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Published: 2008-10-04 03:00:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 138; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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I can't find you anymoreSo tell me where you're hiding out
Tell me your secret fantasies
Of what you're dying for.
Can't you feel my heat
That's pulsing from my hand?
Eyes that burn like fiery flames
That are only brown and blue.
I don't feel the magic
Like I did the other night.
When we were young and sweet,
Naive and curious.
Is there anything
That you're dying for?
Anything that you really need?
Do you want it from me?
Or did it only count
That one night?
Just a simple test subject
Willing to be experimented upon.
I love your scent
Your smile,
Your burning passion
And wild drive.
Only a boy like you would
Understand a boy like me.
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Comments: 4
I got bored and ended up drifting back to your poems again. Lulz. First... I just want to say, as I have stated before, how impressed I am. Your command of the English language is really phenomenal (especially for your age), and what really gets me is how you are able to truly embody through your writing each character for whom you are portraying. I believe that is what separates poetic greatness from poetic mediocrity. You have a gift
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*shrugs*
Normaly I'm not one for poety, or even short stories for that matter. But I kinda stumbled across this after poking though a the poety setion for an hour or so just clicking on things that looked interesting.
I could go off with varying bits of praise, but I get the feeling that would come off sounding kinda pretentious. So I'll just say that you wrote something that appealed to me, and that in and of itself is really rare.
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