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ddrcoke21 — Cutting Corners
Published: 2009-04-02 22:10:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 107; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description Smile, smile, see your face.
Never looking in compacts.
Mirrors never make you
Look better now.

It's hard to tell
When you don't have grace.
You're walking with elegance,
I wonder how.

Silk, silk entwined with lace,
Makes a sort of weave.
You'll never win the stiletto race.
You're feeling red and rue.

In your purse, you carry mace.
On the corner, never new.
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Comments: 6

AberrationLust [2009-04-04 19:49:54 +0000 UTC]

How did you know my parents said I could carry mace.

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glenninacrypt [2009-04-03 01:15:26 +0000 UTC]

YES!

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ddrcoke21 In reply to glenninacrypt [2009-04-03 01:45:18 +0000 UTC]

Yes?

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glenninacrypt In reply to ddrcoke21 [2009-04-03 03:35:23 +0000 UTC]

I just wanted to keep it short like you do! I'm always too "wordy"! Plus a while ago, I asked you a simple question; and all I got from you, was...Um.

And "yes" your poem was very cool! I really liked it a lot! You're amazing Mr. Steve...
I guess I don't get away with just a "one" word comment like you! I have the feeling that my long comments to you; kinda Pisses you off!
At the risk of sounding "Flirtatious" I don't have your "skill" to use one-word comments anyway! I tried...

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ddrcoke21 In reply to glenninacrypt [2009-04-03 19:22:14 +0000 UTC]

I don't like to use a lot of words online.

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glenninacrypt In reply to ddrcoke21 [2009-04-03 22:41:31 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I get it! Actually that's smart.
I like learning from the "best".......

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