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Published: 2010-05-26 03:57:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 107; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description J'ai attendu longtemps pour toi.
Nous aimons les uns les autres.
C'est très simple.

Je t'adore, m'aimes-tu aussi?
Je pense à toi la nuit
Et mon oreiller sent tes cheveux.

C'est très simple, je crois.
Nous devons le faire fonctionner,
Ensemble.

Je ne vais pas faire cela tout seul,
Si toi penses que je suis,
Toi pouves marcher jusqu'à chez toi.
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Comments: 6

ikarios [2010-05-30 20:18:11 +0000 UTC]

Translation? I used google languages but I don't have that much faith in its accuracy. Writing a poem in another language is challenging! Good job, I love it.

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ddrcoke21 In reply to ikarios [2010-06-01 00:29:31 +0000 UTC]

I'll post a translated version.

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Friction-Hipster [2010-05-26 03:58:18 +0000 UTC]

Je t'adore.

...sorry. Grammar Police even in French.

But not bad. I wrote a poem in French... wasn't as good as this though. 'Cause it was Frenglish.

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ddrcoke21 In reply to Friction-Hipster [2010-05-26 04:00:17 +0000 UTC]

I noticed some other grammar mistakes and fixed some of them. Thanks for pointing that out!

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Friction-Hipster In reply to ddrcoke21 [2010-05-26 21:58:56 +0000 UTC]

Wow, someone who doesn't hate me for grammar 8D You're welcome!

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ddrcoke21 In reply to Friction-Hipster [2010-05-27 21:06:19 +0000 UTC]

Oh no, trust me. I'm the same way.

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