment, they took human DnA and combined it with a Schroch Leviathan, so I'm technically a monster... ((holds my head with my hand))
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Rebertha: so...you were once a human....huh.......interestin'........*walks over to bench, grabbing sandwich and starts eating it*
......................
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wait a sec......
*slightly choking on sandwich while talking*
*coughs* HOW DO-....HOW DO YOU KNOW MY SCENT!? WHO SENT YOU TO FIND ME? WAS IT UNDYNE?!
wait...she wouldn't do that.....she's not a huge fan of humans.....then again......the human did break the barrier.........hmmm.......
BUT HOW DO YOU KNOW ME? I MADE SURE THAT NO ONE KNEW OF ME! WHO SENT YOU!?
*tail swings swiftly from side to side*
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Ckase:I can smell blood in water... you're scent was way different, and no I was not human before, I was born this way. I was sent by nobody, I saw this person named "Rebertha" on a hieroglyph in fantasile, she look exactly like you. But of course I was in a stupid tank when I saw it, I picked up your scent from that.
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Rebertha: *looks at him even more confused* a....hieroglyph....?..........wh....why am I.........in a.......
*takes a deep breath to calm herself*
Ok. So you aren't human, can somehow smell my blood in water, and for some forsaken reason...I'm in a hieroglyph.......
M8, I don't know who you're looking for but...I can't say it's me....*sits down on bench* I'm just a lone wolf tryin' tuh survive on what's left in the underground.....there's prolly another Reb you got mixed up with.....*continues eating*
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((Looks away, completely mesmerized))
Ckase:m-my....tracking...n-never...f-fails.............I CAME HERE TO SEE THE LEGENDARY REBERTHA AND I CAME FOR NOTHING!!!!!!
((Dives in the water swimming furiously and scrapes arm on sharp rock))
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Rebertha: uhhh..... k....kid...? O.o ey! EY EY EY! *swims after him* Hold on now! You're gunna hurt cha self!! *grabs him and pulls him out of the water* Geezus m8. You're gunna give me a 'eartattack! And I'm the Rebertha you're looking for but what I don't understand is why am I so legendary? I'm pretty much a hermit and a thief.....so....why then? Why am I legendary? What am I known for?
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[I'm waiting for you to reply]
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[Sorry I have work in a few minutes so this will be my last response till later]
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Ckase:it said that you would be the one to............... ((tilts head)) save fantasile from...."chaos" ahead.... I could read it beacuse... only aquatic beings can read it....
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Rebertha:.....strange.....I don't even know what "fantasile" is......why me then......hmmm.......*finishes eating her sandwich*
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Ckase:fantasile is my home, my friend's just up the stream, he's from there too, want to meet him? He's fishing.
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Rebertha: *shoots a glare, gets slightly defensive* ............Your friend is "Fishing".....huh?
"Fishing" for what? (= n
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Ckase
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Rebertha: *suspicious glare* ....Uh huh........sure.....let's see this...."human" then.......*follows Ckase*
Ya kno, you're a strange monster.......honestly, if you caught me in a bad mood.........m8....
I might have hurtcha for makin' that comment about "fishin'"........bein' a fish myself.........but I understand now ur talkin' small swimmas....meal fishes.........but in all honesty I don't think I've seen any salmon 'round 'ere.......heh, if I knew there were, they would 'ave gone extinct. Teh.
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Ckase:we're here.
((A man with dark blue hair, kinda like Ckase's is sticking his head in the water, with yellow glowing eyes and sharp teeth))
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Rebertha: .........*looks at Ckase* human huh? *gives him that "really?" look*
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Ckase:he's human at day, and he's like a dog XD
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???:sorry this isn't my best presentation
((He pulls his head out of the water, showing his human face))
???:I'm Bos....Bos Tazuki....
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Rebertha: I'm Rebertha. But do call me "Reb".
((Rebertha contemplates if what is actually hapening.....actually happening. She feels the need to stay but also to leave. She thinks that maybe she should call her friend Sans and tell him what's happening just in case something goes wrong.....))
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[Still waiting XD] [Sensei come back XD]
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[There will be times when I work and I won't be able to respond right away so please have patience with me 
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[Waiting for reply again]
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Bos:I am very sorry for showing you that....
((He turns his head, hiding his face))
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Rebertha: Oh no no! It's okay! It's fine! No need tuh hide your face m8. *places hand on his shoulder* we just got off on the wrong foot, that's all.
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Bos:I was this way ever since I got infected from a flower, shouldn't have gone close...
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Reb: A....flower?.....*thinks about Flowey* what happened?
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[Sorry that I'm impatient, I'm very hyped and I like this rp]
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Bos:I was 11, specifically 15 years ago, I was exploring a cave, there was a purple rose.....as soon as I took a whiff of that pollon I was in a coma for 12 hours, at night I became....a-a.....n-nighmare.....
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Rebertha: *thinks about how wrong she was to assume it was Flowey's fault* o-oh....I....uh.....hmmm.....wow uh....I'm sorry.....uh....
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Bos:Sorry if I caused any trouble, I'm gonna see Nate.... ((Bos' s legs crack into a wolf-like manner and dashes off))
Ckase:I'm going home, maybe you can meet Nate on your own. ((Swims off with back fin slowly fading))
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Rebertha: *stands there alone* .......-_-........this has been......a strange day so far......*walks back to her home* maybe I should see how Sans is doin'..........nah, he's prolly asleep........I'll just go back home and relax my mind a bit......=u= yeah.....reeellllaaaxxx......uwu
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((A few hours later...))
???:Kahaha.....Y-sure this is it? *cracks knuckles*
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Rebertha: *snores* zzzz........ZZZZZZ......ZZZ - CHK! Hmm?.....*eyes still closed, ears twitch*
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???:I thought Sans was meeting me here!! ((Makes a deep growling noise, and slams fist on bench)) OHHH MY HAND.....COULD'A BROKE A BONE!
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Rebertha: *wakes up automatically, eyes sharp, teeth bared, deeply and angrily growling* EY! WHATCHA F***IN' PROBLEM!? IM SLEEPIN' ERE!
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