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Published: 2009-08-01 11:05:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 227; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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"I'm very proud of you." My father always spoke gently. He was afraid of yelling. "I didn't think you would make it to this day." He laughed."Thanks, pop," I said. Getting ready in the mirror, putting on what was left of my foundation, I saw the door open to the bathroom. Zoey walked out, holding her bouquet in one hand and her dress in the other.
"Damn. That bathroom is rancid!" she cried. My dad turned around to scold her for swearing in a church. I kept looking on in the mirror, at the bored bridesmaids. They were all ready to go, wishing that I was, too.
I sighed and put down my blush brush. "I'm ready."
"Are you sure?" Katherine asked me, only to be hushed by the other bridesmaids.
And Anthony walked in. Everyone stared at him as he walked towards me, sitting in front of the vanity.
"It's bad luck for the groom to see the bride before the wedding."
He held a staring contest with me in the mirror. "I don't need luck. I know this is going to work out. You are the one." Way to make yourself into a cheeseball, Anthony.
"How sweet," I said. He came closer. And closer. And closer. And then he was next to my face in the mirror. And then I couldn't see the mirror. Just his face. Just his nose. Just the inside of my eyelids as my lips were pressed to his.
The bridesmaids and my father were still busy chit-chatting and talking about the open bar at the reception. I wouldn't be surprised if no one noticed Anthony even walking in. As fast as he came in, he was gone. Maybe that wasn't even real. Either way, I got up. I was finally ready to go down the aisle, even with the bad luck.
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Comments: 14
EngagingRomance [2009-08-08 04:19:34 +0000 UTC]
See when i tell stories theyre mostly about our vags going on adventures
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EngagingRomance In reply to ddrcoke21 [2009-08-08 05:40:18 +0000 UTC]
i should make one now since im soo deprived of sleep.
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simplyprose [2009-08-06 01:11:55 +0000 UTC]
Cute story indeed.
There isn't much to say since it's so short: the pacing is good and I like that the word 'kiss' is never used, because we're given a much better idea of what's going on from her perspective the way you've written it.
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Vvulf [2009-08-04 05:10:53 +0000 UTC]
lol I just got back from a wedding actually. Cute story.
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glenninacrypt [2009-08-01 15:54:18 +0000 UTC]
I don't know why this made me think about
my young friend who got married right
in front of the Castle at Disneyland.....
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glenninacrypt In reply to ddrcoke21 [2009-08-02 01:18:30 +0000 UTC]
Yes, He said that it was Awesome! He is my friend "Jarrod Morgan", back
in California, where I moved from! He and his cute new bride are "Hard-Core"
Disneyland fans! They got special permission to have his Weeding there!
He said it was quick, but "Wowie-Zowie"! I wish I knew about it! I would
have attended! I hope that "it" Lasts longer than his first one! He's only 23.
I don't know...they were married by "Micky Mouse", for Christ-sake! Ya know?
Hells-Bells! "My Parental-Units" were Married on Halloween, for God's-sake!
October, 31, 1954, and "THAT" didn't work-out! Jerrod said that "Goofy"
carried the G.D. ring! Jarrod got a big kick out-of-it! He wanted to be Married
at "The Haunted Mansion", (his favorite attraction) but "they" said NO!
Who would have Married them? The "Ghost-Host? Jarrod and "Sara" both work
in "Corporate" for the "Guitar Center"! That's where they met! I tell you this
Because he can get you anything they sell, Half-off! I would do that for you
because I'm one of your "Biggest Fans"! Just let me know...Gush, Gush, Gush!...
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ddrcoke21 In reply to glenninacrypt [2009-08-02 03:06:59 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha. I don't play guitar but thanks for the offer.
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glenninacrypt In reply to ddrcoke21 [2009-08-02 03:23:03 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome! That's not the only thing they sell! They have enough stuff to
cross a Rabbi's eyes! Almost anything electronic, except TV's. They have so much
stuff, that Jarrod's main job is to travel the Continental United States to keep
all of their inventory computers working correctly! He says it's "Never-ending!"
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glenninacrypt In reply to ddrcoke21 [2009-08-02 07:05:13 +0000 UTC]
Well Mr. Steve, the offer is always open to you. Who knows, one day you may need
a good sound system with powerful amp's. They have em. You may need a pair of
self-amped speakers. They have em. Or you may want a digital recording board!
They have em. You may even want a fancy digital synth Keyboard. They have em.
You'll probably want a programmable/automated "stage" color lighting system for those
Dances you want to "put-on", example: "Disco-Night" effects! They have em. Erie Effect
"Fog-Machines". They have em. Microphones of all types for that wonderful
"Singing-Voice" of yours. They have em. "Disc-jocky" mixing boards of all types
and sizes! They have em. Computer programs for recording, so many kinds that it
would cross your eyes! They have em. All kinds of Drum-sets! They have em........
Quality Kaireoki Machines of all sizes and their software! They have em.
Get the picture? The Name: "Guitar Center" is vary misleading!
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